【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" z- b1 f8 R, O# ~9 K9 `* F0 M3 EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) X3 ~# [2 g: d/ g2 K4 i$ s2 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 _; S5 d! c7 E. g# W1 g0 ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 L( S& x  v2 |6 Z) Q* nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 C( Y1 ?5 a7 b0 d! eYou needn’t fear anything
7 n2 u. `1 V2 h; ?( tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; `/ n9 t6 C: f1 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
$ h* Z+ o; k" p9 t- w2 n" PNothing can compare to my love
; C& D* v% v+ Y4 \& r8 E" l* }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" ?% Q! B4 e/ u1 OI want so much to see inside your heart
& D, `6 v) y* _6 }& @1 h" LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 S2 ?: F3 E1 p" D0 u$ s4 L+ x: XI regret not dying
4 k9 b% {# m9 ]! S. i9 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 Z* |# l. g/ k  H& H9 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; R$ `) X1 v2 o& n+ s5 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* e* ~" l/ H9 K# S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' L- A. y, r% x  P* P$ ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 a# z; f% e6 t, @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; j% o( O" z' F! K8 F! c+ W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  A, @4 G+ l" N" f5 o/ E9 E& n) {! m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 W1 D& ^: d' G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ D3 }0 Y% F# i* N: N1 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  [/ ~6 E0 D0 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! Q7 ~* [7 S5 Y9 w0 \% T0 G; }, v7 h- k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 j$ `8 U$ I" E) b7 Z+ l. R% p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 O* e& l- h0 A0 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 S/ b4 |4 v0 I# |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" A* G6 `# Q1 X$ n2 M  a, R) w! @3 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 m, v! D0 ~0 S+ t* s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 ?" y! @  s* V! ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, q# b! _/ Q9 ^4 o9 Z* `+ B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 K' X& j: ~0 w6 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  m. g; d* z9 R6 B0 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ D# o% e* _! @/ K; o6 T" x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
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$ m$ ^% D* D* e) `2 }! ?2 N+ V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( [* y! h. Q* [( d4 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 e# m5 h+ O( K! B! K1 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# k) f2 P4 Z0 t" [' [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ ?% x1 U4 Y7 h4 Y% G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% t* t5 F9 r1 ^3 N9 y+ G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# {; l8 }# H: N1 {6 ^( l! d8 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>