【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ R' p/ _$ V3 d8 s& {& j" s3 ^" _歌词我附在后面。
) Y( C6 T8 i  u! EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 J6 [$ o9 L* |7 X; ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 p4 A6 V2 R/ q: c3 h, m  tWith the moon kissing it every night
0 u; q' V7 t; z" S9 [0 d+ ]Seeing the sky content with its love
4 Q3 x" B8 x  s" F0 e$ R+ {1 t7 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( {, E5 Q' V3 ]8 T, c0 d* D& iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 Z0 I/ n8 `1 }% k3 ?) \Every other word you utter is love
- ]4 \+ o. v1 s: q3 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 d. ?0 s% G; d! ?' p# j/ eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& V& L! p/ r8 P  V' n6 u3 F8 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 Y/ ]4 a3 s+ F: }: f- ]I’m still filled with fear
5 K( E( q, F( ~8 e: o3 j( kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 P' O. d* m& XI regret not dying
) v$ H! t# X% K$ M* C) o  oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 ~) T; y1 Q0 [+ @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 }3 t- P3 _. E3 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 Q( Z+ N; ~8 O+ v* ?4 g, ?0 ?4 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# k4 M- @* d2 u( j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ r8 N. Z. Y4 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% @( j- J/ k( u' s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 `9 G3 O- g: A# J+ A3 T+ q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: z8 @  h( o( B. R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ ]/ N" j: d( F3 V8 S$ ]$ A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 P# h8 R; E8 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. D. c: M" X6 d: Q5 V0 U* F0 `- ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- Y, i4 p- Q8 ]3 M6 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: Y5 O- g& \7 V. K0 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) @9 V; y5 \9 S( d3 h9 m& c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, I+ y6 E2 `7 @. a, J" M<P>你无需担心</P>
  [8 O# e: F  K, `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- y5 |7 u1 S9 C6 _2 T- e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 }6 A/ M4 n. h1 R/ }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" F! T8 V5 B  G; b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* @' P/ b) E+ R) \0 F7 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 G+ K- R3 o2 c" _7 U2 V' D# n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 K2 M/ ]# m- x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* @$ J' S' H. ?3 O5 g$ o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; a" A6 W9 @5 ]- z3 x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ^6 G; w" G. J- q( [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 a1 n) q2 F9 j+ y' S( ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 R, g7 D! _+ {( ^! U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 n- H4 c7 U, u6 S+ j5 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ d, {. B5 W2 @2 h& ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% Q5 ~3 E6 N& @! k. v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>