【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( Z, q/ B& Z. t3 _- }5 z: N我另将歌词附在此。
& ]+ O  B+ l7 y3 ]. mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 R7 m; ]7 P, C6 q. I. i4 z! aI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 H' |& ^/ L1 w$ Z- G2 U$ u! `. x0 e; aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% L3 H2 R$ i) q6 }1 b, L  X$ h/ PWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 Z: q, _) x3 d( c; m0 S8 Y: d( XI want to confess that I love you,
4 I$ ]& @+ T6 n0 d7 \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  \  O: l& |3 W! dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; |0 X6 T. V. o$ i: \$ u: L  \Can I entrust it to you?
: O7 e2 D. g: ZEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 L" G" ]" ~. @" nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& {7 H! Y! u8 W0 N4 X# fCan I entrust it to you?
3 ?7 m7 `; Z8 `5 l4 s6 X0 R( ZEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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% {" t& u2 }$ L9 t# s* a5 n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. h) V, k, j  f0 O( G$ b. P* C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; d9 S) c+ v% t! N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% O$ _( N' R- b) Q: d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# b2 k$ Q9 p7 G( F) A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. ]; N* }% k6 e0 R8 @1 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ D( G; a: q2 G8 P5 x1 ~4 a( U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; n' Q" ^4 w# ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 ^( ]5 V6 _0 J! n% |  g0 H9 r! h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 q+ d7 W; R) [! m9 T& c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* x% H" a; w4 y! [* |3 \1 l/ C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* u! o8 y& N) ?<P>但我不会</P>
3 u+ {, r! j; q3 u+ V  C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" s; ^' B, ]% S* v! M! D' J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 n5 [! X; a9 P  I7 D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 F3 D  Z7 Z; r: _' C9 V$ @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 a6 o5 X9 z4 [$ }2 k: W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& {! e9 _0 Q: e1 |7 @" n4 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 p8 M" d* _' U4 L6 i7 n( r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( B( m: R3 _6 K% ^& S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 V) X6 S9 W3 D# n9 P) z# F<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: v" F: @- d. [' Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ Z1 T9 s+ R9 g) o$ j: @( r/ Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ x3 ~% w% a* `) E: B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 o4 ^  Q+ K3 M2 ?<P>But I never did </P>
% U: s9 T/ N% H<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. W9 G' e1 A* f+ R1 T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; T; l' S% z  X+ @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 F! [0 R3 {8 Z9 r7 E8 C+ y  x, h* i) ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. X3 u% r% [; k% T. V) \; b( h( c0 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" l; t% O  Q5 S6 c& }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 Y% c/ n. J7 ^! Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  a* F& x) i4 u0 m  C# Z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% x3 _) I* {1 y, n- L1 H% O. _& j3 h; L8 B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>