【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 Q/ p  {. }! X$ l. J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! ~& C; K0 ]8 W3 f2 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 P* Y) l. b* X4 AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 l$ l' L" P$ Q' J( \( \! o& |The sky is happy down to its soul
% p3 w$ h5 ?) K& a% L* T/ IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; x9 z6 }7 x; cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 Z2 ~. u) ^4 Y% h6 \- p4 VEvery other word you utter is love
! w% ?8 |- e8 ?+ A& A! P- fI really want to know just how much you love me
  |5 w) H6 k. B) E& uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 `% I4 E9 T' zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. s8 T' M6 _. k# J% J4 z4 f# _9 MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( h4 Z. B5 n& n" u: w4 OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' c: z; r; u2 p9 AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- c* L. L, S- y" C& C+ ?/ wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 A. Z) O6 ~9 v) ?( l0 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 [+ w6 u! ?& j) k! |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' q! d2 ^- c8 F6 p, N0 O, v; h1 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; y7 y; E& r9 Z3 L+ d9 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  B8 g" D' H) `2 ~, H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 E' O+ S& R& F3 C" S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) U7 r0 ?( t1 W6 d# V3 E! d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) p* d: o9 l- @7 R5 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 r) O* `: ]# @2 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' N: J) H: f' {2 S2 n<P>你无需担心</P>
' u- c+ w4 u- c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 f& m* ]- @0 D. t6 H* K7 a- ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& }# v, T1 B4 b. T8 D( f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( L. b/ `- {2 V. y; `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  s" o: l, b# ]5 Z" y9 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) I' |1 N. ]9 i/ b% n8 G5 u7 u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 v. ~6 _9 S) o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& o- d, r1 z6 F$ F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 J/ n/ g) w: `: n, l- S3 S8 p2 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 a# B( {  f/ i  n7 x* c5 {# M% `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! g% `& e* Y8 S- |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 {% w/ N0 |) [: Y8 w0 e  {: Z" ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; a2 q% w9 y# x: m5 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! b: ~! F( E6 D; \! i<P>I regret not dying</P>
: }5 W! ]& h- p- c; \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( i) U4 Y7 i( Y0 i5 ]1 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" s$ d  o9 O' A, U& k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 L9 q4 h# W" z+ b( ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* ^% P6 o" w# @% n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% V& g4 J2 s% v  C5 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' e$ _' y7 N, b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% c, d, G# L- x' }8 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 o+ q5 X; Y1 W( A9 \- u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ I3 S8 W% _# ~3 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>