【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 |% S6 f+ V' r& R! w) [# _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% I: d9 Z" Q) P: z3 }) pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( T8 @* o) K# o) L7 `4 W, X" TThe sky is happy down to its soul
' x# z; Y9 k3 j  T! H; fWith the moon kissing it every night
& O6 n6 s! O9 t- M1 N- ^3 USeeing the sky content with its love
* a4 ]. {2 T7 ^" t, d8 KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- |$ }- j! L: N1 ^, RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: x8 b6 p3 M6 n0 R  E! X2 w6 jNothing can compare to my love
$ }; q$ ?2 ^! ^; Y. a0 E5 f8 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% Y7 P& p) w; u& a# Y& q$ [+ tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* Z1 n8 \$ b; K( y. n$ l4 @% Z7 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* T" h0 R, Y0 [. M, `9 e' h1 o3 iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ z5 c3 R5 f2 Z2 i# w. I4 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& z; v8 ?2 b9 R+ H# N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 E. W) t% n0 s- Y3 b  ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 w' q% s) C, O5 A' ?4 k+ Z) T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 u# o; }/ `% r+ b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 t9 [9 U) h/ O1 K7 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 A; q6 k! y! [9 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ L3 U( v' q$ y+ H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: f$ B( L  K( G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) H! `7 E& C3 [" i/ T* i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* |# x  p; b8 S! C* R8 M9 T0 v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, l, c8 J! S; S" y/ O2 x1 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 A( A$ U* M* \8 A, Z. H( l1 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 o' T& P, [' u4 H9 X  J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. e2 m( E3 N  ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* \- j  ~% l1 b" t6 D0 q' \3 C% D1 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 [; r$ y! A$ Q5 \& L9 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( v: k) Y; W+ d& f5 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* h5 b! U- Y( s9 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ d# g" F9 }$ b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ }- N* a% D9 s+ E* d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: @: B7 e( G" C6 q' f3 ^: s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 r- F1 M  F7 k0 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 g& _, D! `8 M2 g2 ?% E$ v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 `8 @% v0 M) }$ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ j4 d4 _: \, k- M<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 n& U+ {. c2 O7 P% [7 L; x' Z+ b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" [( d$ ]# _2 E" B, S/ _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" u! h- U4 y( N) F; W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ x- P% ], i& S2 o  h* B" W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 n! t6 w: o5 A* i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 Y' [8 {0 T1 l9 m7 e( @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 C' L. l+ }1 n# C) Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ K5 S$ v( h2 ?( W9 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>