【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 h: q1 o, g( R! \4 l5 z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ a) h9 x' }/ E" S4 f5 f2 iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ i! Z4 N  `  Q9 {( kFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% _$ D8 ]$ M- r+ j7 \% iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ ]0 n) O: E1 ~: u& }) QI would probably know how you feel
- M& W- ~) l- W/ |Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 j- n* O% e2 r( ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& r- b9 j( \- N/ Z1 XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, p9 p( y2 u& f9 W0 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 I( X0 [3 o0 E/ rEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* D8 i5 O3 p# s& b' ]! \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# U9 C3 c* Y, [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 j' t" S- X( E2 x3 BEntrust my love within your heart
2 Y7 K& `; Q7 B+ u- ^- ^2 u5 C" [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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% G$ g4 g) F0 b/ r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 W0 c5 J  j4 m; S- B7 o$ q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ }( e& c/ A7 v$ ~- n( c<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 M  O5 {' V& g# S<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) Z# B/ u4 U) I* |- F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 U2 l  l  x5 W5 m0 `, C6 Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* P4 |$ e& ~5 c$ i' k9 ~1 ?6 U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# c# K  X% }. S  S6 j+ `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! X* o8 U0 L+ i; h7 E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 @3 H" [. p* w! {. S' m) [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" |. u! ]) G  d, U<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- U  t) L: b, ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ H; R, }+ n7 p6 T# H<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( ?) X- U" v+ r0 u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) ~/ g7 ~) x5 E+ N3 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* A* ~7 Z/ b7 f% d2 B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  t, F. i( P& Z" J' ~- v0 e, W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ m8 i0 `" Y' h3 u8 X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% L" L  C8 d# |) h8 r6 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 n4 V6 g5 ]/ e4 j& b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 |* g( h- `. g) \( D2 y4 ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( s6 Y& s  [$ d, y0 o3 @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  f: I, W; E$ C* g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 D2 I! U4 E  m9 e( I! p; p8 z- [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' u: \: _. h! q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 A1 i0 R1 A7 E4 m( j5 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' [2 o; [0 \& u) P) e; y* D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>