【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 o: i7 r; H$ m: k3 n3 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% G' t8 M- M% sWith the moon kissing it every night
% _% C* I3 ]% a( A, C) CSeeing the sky content with its love
- i1 u8 a; D! {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' u- ]4 p" [0 PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( |( x8 g4 w% }/ L1 lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- g# W. W1 X1 Q5 }1 W* R' eI love you I love you with all my heart
# E! z/ X- [- b* f) _5 }$ U$ F0 A% eNothing can compare to my love
& ~; g- ~! w7 W+ e: zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 F" k8 e: I5 h- O0 BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- W4 Y% ~- L) C4 jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# z% I4 ^  C5 U# MWith such a tongue as yours,
3 ^& n- W( H! |# c/ H  J' ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 J& [  ~7 q9 f' P3 |$ d/ OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ y$ E2 v( }) Z  ^( w1 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: s& k6 \% H0 V( Q9 U2 @  K+ x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% X* m, {5 L5 n& Q5 r/ M, @2 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% D2 n+ Z9 N& M* E9 s8 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 B5 u5 `! U3 {. m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 F( R9 k* f4 \/ `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% E2 @9 u$ J5 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! s& n' F' G8 |4 x  p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 |/ m( |, u& ^) i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  J4 e+ y% H$ I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ q  v& Z6 r8 r' j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& ]" g: J% A2 `: v: A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 t* M; |* x$ |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  Q2 g. B2 |7 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 a" t/ |3 S: _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: M) n1 \! `( `# z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( V  f2 w( d) l' B# }8 g! H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ H2 n3 G+ U8 M: ^% S; _! L7 h0 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 U5 Z; @4 o" O' |1 W% [' t$ {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, x" f5 I$ X, |- c( g4 |( V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: h  `  |: g: @4 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 J: E% Q' i% u5 A0 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 B* K/ C5 ]! ~" ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 M3 F9 o! X2 t: ?+ f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 P5 X! s9 \# L+ F2 P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ x4 p& p, P7 X. X* P' d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 b- ~0 x' a+ X, X4 d) f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 W$ H. n* C, h' I. X- a+ e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 m0 C2 K/ |0 T9 J1 m& o, B0 K我请你剖开它

! l4 w$ u: ?- F( J$ g. I7 f, P9 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  j% B$ j& Y; {2 o  ~4 C- Z/ c2 f4 W6 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>