【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ P: d5 b9 V* L- o! d, A$ c歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! J; x" C: y: Q7 p" j3 N6 k6 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 ?8 i- g2 }$ Q1 ^. eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. u3 D/ r' E9 O. k6 f4 gSeeing the sky content with its love
  F7 a2 W* R. [7 G- e- bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ X) J7 j* z% qEvery other word you utter is love
  e4 l( I4 K" |/ }9 QI really want to know just how much you love me
  y  I3 h' A+ S% V2 b, WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 l0 ^9 V; [  F" q+ o2 B. @% p8 L6 \4 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 S9 V; a4 I$ d2 E# ?7 Z2 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) S4 E1 \# l5 F( a1 Z! Y7 K# RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- f9 v5 ?7 |% A5 _1 vI’m still filled with fear
2 h$ B& V; a$ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 R3 F8 a- k) H5 d2 C- z: x% @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 b+ r3 X) `( ]2 H0 Q2 ]3 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 X! R% B# {  k7 U3 I/ A1 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. o7 Q2 J5 G; h2 W' A8 X" X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  _- @+ J/ e% R6 u5 i3 {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 l5 W8 A) ^* w3 e6 [2 y; j8 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- p& c: f- h( }# x$ O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  e$ Z2 h# i1 p, M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& Z* ?  C: A& p2 ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 ]; g7 v( t$ w: f% B- T* O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' k/ C- T" g* D* T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  P) m, a5 M$ Y+ t- |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 m% @' ^( g2 Y: k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: n4 J& e" {6 }9 ]% t, Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 u# k: ?0 P6 }* x9 F, @0 r) Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' d5 \) w( ~! U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; @& Y8 Z/ _$ s* \' A0 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- R$ R' u1 y" M8 ~- T$ m& P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 z  r" f+ q7 @( b+ I7 c& Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ H; }- Z* [) M: v9 F4 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: a8 X. a, J( \9 p' ^! r6 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 v! \& G- |! `" I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 s- K7 i1 Y8 u" R我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: x/ i5 ~" A. ?6 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>