【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# F- Z% Z: t1 {# n) s. }: J4 P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, ?1 x: D9 R% L$ _$ GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- r( v# {9 ]6 K2 @% G; L+ XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! [5 k" b% I4 x1 [7 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( S! K" Z0 c" iEvery other word you utter is love
  |8 y1 b* |/ TI really want to know just how much you love me
# {  o+ L% a" z# p& dI love you I love you with all my heart
8 c% [9 [# E8 o3 I/ s) a1 \$ UNothing can compare to my love
, j6 B8 O5 S' e; S: WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ A3 \) ~) F* Q* {/ v3 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 R# ]2 s8 k& Q, WI’m still filled with fear
8 G# b. G) H, S' h4 u  TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ D! B0 G+ ]( e5 [( `1 k" z, ^With such a tongue as yours,
: _, x0 q% k8 _5 q! k( W( WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' b7 @/ |7 D: h( e1 f" {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 e( K% T1 W' ?# ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! z% k! l7 ^6 Q* W# l+ p% X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 E: U0 v5 J- ?1 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 ^" l/ c$ v+ Y, Z; q9 `: ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 c3 o: }4 p+ r  B! x/ j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  f% m; ?8 f  L4 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& q- w2 ^9 `# Z( x$ K( q4 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, ?7 W, l0 \5 z7 Q+ J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& Y. N1 D2 W& P7 _, L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* a' W0 f5 l  ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- c5 C# r  C- d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ b0 D4 _/ P3 g1 p$ a/ H  J" J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 O6 h! J3 H9 }5 J+ ^5 P  X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 `" C! _1 {3 t8 B) C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ D4 g# L  A+ G2 A" M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: k, ^- T" {3 F) w4 E; q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 T7 R7 d  m) p) O- l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 Q- D0 |; C* F" j! y- F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 O( }! \. g9 |) A4 L2 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. ^! z( w- O7 r1 B& f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 M2 \2 M8 N% C  T: \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ }. u: U. D- _5 X, s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; t! N2 T3 m' ?) M1 _我请你剖开它
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6 h7 f) f; O1 a$ _7 y) S/ c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 d& }5 I6 n$ y1 o# D0 j$ ~/ O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>