【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% M4 T; p3 U3 A3 d& ?+ S+ mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( c( u  z% P% i0 U- R3 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 K( C: a% o) ~$ z- E4 a- V, EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 w- F1 K6 |# z8 k7 F1 T6 b" BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& p4 W. l: N; P6 X* @% R3 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 c- _8 R2 i$ ^1 LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( H) c% l7 R* ~8 R7 @) mEvery other word you utter is love
7 Z- d5 H+ Q9 Y+ c- g, pI really want to know just how much you love me
+ O9 A5 b( O( y+ R6 j' h  iI love you I love you with all my heart
$ L& f. m6 A5 J( V; zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& S! Q( i4 i. j& pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ @3 Z& l$ f# s4 S5 `5 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 }$ W/ e9 t. h) u$ w; j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. e& m6 g( O7 d4 T2 w8 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, a  h5 N" P5 B2 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! v$ D( B" }5 a5 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% ?, f/ r: L; r/ U) ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% p6 `. Y. W: j  X  @& u0 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! s& V, B9 u: h, @9 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! u1 y! ]- l/ H4 |$ `! C5 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: _6 V4 K+ H* H# J! b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 q  A! g" [/ Y3 v: V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 _# E  o" w7 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( G3 o( J/ `: F6 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, B. b2 m" L9 ?1 I# ^  s! `5 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* r% s: h5 E6 g% \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- _- m0 k$ t9 x- c7 c; ^8 p; Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( }- q. l- @8 j( n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* u$ t9 u' h" T' t) m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& y. s$ v( D' a: I: l2 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  Z" q" _6 E& \; \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 C4 g3 F% H- Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ M6 B7 Z$ @- q4 U) Q7 g1 m  `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; e5 @4 y) X0 x; D, {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 o# p& p# r- ~: x( s) o: u( s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! r+ j" z- f& u  n7 O6 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) @  U5 h* R! h. [: c4 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& \3 V) i9 c" z2 g+ Q: V6 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& b0 X# b6 \* @1 f/ c5 J$ ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ G" m4 L) n$ f/ ^* O$ l+ e2 j- Y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>