【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( g" _" u. I$ w6 F1 Z& ]3 `- bFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ g# @  H7 g- e- uI would probably know how you feel
+ a1 `5 I8 s' ]( KLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 R6 l1 }: S: o4 h# N! c/ rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 ~( R" Y2 p9 h& H/ @& a1 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 n  X, f3 E7 \4 P/ h# SCan I entrust it to you?
1 G; E0 Y- f: `Entrust my love within your heart
! s' n' E+ |. q7 G& N7 [' G- \Love… just the word love
% T; n& n. U+ x  d) F9 O) g" l% |2 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ ?8 X% e- [; g' p7 p6 c5 v- jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* Z  p) _% g$ ?" L2 H7 O/ UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ ~0 X/ R9 J, [7 g1 L3 cCan I entrust it to you?
) P! p1 [9 h% ~  BEntrust my love within your heart
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) V; T/ |. x& s( O[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- G+ x) i; W4 l9 g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# B8 ]& u' h4 I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: s2 D* N* W" ^. u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! p0 y% S7 |" h4 r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 S* g4 D! a* U. ]+ J<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! r; j3 t: r5 C; O9 y# L% [<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ X) r1 d$ P* E1 j) u3 |. g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 j. U5 d* p( g7 _5 W$ g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ `! q+ N9 E% w# G0 ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, F7 n2 [0 F9 e/ z( @) W) U2 p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: Y( ~0 L& ?" \# v% B, i' d5 Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# i/ o5 {8 w5 g) Y. [5 R% {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 h2 A1 u% V- S. S0 Y" x& j* p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- j8 u  P# i! \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* f( b: B8 `3 Z; Q8 R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* u2 a8 R; H) n. o) Q8 x) V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 q- m: E3 M# [6 F0 q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  e: _7 ?3 B- I2 H& m- u3 A<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 p8 p' Y) N* h3 w. r" m( H' d( R; g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 n7 h; S: b" r) @; _8 T" J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 J3 I2 x5 Z8 |% u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: d% {' S& J0 R. F1 ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) L- h, Q: O1 v. @9 b9 X4 `7 x  V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. ~& H# Z6 b" J# a% z  Z4 `; Z% F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* |9 s( ]6 F8 t. y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 n* a! j1 V5 ?4 [1 d5 v2 e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; T* P$ L9 D/ `+ r2 ^ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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. n) K+ c$ R9 f4 M0 R' V- n8 x$ F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# K6 d) a+ l  u; u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 \; L( f# V% Z+ X2 |3 R6 \) L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: f, j+ J; C8 @* u4 {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>