【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% n5 A* E; q% P% J* n6 W6 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. i: H9 a. F' g' D* m: D' hThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ K. t9 H, D, r3 ^& |! v. ~) FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) d& K! v( F- H* RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* ^3 W4 D6 H2 ]1 _+ vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 e8 n6 ]" i7 a0 J/ ~4 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
7 [- E- F; ?+ x( S3 `  y0 C5 m4 b( DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: D3 C; e3 P6 `  {* ?) |9 u  D4 t& `I want so much to see inside your heart
# t2 g" W! @, E7 G7 ?9 w3 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  K$ H! P) X& @) M0 `' j% x$ cI’m still filled with fear
7 D$ {4 x. r' \6 l- QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( n6 v3 B- S0 u3 H# H- v0 O$ y9 dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 b3 A) c8 C) A4 f, ?7 F- JWith such a tongue as yours,
. o- }6 i/ o, S. dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( p  E% R2 l* r% l! `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ B; z' o5 \% J( z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: l$ L0 ^7 T) p% W$ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ F) |4 ?+ Z/ P/ H) P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# L0 m' v$ @: L$ o( O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 F. h: w; ~5 R5 X3 G- ]9 y8 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& \2 |$ ]  P4 I4 Q' i. g( o( X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 i4 h, X, q5 B+ A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! C9 }0 a4 Q- O- y" Y<P>你无需担心</P>
, B" O" M2 h6 }9 c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 B! h* z0 P. b5 B/ ?) b( U1 m% \& M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( e  p4 X& c% m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& _! N$ O8 r6 G* u4 n, c0 L& C! D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, I, I' q; H; Z  I- e& j2 K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' G. L8 f) n& R5 k5 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 q& k$ T2 q0 D" L0 w; }2 J- I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! C: N/ C: c6 U, f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) n3 m; g5 [- Z5 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 L. `1 h  }" v7 v' ~/ A: w  x& L% [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: p6 ~& T8 t) P0 z2 O, A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& }. X1 M1 o) Q% [' w- ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 @3 |5 C, q# r" Z- M& O4 B/ T4 ^/ e<P>I regret not dying</P>
. r/ c% C! ]% q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 g! o/ x  J# L: N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ |( ~9 b' @8 W4 }1 f8 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 s& K) d! J& m' ?) d! w5 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 J! |1 S0 `2 H" j2 T8 C) \2 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% Y# e" W9 X/ j( |) ^: O5 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: _9 o- {. g& n+ i3 [' ~* U! g1 ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>