【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ p: t' ~, U/ Z. t) n, |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  g+ Z1 X7 y" c" Y% sWith the moon kissing it every night
, ~, D7 x3 D7 u0 @. k8 l  iSeeing the sky content with its love
3 E+ d' N+ D. ]- M1 ]3 Q. AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 o2 W9 N7 l: `+ P) j5 ^9 DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: D, V" F4 G- |& ]$ `. jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 z# H1 V+ R$ t+ iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 C5 Q4 c& L, T% e! P# x' k2 lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 C) C# L1 j  U; T& l* x: ?! g3 y8 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% }1 _/ R9 E1 ^3 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' m5 c% W$ \0 h9 A5 d7 U. X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( X- E% E) L. n( }( c2 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% X. R; ]) t; i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 _/ O* k% f6 u: x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ~/ x8 t4 u& a, w; C& y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) F9 P6 w: F6 [+ S2 w* Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. v, C1 a5 s/ W5 n* D- M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 t, Y4 T: E3 i$ w- S3 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" O- o( Y4 H8 c1 a# V# y3 q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ O% i/ V6 ~. j* [( z/ l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 c0 W* x% K. B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# J  d* @/ d! m" I" Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 i+ W7 s8 X* l# {0 ?, S5 v2 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( w) [6 K' F5 S8 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ~2 ]0 g) u3 w# {! z$ r8 X+ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 Q) t- }6 t  m  z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) X* X. ?3 b$ H' R6 W8 w$ b/ e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" X% f/ `8 O$ R5 u$ K; V$ P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. a+ C! X4 }' b) w! p6 D! {, I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 l8 Q7 ]" R! f+ E+ e0 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; ?; X6 N& E7 J- ?6 Y% U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) g8 \8 w/ h" ]6 v2 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& ~/ A( U' {- \$ s" @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  L0 @9 }' D; U8 O) m* B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; C) r4 Z% A$ Q7 ]* ^2 ?, Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 ?* Z" T0 g& m: [8 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' N3 j. K* x4 h5 ?/ B7 D9 q+ R9 _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' \( V4 D- j) z! W) W$ L. p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 Q9 z+ \' L7 j4 k" G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 v8 X3 L& M' R2 y, S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# g3 q  J& l1 I/ S% A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. e0 [- l( b; K: p; {7 z; C+ P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( K8 t: H: w9 r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* R6 _) V0 F( D# @6 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 k6 m) }* b% ?* e6 i5 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>