【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- i6 [) Q" ]) s% ?' GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ s) ~- `" b+ D1 {4 o4 P9 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 @7 u; m. b5 N. a3 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% v+ M- u" z, ~4 b6 v/ h6 |. uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" ~" y2 s4 ^+ k& X) f' `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: z& z9 [; R; t9 B6 x. TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 ~3 e. P7 A' H$ N+ P6 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 _" y# E* t1 U; p9 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 t; R% T1 F. Z% E6 oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: k9 Q7 a4 G. o7 ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  T5 b0 n9 a+ p% q: C2 UI regret not dying
+ P4 B0 \8 o2 d+ @7 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% W9 S6 u' Z; {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* n; `) Q( r: n) KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 b; S" }4 A, M3 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 i+ p. ?/ M" \/ S3 i7 C# Y+ D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' h/ |1 z* f8 h1 U, c' U6 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 g% x; ]1 @7 R& O. u) B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 Z8 l1 i' b9 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: r2 h; O; _% j& X, i9 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, t* J! \1 I. |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* g2 [/ z2 Z- n2 E: [+ j1 H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; E  o9 y# b- }+ r) W- F1 @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ i& Y& @5 J' @; N( F8 j  }<P>你无需担心</P>
, |. z4 o/ N4 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 j. u2 i1 F+ o. V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 b6 i- a1 y, v- f: P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- O+ a: q: r# _" `" ]$ F% a1 a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 `$ s. t  Z, L, o9 ~5 _- F: i" `$ r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ ^# ^1 u6 B. u( c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! B) k1 W6 l0 ~% Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) `, v( A  p2 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 p+ [. [6 a, A% N) {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# \" J! M9 Z3 }. T* U: ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 v) X1 G% d: K$ U, F. e' b! \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ }- o$ h; Z' N# X* m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ E; M/ e& Y9 L& l8 L8 h* T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 i- X- B$ `. C6 P1 D: F4 \$ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# t% N: E0 i4 J% R6 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& h. @( Y. P+ H  H2 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# t; {" R  p" l  g- `* A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; r1 F' ]1 u/ y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 I, r& {% o5 G. L  i" @9 }" a8 Y( q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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! Y9 P  T5 q* R7 K; ?% Q4 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- c# V! i  @) ^" o3 m, j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>