【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ Y, k% U6 Y4 w% m# C# QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. t: s1 g5 m) u- J" j" K- b5 m9 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! A! m' G. h5 _: yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" l( b% L# h% U& vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; Y" _: \: i/ ~8 e2 y! }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& m  X" h- F' \9 Z+ }: C: _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: c3 ~; [3 _" DNothing can compare to my love
0 |% |* I- M* {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* _* n3 O: ]. H0 [; `, G% ^( K- X+ OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  f- R/ p8 j. ^3 N8 }2 c( HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 k" S% @* d* n7 `# S" oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% T9 c5 V( d4 Y* h  L& o" x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ W; k& S3 p5 y' g: v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' f; Z; R' c, Z' q# r5 a5 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 J/ s! T/ A8 N# I* G5 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. g4 J  H4 Z& u+ A; h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% D- d$ @( c! [: S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ h0 j/ l9 u! L$ C: d# f. a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 [+ {( r  n& q) j  [. W# }/ X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* l; q* F! \. r7 T6 e$ F  W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) a- @& J# p. n8 p7 N: N7 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! _2 I- L$ R  q7 F% ~8 \7 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, h5 M8 A8 ]. m& S; I; z- z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ p1 b+ S% Y  J/ Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 o" d# K+ m& n7 P8 @3 B) |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, [# j+ W- D/ l; @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 v2 W' l' F9 P$ D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 M" F' R8 z; Q9 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& ^0 O4 J8 z% ~; ~: P, O9 q4 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& _3 c. i6 N1 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 `# d( Y; s) H% k, t1 s; b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) K1 }0 H8 d. y. ?5 h" x* L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* @1 V( s( K3 b4 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; A  d6 u/ g8 p2 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 ?7 K- Y  G" D1 V$ m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ Z( C2 ^! T! u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 }# a& D2 b1 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ y# u7 \7 y4 q) r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( `4 Y* |2 i1 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 U1 B$ S: v6 ^0 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# ]" l" R4 k( ]1 p  V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>