【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  }' W8 y+ k* uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( Y# Y- i" n- m7 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( h$ X# ]7 W! A& ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
# P; j. g+ X* Z- }With the moon kissing it every night
  [* `3 G- i( G, w, N' d$ Z0 zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 Y- W- H: t8 t2 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 f9 K( `8 c. U% Z( UI really want to know just how much you love me
% Y/ g$ w" X# F9 C9 O* p+ sI love you I love you with all my heart
" r6 b3 F, x, [; G$ O9 g2 C) g. QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; F8 Z  R7 j1 ?$ b, o/ H% |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ \/ K( y+ [; N+ Q' uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 I2 K! U$ _3 k: S9 d# ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' h* T1 {8 j! i) f2 D3 KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 `# w! j' S% x4 t: b3 H# {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( G: p, h+ @; T6 m& `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: y: ^: a0 R+ F6 m0 I: a: v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- ^9 A" A9 [( _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 d7 o5 _9 Z5 q2 t; J: R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 e) c' Z: R3 i3 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% V' Q$ g/ X4 Y5 _6 x6 _& \; }+ U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 k0 ]0 K  s$ _9 s* y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 F  D! n5 _0 X% w% g, c( M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! T0 [$ Y+ w/ R' _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 n' u. g# Q" Z" F, F0 [9 _: v/ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# B1 n" C9 c4 W& B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 |( P1 \# b1 W; F% d: ]. Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 k& c2 s) H% L7 J4 z# h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 m4 }+ d, L: B" r! ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 i% G$ Z1 E. V2 O+ @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 g8 T& i. C; W4 D  X: I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- _& w: u& H* C( p# N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 I- N+ @' E4 ?9 f0 |1 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; g8 J4 y; K% s' f- \4 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) d: `# C2 J5 l  Y9 e1 Y* ?3 m' ]  @% e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& J& f- w- w! o* r6 {( d, `0 Y" T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% c4 X& S$ ^# a3 A2 N. R6 A2 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ i: X: m# j) W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 m; L7 p; n+ e0 l0 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 D( o3 g  S  p+ n7 u1 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; n2 g: n$ S; D$ H/ K我请你剖开它
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' h4 }' _8 w1 v3 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>