【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
% x; B8 W0 r, S' B6 o. rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. D8 L6 K0 q0 f' _6 }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, f9 F5 E$ o" x' L$ |I already loved you with all my heart
/ s" F4 ]# a; x8 ^We meet and talk everyday,
. {5 B1 w# C8 g- wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% w9 i" z! n. DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 B, W. e. L$ k  z7 C" f+ m4 dI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- t) a6 z* f  f$ Z' R. ^# W" |' pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* F8 N: P' s8 e8 J: X2 n. [7 ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: ~  o% D+ U5 D- t$ A2 MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 \1 ^: Q6 v8 t+ V: a! Q, e0 X. Y7 ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 }, \4 Q1 f+ ]/ d+ M6 [9 K8 LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* d' d6 I- C$ w6 |6 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 o* o! {8 q, v+ j  U9 SCan I entrust it to you?
; s: o1 w& s8 Q) e! z# m$ QEntrust my love within your heart
& |* {0 u5 x7 a- [9 ~9 ^6 YCan I entrust it to you?
/ g# q# G& c8 e/ K5 [Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% b6 e. m2 [  c+ p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: v3 [: R9 b; P4 k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( J: D& f: m- t$ A4 C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; v" D' q3 p. @3 x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 H2 W4 z6 l1 @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# r) C' s& X5 D& n' }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 y( J& f1 d7 w; ~' }7 l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 ?* h( H! i7 Y' H8 A& E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 W& A- [8 O1 V" F<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 w- I" V1 f! k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: m& F1 R5 e5 t- e  ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; \) i5 O: Q5 N6 u9 Q/ O- o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 O; L, l7 [" p6 u' G$ i/ D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ k0 h" [1 v! S. K. b7 @0 c. S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" n' v3 U' u4 t: y7 p& y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- X! ~, a. U2 w# D' Y; m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; G8 u4 a, d3 Z1 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) Z3 L$ n5 f" e  m3 a8 V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. O- I2 ?: B/ }/ q' \/ D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: J: }9 a0 w9 N  Q0 U7 U$ _% a6 y4 z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 X9 y( U0 ?' E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' G" ?; Q8 O- l9 I# ?4 {<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 w, A, K) e7 M; K0 `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" }% g# H( I1 Y0 Z# a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& s1 F' @3 |; j# K8 N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ~4 I* e! @* c% W% z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* r. s2 K  n3 c: l# t. I) E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 E3 L( n: f0 m0 F5 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 n. p( \8 [+ D6 D5 F/ V$ k4 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. M  W7 M9 ]2 Q2 o- L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 G5 D) J: F2 @! d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 F3 ?# A# r  |: q& r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 ~# S% z9 Q( x6 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ w& `: |( i! }9 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 q9 c# H( v  A2 G8 s! h5 a- Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ g9 `) A+ x0 G% Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 }6 x  }% d% G  f<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>