【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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7 w; G, W" V) N7 |  ?我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 i' Y6 R  O# NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ W, }6 |% D+ M! dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ s# @5 S4 g& w3 l. eLove… just the word love
* L* c' U: e2 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
# o" k+ L0 {/ O8 I' [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% I) Y, S% K6 E+ x% DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* O2 P" T% ]; j- pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' Z7 w& W& J4 _% r% TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. w- e7 P6 |, a0 r; r/ dIf today isn’t too late,
6 o( @8 e# ?) X4 |! r% t" ~$ ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* k+ ?6 D8 w. F) [  S. iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: T) f) ?$ m, j6 uCan I entrust it to you?
- l, }0 \7 z, D0 M4 g6 B/ CEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

  M: w' f2 _: U0 O' p) u8 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 D" }, Z: \) Q  E6 Z3 @' A. k  t, u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 V9 _  a, Q6 D5 U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 j$ k6 w2 a) H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 @# x5 R; n, q( i' z2 t4 i6 U1 U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, A2 l6 j* L- h8 l9 j0 a; c0 b% n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% h$ ^0 U, M  x4 s& L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. r- ^- D5 l( x4 P+ k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 z9 _3 @1 J! `4 w. N5 o# {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 v  Z$ i' G) t' J9 v* d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 c/ O3 l$ [. t! I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) V$ \' }4 D+ C5 j1 E. s# a9 }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 j# C) e4 q$ ?9 a% p3 q* j6 @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: e' L/ d2 f7 n) q4 F/ u' ~. ^2 x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 J" Y, }, `* z- D  h. h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# N' B$ v( ^, @; S2 B: o! a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! s2 s- l; l* y  ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 D8 W# P; L! v4 q/ h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 B" n: z! R" ]% h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% z, D1 r" L3 B* x5 ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! e! m( B+ T6 B7 G! R( Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" R6 Q; s5 K4 D7 b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ r* K1 F$ A# V) w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' ~0 j" [: ^+ g! {# y2 v; B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! w$ [- }) r" C' D- ]. z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 q, {# \, Z( ?$ T, w. a<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 D* S8 r5 s$ \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 r$ M) P" t9 \: Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# A/ C  E- V$ _( b; l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 x) y% A: `! U2 R* L1 K: g" F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; v% N  M6 N$ C! O8 B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>