【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& e& v' X/ k9 Y9 `9 R/ wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( R% e6 N% i, q0 ]+ i! Q) QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 s. |3 e$ f7 z; H" v. z& m" HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( ~1 A# [1 I* QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- Y4 ?& N5 b) U; p& k0 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: @- o9 E/ H4 R, m2 f- l% WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 @$ U; U& e5 H1 |4 \; tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ d4 G; M% ]7 R5 y/ |' n1 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- i+ M. k  E" z8 q( Q+ uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: x$ M* X- q- z( k. t+ {0 A0 }' |$ tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; L; y* J+ l- J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: I2 J5 g" \, H4 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. [; O& L" Z. a6 n/ ~$ m' A: I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" {# |" N( W4 R2 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. }# {' F" Z. V: b; Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ e3 T6 i- X! q4 V5 c$ Z( o4 ~2 S% _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 i: o6 j. C- R, ], L6 g: F7 a" T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. [, H* B  S, v1 \9 [7 ^1 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: K% F. V3 L7 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ ^' {  q3 i7 O' }, n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! _; C. C  W7 e: ]5 v; P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, }- K6 H) T% ?1 \: L<P>你无需担心</P>
, Z4 Q% R& Y. D$ S/ k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 F1 g% a. ^# {- [& m# G* x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! W; J3 G& a" [2 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ ~! g* b0 q8 @! z; _( x+ W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: B3 @9 a( J: w7 f) }6 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( `2 I4 w+ B' @: V4 g7 y3 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 C' x: x+ [) |* j) J" [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( p) S$ q* G/ h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* n- ?& I, B! _! d! U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* T4 P6 h0 l  }0 M: R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" i  `7 l2 j% B# e6 t( i) b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# b6 T$ S, c9 O' [+ Q0 q1 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. U! U  B1 k3 g7 C4 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" b" u& P* s4 Z) ?1 q' h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>