【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& |+ K: a4 @5 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 M: K! G! B% s! XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ x, |) D/ _, hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 P, S. |8 l' i* |7 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 M" ?" y; W. {6 _Nothing can compare to my love
2 ]' N" U& g6 I' M) nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. l. n0 k; o3 r# D2 A+ C, Z0 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ Z7 F, M# u- J: s! e& N8 ~+ cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& J3 N; S' M6 p4 f8 oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" F) p& @! Q/ q, fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ d8 L* Z& e# j8 e8 C: [- x1 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- y! Q5 b9 V+ T3 }/ i. U; L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 j& e6 T1 b/ ?+ ^# \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ [" u3 `& O. M# S1 z. z' T+ Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 x- O+ V+ Z  g! h$ ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 a1 H6 d& k* C5 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  x# x7 h7 L3 y# x$ D' V7 H+ g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# n. V9 Z9 _( Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 ~2 ~+ E, N9 ^6 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& q/ P" L) C. i& w: p% Q( q$ e' B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 V: R$ \1 g0 }+ J" e% A$ e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 c! c6 w4 Z" h! V: ^& h2 L. J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" A& p2 x' ~4 [9 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; q: l& Y. k: J, i! {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 }7 v: d; T6 @. j2 R1 r* L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 q7 u# I* L$ L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" R  l; ~. ^5 ~! l' _3 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 f" A+ \, z; v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. Z5 C$ V3 G4 E, y$ o% v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 p% U! @, i# m# k: P& d$ |7 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: R. X8 T1 Y6 W, \6 w! ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 L1 g2 H( A: }* V9 [  j" k8 t) Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: E/ i" N+ T' V! Y3 S- r& Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ ]+ _  U. j5 [" `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& ]1 {0 ~" a9 R7 b. y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ m( S! \$ x0 z. I: L+ y- w6 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ I9 X4 l) c- z& i9 u3 \+ ~( ]) d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& ]' N! G! d1 C3 Z- `# n+ k  A3 ?; b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>