【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 O) @9 W$ B7 q# Y* i& ~: r歌词我附在后面。
" a* @' i% ]3 h7 j! pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. K0 f0 n/ W9 `' _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 P  q) O* y" i/ h/ `The sky is happy down to its soul
  v, S4 p$ G  ?: \4 kWith the moon kissing it every night
+ z% S' Z7 L) r, G4 O) a* nSeeing the sky content with its love
7 `4 B+ p9 b% G  c. {, jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 K* p- V! x0 m0 K( N: Y6 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 G  m6 f' ?. fI love you I love you with all my heart
  [  |! B' z' e$ l- `! FNothing can compare to my love
" a. E: F* p. ^, CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: Z9 ]$ k( v9 e" O0 S' h: s" T. RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) f# ?- t+ o) X3 i, uI’m still filled with fear
7 C! W  z( X! aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) P) B' ~  N5 O4 u/ H& h! EI regret not dying
9 ^3 D# t* Y7 X$ x  TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ X2 Z4 v/ V2 L7 N1 VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# L7 N  l: f& @1 U5 {: C# JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: L! [4 ]! y  y# }' X' {, h6 J0 O  O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* @2 b9 `) Y- u% A0 D2 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 n+ g3 c2 i0 K5 i" V2 `4 e- p8 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 M* `' X3 l! J% R7 g# L+ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 d5 n8 o1 ]) O. y, Z( _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" q& E3 b) i# Y5 O6 q6 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, Y0 H% k" r! |9 x* ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 V4 ^/ x* t3 t1 R. j8 z# \  B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. W3 a! {0 E  [: M) _9 Q# d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 R5 E. ]' m7 P6 Q  u<P>你无需担心</P>
& k2 \' H5 A" q/ F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 p! G$ S& Q) t9 r) e+ T1 Z( X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 R$ L- e6 y# ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: }  @" y. r) P3 p0 P) ?, ]3 H3 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* O: G# n2 H  B; z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) d- g& g$ O2 _8 w% k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 p6 V" X# _) Y# V5 f9 U' g8 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# {% A* f' V, A6 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 V& ?) u6 P8 H" Z. p: V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- J/ r# }2 w2 i  I3 @' F% `3 P+ [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 l' E, ~7 l& x7 D  ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 D1 K- ?/ s+ M0 f- \<P>I regret not dying</P>
; ^4 M- v) Q3 v% n, P/ d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) X" G$ V" Q- v; z. ]* N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* B* a. b9 g" x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: b* Z3 D+ k. N$ k/ ?+ m7 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* d8 v, ]" f& n/ ?) M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 L) K% p) O4 w0 E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>