【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" \. M3 ~  c; a  u# N( i$ W/ @" F+ P我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, J1 ^8 X& T- q; }* [0 c) q( NFrom the first moment we met,
9 s" I# l7 N" J! }I already loved you with all my heart
) o+ J% [' d% d/ }0 T( T9 DWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 V# j( z- F2 b" J/ aWhy is it so difficult to express?
- O, }0 @- q, z5 Q6 {  zI want to confess that I love you,
8 E3 [2 l2 f9 U' k$ f4 c6 aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ U7 f# ?. ^% K2 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 L4 V' G- W. Q4 J0 jCan I entrust it to you?
& s' p1 p1 w& E0 REntrust my love within your heart
' y. M& d6 U, C2 K$ i5 dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 x8 |7 \# v+ g( GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" f# S, h$ P1 P9 p- zEntrust my love within your heart

+ Y$ \- Y" S: K1 r5 {# `5 N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  G9 X  B8 S& r% M3 p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; T& h- h% }  @# A1 W: i5 ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, M) d. K" H) a. U% }/ {9 v6 ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; V8 `6 w+ C1 K9 u% t3 @: ?! d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 M. X5 \5 ^# K" D* G  w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& D0 @& B3 g* o2 d; e0 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! G, M, ?  z, J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( {0 l3 K; z3 y- d4 P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- g; a- W, X2 m4 i4 B0 Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* W7 |$ s9 F7 |' V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' ?2 C6 x1 v7 V0 g$ A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  t! Y/ z; ^& m8 U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) S- m9 P) k1 ]# ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 P) j4 L/ B0 Q8 ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! k) x' P$ k9 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 T1 |% r) z8 A# j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 i' ]/ F" |' s: r# n; i# f- x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! x/ W# Z* J8 Y& e! z* k( K6 o. k& i<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: j% C8 a4 F8 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ J% w3 Q3 o( s& F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 s: u, |; k3 C, B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* w; G6 N8 a# }8 U- U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ ]0 [( T3 X; E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: V) N" H1 ~- R- A, A2 _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 j0 v- W* p) Y$ R4 n; g! P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 A+ t) o) ]& J' Y; J  N  D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" d/ y! c+ d/ R4 V2 H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 M3 \' I  J# @( o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* h/ x( c0 f. Q% C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% _+ D  V1 O' B5 _3 Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' d7 {7 j% [0 s% l! t4 b4 B0 L( p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  I+ B1 M4 y* K8 ]' b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- S2 K5 J% K( f9 T1 y) i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 o3 p& `+ l: Q- ~* C! |) l) Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& U* r5 K% h! ~* \. s2 s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 ?# k4 Q% k) o- L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>