【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 w$ j6 L# J% a. S3 |+ g$ @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
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, m( q# X' u/ M6 cWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* @+ o/ _1 `# U) _4 D1 j" v( W0 pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 q  c$ B4 o+ ~2 @9 `! QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ x, v# w3 Q1 `: x3 \/ ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" J0 i! w' q/ _9 r- ]3 tIf today isn’t too late,
; c5 H* X! Y' g- D0 M4 E/ zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% A  H4 }( P1 H/ E. z1 }! CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ Z0 O* L9 Q4 @8 d/ ?0 r6 hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" z( {9 ~# A  bLove… just the word love
9 }+ Y, V6 U! q9 P" O8 YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 y0 L3 m' w# e0 m( {. f" @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' t9 L. J+ @0 y' |$ ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 h. ~+ u0 @% R$ K& AEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( ]- N: r- ^# f1 y. d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 k/ T: D8 K+ i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# s8 Q- |1 s4 g9 p0 R8 u7 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 ^+ b( L) L% W3 e6 Y% e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 f5 F' t" B7 e0 E- R7 b( ]2 ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& H7 [3 V- T  `" n' @; Q6 P, ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 m2 M& S7 T. F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& S2 x- ~' d  E; p# p- @5 v8 V0 }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 ?3 l; g4 C% Z. a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 E* u: N4 D, ]5 Y" ?0 h4 D+ [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  ^! L! r( U1 Y( [" H+ R0 T: V$ x' h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( |* x+ y- c  R: q# b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ Y% R( P2 g# V: |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, Z, Z$ A( K$ I, V* D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: }' O0 ^8 N+ V' Y8 M0 u<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% C/ J; K, }1 ]) C& G* d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# r$ H$ r- T" }% m  D; F1 R, D  `<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 x2 T: b1 `) _9 Y1 Y2 M( t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 U0 o, I% j/ q# Y1 x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ t/ s2 z8 j  J3 t4 l; i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. R+ u; [( x  K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 K6 @, P1 i7 w- A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! b1 e$ B6 i9 U! F' B7 [$ C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 d+ B" v% n3 m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 `* u. O$ x) ^+ b- A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 g2 y0 A4 F& O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 p/ g6 T' z" j0 f; B" x$ S% A, \<P>但我不会 </P>
' n0 v1 x8 o3 y% S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" @; I! g9 {% Z% R) k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 t5 }; d6 k9 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ]* _0 }, E% R" ~  y. S. J<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: v8 {; \- e3 q, a* g1 p# E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& A9 n! H3 g: s# u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  X2 E( o7 t5 d( I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" b6 F" o- }, P1 ^; V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% i! Q; J! x/ M" e  q6 F7 m* z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 Q, c0 P0 [  D& @6 @+ H$ g9 _7 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 V  {& L9 y! ?4 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 F9 i* {3 B8 w7 e" I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' R  ?1 o4 ]2 Y, E5 v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>