【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 f, @- S$ j% r) O+ A0 B, F% ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! d8 j! Q2 {' q+ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* c! r, s0 e+ j: v* u. ~; e3 r! kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- F6 x" \2 m2 b; F4 }- [0 d& DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ ]2 F/ P1 |; M; N/ V5 fEvery other word you utter is love
% H( }2 A1 Z& h& R1 d. `I really want to know just how much you love me
( c% [! [* V% T5 S4 i6 O% qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 L  `8 n' g2 o$ V3 S. II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 R, b2 C) r* C- K0 ^$ g$ R3 N  SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ H: Q! J3 z' _9 L1 G+ i- _I regret not dying
6 P# O2 X* G. k+ WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 ]+ E* [; T) v1 t$ ~& x, Z7 C# ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 l, w; i" @" fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 n1 H: o% U4 u0 T" `5 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ i3 B9 {' v$ K1 _' b8 z. p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! n6 k/ Y/ y# ]+ R1 @9 Z$ t6 Z" m3 R4 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ?+ J" x3 ?. W+ o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 S" R  p2 G' t) i9 J! C& a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  G* C- o  i/ j( z6 G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ q- O$ a+ o  v+ u1 R* d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' g0 J' G+ A# [4 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 P6 n7 r7 h7 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 o0 z4 S6 a, z: V& ?5 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ Z* A3 K, q6 v9 r* `' E3 V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* N! X6 I% q& `& T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 n& h% g" P! D# F3 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, s% m4 V; J* `% A2 k3 J+ ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* N6 t8 i, J# V2 Z& s9 ?1 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: b! I! p8 |0 N# Z$ y& c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 r& W' E' _! j' A7 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 }5 I: m; a) \/ A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 A0 p  ?  t7 n! ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- S6 m: [. O: \* m( M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. ^2 [7 d- |# v' C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 v7 j0 F4 ~5 v8 l# l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 V# P( [# t4 L+ ]' g: y: E我请你剖开它
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& H. Q$ p: t8 o* i! @/ g# q, P+ S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>