【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 b3 f9 B! L' _! c2 y( D/ W歌词我附在后面。
% O2 {1 A+ ?# S4 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% N& I  O, @- y4 K! W+ zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# f" n! q+ d5 t8 w4 F* pWith the moon kissing it every night
4 [8 \* \7 H" e( V* cSeeing the sky content with its love
% A" N" W* \! A1 b8 @, z# uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( P" D$ X& W  HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: N! U# T/ l4 s9 D5 AI want so much to see inside your heart
1 b9 D2 I* t( T/ T" P& CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: o* a, s; @/ C6 u% z' CI’m still filled with fear
% P0 ]0 U" N8 U) J) ]+ rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' w3 f( ~0 y  ]- M  b) w: s) ]3 R) lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 n1 X+ p3 K9 N/ p/ cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! c0 Y& G( v+ J9 B6 w+ hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) b5 k: k) E) F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" e8 W5 ?8 i' j2 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" Z5 Y% J, u" s0 e/ K8 v# S& b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, P  N2 Y1 s" P4 S. D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ G! K8 T# g3 x0 Y6 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 a$ A' \& j+ F4 I5 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, q  I% C" E! p+ z. {- `8 R6 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ }5 p' D2 a9 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" c+ ]( ~) F. v4 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  J6 I( o% p9 v) K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 l2 @& ~3 I6 x/ t. ^, j: N5 t, x  O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 C; y+ H1 Z: R5 ], {, ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; s. x8 o/ ^. W! I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' N5 n& _+ H0 l: ~  F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( Q' n1 _1 \; c. _: [+ A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% D7 w  U$ f4 M5 F% E. t# ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* J+ r; U2 Q) M( M4 Y' d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 m0 \/ X& H& h) \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& ?; y: m+ H  D/ K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; f2 E4 W( o* {5 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ Y; M8 D' l% D# f! K) k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 s# c' D1 |# p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. G/ `, g0 k1 ]8 v/ j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 K( I$ u% q% g7 m. J7 X$ Q" p<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 p* z3 g: I4 m* K4 i) U+ e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 P  ]) y! m) W; ~6 s' A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ T2 N- A, p& S) Q! U) E, N+ r- O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! H+ f; ]( d: d0 _+ [8 K7 B5 o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; A4 j' G  [7 m/ c) I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 W& g0 W/ X& l. ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; E. C3 \, n. J  U6 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; {& r; N5 d% ]+ M3 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( a+ }2 n% k3 _1 D! M8 P我请你剖开它

) d  p! w0 U0 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>