【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- X8 `0 V- E1 W5 {  CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) z+ x, t3 A' R6 `7 |5 R# zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 @- ?1 a. q, Z$ \+ t+ ZWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 K9 ?, s9 A+ J% [' K8 |Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! a+ G& N% O4 c8 V8 M0 y$ \+ R3 A2 OBut I never did
8 I# H4 Q  M+ C( r+ uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# r; X1 a" D4 `4 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ H$ p2 [% `0 n! g3 g0 `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' C7 t: P* Y" N& C3 R0 r* @% R+ z/ tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& M  U3 ^# T6 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 K( ]' @9 S$ N/ L- F/ sEntrust my love within your heart
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7 T5 y8 B( T" S1 _4 C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 _$ L, u& `& j- ?* m- K2 X<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& R) _0 b. }1 Y7 |+ ^, C<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' n$ M. ], U" f# G, H- `  D+ o0 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( @, X- }0 ?2 q8 n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 S# h% n: w+ W% W( |6 }4 z8 y, e9 m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" p/ E& `7 _4 M  Q8 w1 Y0 c* C) Y' |<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% e9 R. C# ?1 w5 g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 N5 n/ c$ X: V" @3 d3 ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 g; n  S- ]' d6 {" t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ D) A2 o# v9 d) b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 t" ^' f! w$ E1 ?: }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ g* j" G: a: Z" A0 x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, h- }$ f! r0 Q' I* A, F1 C5 v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ Q' `2 ]7 }! a* N<P>但我不会</P>
1 R* s8 F0 E+ k7 w4 Q+ n; D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ s5 g- k) B3 I" `2 k9 G9 c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ v/ Z" |8 f$ f. g/ T6 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( I7 i! t: }& K) }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 ^  m. B% G# u, e% t% {+ z0 [% f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) q' G' n- t) X0 ?) I8 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- ~6 d5 J& c: B5 f4 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# o+ E9 ^4 n3 {  d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- Q1 j/ D( t. y% B' A) G& |" M- `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; r) D# ^9 J4 L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' _2 h$ A4 N# h8 d2 Z9 A" y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% g  e: F& I2 e& w5 A* n# e<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" a! Y7 q" ~& p& ]# Q# A7 m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* i# W4 c# z6 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! W* k5 G+ L7 o9 m. N& ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 U5 d( w9 f% y4 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& x+ |' r8 c7 `" v1 s1 A# _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 t$ |1 |- d" q0 P+ J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( N# [' z0 U" C* a0 D: C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ I+ n- F! r( `( n) c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, D/ T; i8 W& p2 r6 `- ~( v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>