【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* ?2 F2 ]$ g$ K" J% u$ N7 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! K, M* }: {0 _9 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 h+ z$ [' B$ @' n* yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 I3 }, q, T  I+ [0 v- \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 F8 B6 h  ?1 RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% g3 }" r3 L0 Z& M0 r% MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- w8 [& e3 B1 c  j( Y% K" }$ xNothing can compare to my love
; G; m% R$ A- Z- ^0 H" l/ v/ SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 E; u; Y8 N$ b  JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 x* h3 \3 ?8 P# G  @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 t- u  q7 }0 ?' o/ V) BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 g5 R* }+ }4 UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 n5 H# z2 |0 d: uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 \, Q4 a& q) G+ N, B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- _- B( \1 @5 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ b# x# F7 u5 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ r, {! c- `4 `" G$ g# {2 z: p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% {% |  K8 |7 R" A) ~: s/ x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 x. v9 W9 a' H2 W3 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ e+ ~9 V5 G* T* q$ I4 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; y0 I/ G, ~$ t! H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 Y4 i' b; E7 X/ |9 `( Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  g7 G9 b+ X- T7 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 _" `" R7 N2 e+ b0 O7 l& B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! X( [0 i7 Y# I# D  n; V& Q8 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 ?* {4 g7 z$ Q, J, E9 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  F; u: n$ N3 _2 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* Y0 V- j- a. a$ c; [) ?4 J" _" C$ A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: U3 u, z: G: y& K1 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. I* t4 D5 @3 K) E: |7 \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 B/ B1 }9 a( G- R5 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 W: ?% }, J( N& _( @2 r, L. ^0 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 \& n" k& S) r9 |) F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 L7 o. \+ L; ~& Y' J0 }3 G$ y5 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 Z* @( p4 O2 q7 |: ]% n9 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 _7 x  r/ ^# g, C7 [& F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ d, ?6 s2 g$ [( v8 ^0 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" f% n) h- ^5 X$ Z& t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; m" Z* K) r0 [# Y: K4 ?: L; `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! N% @: L( p) z9 F4 ^$ F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: V4 C6 D0 Y* f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>