【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ Q) V9 J/ X8 N# S- X# a: |' {歌词我附在后面。
: p% A2 C0 z; D3 v+ G) l; fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 O2 f( h3 K/ m$ t( {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- m: F# b/ Y/ |# h9 Q0 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) B8 C7 m6 t/ V3 q/ L6 l0 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 e$ {4 m8 U' M8 S2 g% ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! ]: A$ f. z+ l8 bI love you I love you with all my heart
6 u5 @) `) O4 E. NNothing can compare to my love
; E' {5 k# F- w( n9 Y- t& |5 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) C1 D9 K  |" z2 Y5 @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! q& ^: d5 k+ C0 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! m# \) w& p5 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ n3 F- F' F+ @; f8 o4 P  h6 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; J8 @0 x8 u2 q7 y) ?$ U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% G# V/ M) L2 V; J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' b  e. b, l7 w) R% N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ ?, z/ z9 @  ?) A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# ^6 j: S* N5 l  j0 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! t" g; X' @4 l/ X" N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ C3 }4 x! e9 Q# `) `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ G2 T' i! l: Z& D6 {3 `# B3 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ ~6 _& Z0 E/ r1 C1 z* y. w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( e+ d! Q: j. n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ U6 ?) k4 U$ w2 y7 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- c* H" v  Z' [# r4 o& G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! F# H7 S6 U2 d* U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 U4 F/ K$ K: k2 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, I+ C1 \0 Y/ R3 u$ J, J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 D9 U: ~. g4 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* t1 d- Q! e7 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; o- W& o  k6 U) U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) [+ b* }& E: c+ X, m; ~, e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 X. U5 V/ g/ Y. [; ^) R4 i- l9 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 E; V  u& a1 w$ P; @, p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 v4 l- g6 U9 E5 X: o# A+ p/ ?: _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- r! _9 B( Y; [, X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ c+ O" E) _' F; ]% V  k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ d2 v# i9 H. F% o% q' V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; x) U3 ]& p# U+ }9 h, U  N7 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 w. m$ D0 `* N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, E2 |; L+ f% M! }( w6 d7 v. X- F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 P$ C+ k( ]0 y" e5 A0 W) X: D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: u7 i9 q9 ]$ e+ o8 n# M我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, [& h. M" W( B4 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>