【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ W0 G" `) \. _/ z9 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( M4 ?' s3 L6 ^8 p1 Z0 D/ OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ Y% j8 m4 S, \0 l# E! ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 {) Q! c8 F* T2 R; TThe sky is happy down to its soul
( ?( K2 s, y2 q8 d" k$ QWith the moon kissing it every night
7 }4 _; I8 o4 ^( m9 J+ _9 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" N, D' O* V: c) X: FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ U3 a; g( D* `# E9 yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: h4 D4 R7 ~, F- ]1 J7 s5 PI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ u) K3 a1 `" ^, {' n) i# L1 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 F9 n. w+ N2 Z/ n- |, PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 _/ [9 |' s7 L9 bI regret not dying
- E' Z( P( u! b3 Q7 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ R. B% _: I0 X# C" ?! PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 y) Y" `. B# c9 M/ S4 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. y; d$ ]7 ]+ u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" A- w9 K* `* j$ v- v! h0 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* \9 Z/ B5 O' O5 c5 L3 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& L% l5 I* J  \$ j4 z  J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) J& x3 C- [) \+ S, g& E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, ]  u5 y+ q% Y7 O& E9 p9 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 h3 F7 N. g, e3 j  }2 h1 f9 @2 m( U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- U8 C# r+ o, j) n/ k) S* P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 Y2 ^5 c6 n! _8 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; F8 F$ X* L& a  A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) F: M% X. \! q( c% }/ j1 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! a- D1 l% E# S9 ~4 e0 b4 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 P: _4 a- M% _5 q, z4 }' ?& x4 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 `  r  ]7 X* B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. l# N- N9 d- a0 }5 H9 U; b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: p, j0 ]7 ^2 s) |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- @2 T; L  C% a+ n" P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* h2 w+ l- O' E. z" w# n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. S5 ?$ _$ f/ Z4 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 n; r9 w2 ^! `- i  ?" f$ R1 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 }: B! C4 ?  w2 f4 a, z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ g3 U- n! \3 u. l+ ]% n( ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 j. I' g, F9 r  H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 E; V+ O- K, ~. B( K- o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! L; d$ V) f1 ?: j$ x& `& B- V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ B5 A) x) ]% X% K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& X: N7 s# r2 o( X) Q2 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% ^7 d5 I3 _) @# C7 b( [! M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& x7 J$ U9 r8 I% O4 ]4 F" e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ T+ S$ [/ p; c6 L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. u# ~/ Q& J/ [7 T9 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>