【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! ]# `, |! r) i, C4 A/ z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  K5 Q3 I! u. VFrom the first moment we met,
9 b% h( U" M" c) pI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ s4 b0 Y  n- b0 s; H- B/ uBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 R; S6 Q+ D4 N2 ^  dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ v2 w) w. }$ O  |0 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 S2 m+ L% u! `& M8 mCan I entrust it to you?
3 u# Q' C6 t5 N: j- z$ LEntrust my love within your heart
. G4 s  a0 O* sLove… just the word love
4 X& J, Q# Z8 F; rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ B: X. Z; p. r- }; rIf today isn’t too late,
! ~/ {8 q- [! TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) H$ }# g4 }: f/ aCan I entrust it to you?
# v& i1 G( f+ t( X2 i9 t' _  EEntrust my love within your heart
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8 l: m9 M# R0 x1 \# d( Q1 I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  y6 A& ], `: d6 R6 B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  B- N3 s+ T) ^3 P, E% e! H9 T" e+ W<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# v6 D% R# t6 M0 F+ H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# S5 }- J7 O. l! q7 F7 k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- X, e% ?5 O; ~; E: g9 t% s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ v9 p. o5 B% {& r, }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! J, p% d$ O; |) g<P>但我不会</P>
5 y) e2 k* {. P, _! y$ }5 ~  e<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: E" I5 @% M$ o4 L<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- H& U% a( h( [3 I<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 T! L# ]. w+ P( S! y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 i# ]8 y; g6 w* p/ Y& k3 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 ?8 c# A+ L6 R! y; k8 j7 n7 l4 E9 R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 w- ~  ~" V9 d6 k1 ^<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ w, Z/ w- T- O1 O* h  w8 J! K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# L3 n0 E9 g. Y- M<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; I- F' h2 p5 Q7 k# n$ k<P>But I never did </P>
& `3 I- T! K- g3 s9 U<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* R! x0 O3 L" b# P- _# d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' D" h7 n$ R. y# U' v6 g( w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 o- ?6 w- T3 K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 N- a7 t2 @1 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& U7 y3 `8 [& Y5 G# n% h( {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 `  K2 s2 J, f/ D# v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 i4 ^6 ~% g. |) z- A  p8 B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>