【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% g/ U: {* s0 G" F; q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 m/ F; O- V. C' _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 @" N% D+ l7 F$ }4 h2 l; w5 \8 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; c& R' j7 A' O; P+ V6 C, }6 ySeeing the sky content with its love
: @# S7 V5 t* SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 W& q$ h, p- j% A/ HYou needn’t fear anything
+ L4 a5 S1 w+ \- {1 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 t" T: [2 Q  tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( R, C' ^2 V4 H1 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 n3 P/ l' |' V% x3 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. V+ E' x( W* IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, f1 |5 h. m  @2 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ H5 a- F% ~' V3 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& F4 r0 d; ]; _1 W6 |+ |" |! DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( I& Z' [& }- C) {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 ]+ F9 `9 z8 ^3 A: Z) KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& n  k* o9 ?; C, n* \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, Z+ c+ c( T, ~  Q9 n1 |$ Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" o" ^  G4 H! O1 d- n) J4 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& l: Z' }; R2 `! `5 s# v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( q1 c# }4 C$ ~$ r" ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ e+ B' B9 S; O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, W, c8 \4 F( T) @& c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 k9 O- W8 R3 J+ s# U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% ]& P1 V" o1 {5 C- K' E( a& x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 e: u' [+ Q7 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. j% d6 T; E& e4 s$ V; R5 v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' h& x; v' ]' @; [1 v% t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, a4 r6 C# y' m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: ~8 m! K$ E3 ?- H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ |% U9 G% y7 v; @4 t) T* i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 S; E+ n6 s' \" ~& w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ ]* P9 O  I2 h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 t( H* s5 P# C/ ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- m. o- J! k4 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ ?4 n6 u( Z/ g+ c: R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 k$ y1 C3 z7 b1 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 i& c0 \5 Y4 N) w! `; `0 q- e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ u$ ^9 q' T1 o; Y6 x. g9 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: j! r: |, s. ?# M( i0 C我请你剖开它
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6 z3 |6 ?1 h" [* n! h4 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# S" R, U7 O# \- o# @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>