【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 B6 E, l" H4 bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; B5 O8 R! s9 a- @$ c5 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( p0 u7 F) T2 u8 b9 _* U; yWith the moon kissing it every night
* p" y5 m6 z% e7 j  K, K3 DSeeing the sky content with its love
2 F& z7 P7 o3 a, n6 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 {: s, i6 M$ P9 {9 Y  GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- j* m$ ~- \- `/ g; l6 }3 c/ RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; R; F: ]! i( T) U/ i6 Q& YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- l3 P/ d. [! A5 V4 {- nI’m still filled with fear
$ e" _2 X! g) x7 i" B, B* xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 t: c- `$ _" O* d0 D0 q) X3 [7 hI regret not dying
4 e9 d. x# w; C2 S6 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% D+ M1 K& Q: d# I' PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 U0 D" h: z3 C$ \" f  I4 KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. E  {; r4 `' l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) V. ], T) {+ G6 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, V/ a* d* f( ]8 q' E- s, J; r3 o9 L% D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% @; H* }! t, v1 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 t' ]0 ?* B6 W5 O& C9 J8 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ R/ V# _+ W9 n& Z" o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( v0 s* B/ ?  N2 J$ V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- e( C9 x6 b& i; A  {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" o0 M1 X* U8 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) k  T5 ?( y/ U3 W' {$ k, v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 `+ i$ l. M1 _& b! ~+ F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) l$ _4 Y6 Y0 ~, x4 g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" ^/ y$ ^: A1 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& N1 j# V, t" R( K' C: a9 F+ G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 Z( H1 H% S) l: l0 U& A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' n9 O; f& L3 L) [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ w7 u3 q$ i, \9 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- a  a4 s; S- \<P>I regret not dying</P>
. Y& o. m. R" R0 \4 W. B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 X: s" _( _5 T: I6 q# {' j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 a- I* V; z+ W4 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& y" V/ r+ `6 [! |5 X  U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 H' w0 h' ?, I1 d" x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 ~0 i6 _( s1 V. q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% T9 W* Z( w! V3 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 ]+ N3 T6 u6 p: R9 D0 S: j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# Y: c" K' P/ A# } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) V" Y  w* M+ ]1 y: F  h  X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>