【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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2 a1 m9 Y7 h! k我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 ]4 W) _0 \! j8 S* XWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 j9 h: `7 x0 iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 P/ T& q3 U7 K6 z, g, vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 p! z( m: v! v' |; e' H5 _Why is it so difficult to express?
; W+ J5 I: i7 Q* t8 b9 |% X3 \/ @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: h8 S- w2 d' R% [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" t4 k0 v% Q7 m7 A; FCan I entrust it to you?
2 y) Q; M3 r; x8 uEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; X( M1 e3 H+ u/ C4 [7 H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% }2 l  ]0 ]- h4 Z& G7 \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; \0 M6 P2 H1 r2 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, S: G/ |+ T, y* Z$ X7 e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" J. d5 Q+ s6 p3 I: n7 R. ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ l" ?0 _: n, d1 c# T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 ^3 M/ X9 A' w+ I! v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: W& W+ G% z$ s8 F, q! [6 k* a2 w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* Y: `& ]; }; g8 s! ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ T, I  g  m( y3 b* Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 ?. _" g& I4 p2 k9 l- Z9 t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. I4 ^* v3 R* V$ Y  \; k<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 x: p" g; q* H  K" t4 k, _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 S8 |$ Y# h" O" {$ L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" F. [& E; n! k<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ w2 R1 U$ p: Y5 g5 p0 g5 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ S5 u% Z# W# L7 h- h  r/ l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- R7 F0 z/ ?' O. A$ T7 ^# w: n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! B7 Z, L+ P+ G4 _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 w/ }/ d+ D; q3 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% P; ~7 m  E0 z/ j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, p9 @3 t& `+ q0 v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! d* ^) }' r( r/ G5 q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 f6 d. G. I; Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 N7 M) c5 z& Z& \3 H& V<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' n1 N  N. Z: u+ |<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' y5 L% A8 W  Z5 I5 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! v& `: m0 _# y' ~& y  n- y$ C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 _9 `( B3 P9 w; l4 ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* _( i, P! H  X0 g5 x# d" O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) o% k8 ?9 |' ]- ~; ^5 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' Y4 x8 j5 M/ C1 O0 w9 n# {5 k8 j* g4 Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: c- A& @& a6 M* Y2 W* Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 }+ E% D% r/ ^. x# O0 C9 P# m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 D9 N) {0 M" t* w; S7 ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ }1 g" r/ T5 L7 a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ @5 s, f; v" E+ [ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. G5 s; N2 x8 e2 s& Y- V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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! e* ~6 n6 ]" S' z: K: N$ B/ x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% h2 X! J, o0 D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>