【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 ]* T, ~  |0 m9 E! FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 O: C- @3 `7 N  @3 |( [, `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 K; x( q  c2 t5 w; oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& ]# L( O4 K1 t, o" R3 USeeing the sky content with its love
, I6 ?& A( G# V3 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; {0 ]4 X1 R, w6 f3 X5 C0 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: u2 e! R, j- H" hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, ^2 z0 t2 d% c) \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& ^5 ?2 f/ |: N+ L/ O# P, C7 t& D% nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) L0 L5 p) g& J2 Y* y8 rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 I; n8 w9 v6 Y. y/ DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 D% ^3 G  R' S2 ?5 }2 T& o* W7 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ p  }# O/ F* m6 V; N. Q" Q! j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& a. f! y+ E& y3 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) [- W7 C% H# h- h8 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ e$ z' W% S5 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% i6 D: c9 k; t3 A, t3 r  b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# `' p: W) c+ M, }+ k+ j0 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# h: V0 a3 e8 p8 s/ {0 h/ C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  S5 ?9 M; q$ ^/ O% `( ~+ A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* ]! D$ m! V: H1 V, v7 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* }/ I* [0 b! v2 Y2 C$ x% D  T, k9 O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 q+ N1 H' h5 b+ f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 W3 z, y# G$ L% m: d9 C: x8 C. `<P>你无需担心</P>
6 t8 ~. ^0 K1 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 A. _" }4 w7 ~: \; b: D1 A( X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) v8 S- J8 g8 B. Q: j: G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) o$ j" H! x8 @0 K& X5 w" C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' N6 ~2 a" n2 _1 S6 L5 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: Y" G/ e+ j6 ~+ p+ D" z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: u+ b. m6 s( Y4 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ [6 @% E; M% B1 s; D) o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. h3 m: H4 W' t# Y8 B9 j9 `, Q1 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) V. o4 W7 ?9 Q1 k3 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* r! _, W+ W+ ?, U, b3 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 y% Q2 V5 Y. t3 J/ {0 D8 M8 H7 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 ~- g, c/ _0 V2 p& n8 I) w- g, q) O<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 l  G1 m* Y9 ?( b' Y! f( T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 [! v. Y0 \/ }5 U: U( `6 ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- O8 v! @/ S3 P: S* C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 |( c* g3 W) ?2 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" e5 d3 ?. ], f8 R- Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 D' o1 m& U3 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>