【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 ^8 K: q3 G2 V+ q6 o5 \% c! e( t1 W, |歌词我附在后面。
5 P" J% S+ j2 T/ NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. x7 `0 g1 m8 J) aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- [! M, \6 E4 f. I' z, S  ]4 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 A. Q: N7 E# r( [2 d0 @! yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" \3 g; \. G6 d/ Q: F7 rEvery other word you utter is love
9 U9 h& T* T+ E+ l" o8 sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( O7 v: G  J8 X; HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 P. ~, P* E+ ^7 `6 ?0 `  FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 N4 x! D  p* M( K! e9 m2 t8 @; z- xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 c, C' G1 b; u* r- mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" _& ?7 Z: j/ Z  M8 B6 iI regret not dying
6 }4 X. S1 m7 ?! T) r6 J/ b' VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: |$ D0 H0 y, a' x: G( N: NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! x8 _( ~- c( K* GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 a% ]8 ^7 d# y' n8 T& |  B2 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: [( Y/ D2 D; E1 k4 z: o' x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; H. k/ @+ P0 E/ \8 V1 f. A) C. S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 i$ H. d3 n. n* S7 T3 U! G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& G; J7 J+ |; G  N) d" K. \4 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" w" ]; ~) H- O% x# @4 i' P+ v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 {5 F6 n+ {5 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. W  Y6 L/ ]6 }) j( E<P>你无需担心</P>
  |7 q- ]/ d. [8 T& z- e/ J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* s! U& V! e) g- A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 l) z2 |0 B+ @/ k% M' P$ U0 n  L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, s% k1 u2 U: ~* f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) i4 {& O7 X. J0 T, [' N# X' h8 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ O5 n% B" l) e. M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ b) V' I% y2 d, ^: _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# R# m% k1 G1 ]: r# V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ F2 _: X3 ?6 j( ~& |/ s8 F- h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ W( X- q  X  @  j; C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 q( x1 T0 f) a4 ?  M; v7 Z2 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. j& J- z& o0 j& K! }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 K( n% Z0 O% A1 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 L1 ]" K: I! c4 @( L7 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' F: G( }2 e# X4 I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 k8 v9 Q5 c) w  Q% ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ ~  D2 q* T3 `/ l% N" z+ l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 C5 e# k. T0 c4 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; D& H8 r2 I% k/ N# i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 x# b: ]. \" d9 J' A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 f+ i$ B0 l; M4 `  ^我请你剖开它

, }" a% k' a$ v9 ]& O6 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>