【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& }4 {% x* }8 E, t0 }With the moon kissing it every night
: K+ _4 e; e  c! B  _+ M/ [- H+ _Seeing the sky content with its love
- D2 l% h9 g3 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# b) _" Q, d3 E" M# N- VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 N% |, l- Q; z8 J8 N. k4 }I really want to know just how much you love me
1 ~" D* M2 [5 B% k3 ^) m' kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# ~# L9 Y5 M; n! c& HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& ~' s) ~* N* `3 F/ cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 L  n4 c4 u( QI’m still filled with fear
3 v! m7 Z" e8 {3 B8 o2 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. q: ]8 d+ P' r; v1 h" Q; qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 g' G" h+ N5 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ K5 R; ?8 A, D# _8 T6 t. N* ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" L3 L- I( P- U( u5 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 r. ?8 C0 a2 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! ?( u: `" q. J  v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: `  J8 n! a7 s7 ?% l) |7 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# s! U$ j2 I5 Y' S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 R% K( G& ?, a1 H3 l( w+ K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 T, `, T% d" H+ j" R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& |' o: ]9 S) W. ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 i+ q" q0 Z8 J" j# f! w) V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 @2 r: V; {- P5 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! d  L3 S# J# \, e/ e" {8 u4 |4 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 x' F) a/ I5 s# a' A& e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) {6 j1 ]) X2 V7 c# |) d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. b& H  i! u, T, g2 c* R1 m+ m$ R9 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 C3 I* ^+ ]  w% j5 b; h: U' U, N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  a6 k  w' u/ a7 n7 I2 D! N* o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) E) L2 r8 S4 D( D3 j; `/ @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ D* o! D7 [( O+ V. I+ ^# m) e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) O: ?# K" P8 Y  N7 J7 c" G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. D! j5 Y" G, F$ T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, v% y& R5 b/ P. [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ r, d( A* R* V/ C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& v, I( v$ R" Q3 f我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" t4 c" F1 O+ n3 l5 M  X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>