【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# s; g5 L8 M- ^1 A8 V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 P! h' R5 w; q' J8 R6 o% r. lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# S9 p- d0 @) y/ p: }* C1 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 W# o* c  f0 W" ~7 L# j9 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ V4 X" O6 J1 j  Q. g" PNothing can compare to my love
7 [  z8 J" t3 k) p- ]/ t, TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 n. {7 \8 G' W8 B! |- i% xI want so much to see inside your heart
1 Q) n( x0 D  }0 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 \- y$ j1 d- v$ A7 \: t/ n, mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' u7 {+ ^, U; X  h6 E1 P% \! g$ bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* [& x  y2 T" DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 U- W/ f5 S3 i1 R$ a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 |& K/ u8 h0 ]" b2 M. j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- f) I; d9 h) O) x% {2 k  A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' D3 L" b5 R( \* ~8 {  w5 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- B) ]& A0 B: P3 Q2 Q7 i2 ~  a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 g) m7 Z! _# Y2 c6 D3 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 m) g# v% `8 F& N8 O, G6 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ P" k: ]# h' k/ a. J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, H/ D5 U* [# y  k  s* d9 ~8 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! g$ \6 l  C! ]! j( j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 T4 r9 N1 K1 A5 t: p$ w& {$ v$ \" E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( B. E$ e& U1 I4 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* J. g1 W& o/ T& {+ v+ _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% e; N$ ^" [' n% _8 C0 U5 j: ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 @8 C# ~  ?% l* W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( q8 g7 s. V: a8 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  M9 u, K0 W. b; R- i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( n' X( L3 {7 s9 r/ E6 Q4 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; [$ Q, a( e. t5 U" b8 H8 X) i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ W+ j  i* Q$ |, Q( @) D3 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 Y7 V: w# G2 }- g& ]( v4 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. |& L; a9 ?# L9 x2 X我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>