【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' O" l$ Q9 R; q0 K; tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ L0 i+ X# ^9 N; E8 [& NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' o0 Y' _6 v8 ^1 u) O% ^% zI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 ~# B  O3 x9 o- B% q# l* qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 B+ U8 z. z" C" h: ]  R9 I" jIf today isn’t too late,
& U1 K, X& M$ u  |3 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- i& l2 n& }) @9 F& xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" i% j, a# L3 o7 aEntrust my love within your heart
- O8 m, \7 c; @" b. j  a7 H% M- z8 ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 a* G% r1 G6 K# ~# J% vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' J. I7 v: n+ Z3 t* ?9 PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ |2 n% W7 I+ d5 t5 S6 @7 S: uCan I entrust it to you?
$ H1 D' o" M7 kEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& `& _6 m' s* A4 o/ S; w) w8 DEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* W8 ]: w, w" b3 ~7 z4 R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 K& m; ?- C4 G' c) e) ?1 O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ R+ B2 C% x# c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 |$ H0 a; Y# J6 s2 h, m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 ~! M3 `) u  }' n2 x$ Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 Z& [! k; P: n% k& q) i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 I# V. V6 w; y5 i& f7 z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! }0 k" g, p' l$ {0 I# L" N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 [* X8 d" ~. j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. p- M# l$ t  E. C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" A$ k7 O/ ~6 P- c2 r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, v- H% @/ s1 N$ d/ X' j0 ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ h. c1 m6 C$ n5 ~<P>但我不会</P>
* y5 U8 F9 ]& @<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( D$ q9 f: A% H6 w  M% U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- a, {3 G" W5 ~. K+ k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  D" G, i# k" T3 r- G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ x. y. X/ @2 _2 H6 n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ a3 f9 Y; x6 L" G1 V# @8 W# m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 Q, E& Q. D/ i* v  Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 c# h$ \1 n  T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% L$ S5 x; q  Y' n8 a; p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" R' W8 U3 Y: j2 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 E9 }/ \* S+ W; `0 X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 i5 d- z  [  Q$ d4 W: @; n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 m" u( @. v2 C5 n, _4 N4 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, n; C! a8 A( N  t9 g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' p: b% c" e; I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, l5 \: A+ D& U; l2 T, o5 I( p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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# Q# U, d, ~; U: g/ _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 H" B; I0 A/ m' ]  O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- p: y- s& i3 |* I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>