【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" h9 _1 i; _; S% s' mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- k0 W! U! U8 x3 AWith the moon kissing it every night
7 U3 E" X$ \8 c, tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  e1 r2 {1 o) E1 {2 Z) HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& V! T- ^  {0 Q9 R- F' AEvery other word you utter is love
. I+ L- X- K& Z) x0 E3 A& hI really want to know just how much you love me
& b) J2 Q7 x- A# Q. q/ {" f8 eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ r5 a. u6 K& CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 G# K4 I0 D1 L- v; ?6 w& jI’m still filled with fear
6 N$ @% a  ?+ |" }( Y4 R8 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 m' f2 \, A4 D0 cI regret not dying
2 l- s- l& d/ c8 t$ w& QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. K% P# r+ Z) ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, _+ {7 Z1 L0 Y, _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) c- c7 _. _' N* L; [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ k' m; s) \. l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  N4 }- m& V+ [/ F4 G! d6 \( Q; Z7 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; ?- o1 c; l# `. N- K. w3 O2 Q  U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' D  \& [! F. Y- `' Q/ n) a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% D! I: D. M" p1 u% ?) @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 W* E3 M% B3 x) J" y( b( s) m0 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 F' w! D  L+ W6 e+ R4 @5 J9 @4 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 |# y5 x6 z% g: Q/ [2 w: H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: P2 e' I  ~6 c. N! E# J3 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( J3 q0 t7 B0 Q. m; m& G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: h8 b- E, x2 k. I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ]% ^7 x: T! }$ Q8 o. M9 }2 J9 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 w( Q  f: L- ]+ H" c9 |% @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" I/ c: e* ^- ^+ l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& S& h: [7 w/ x, i& t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" V$ l- ^8 s  q+ K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& x# d9 [6 k& P3 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 q4 S( u# @2 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ `( {8 e$ |+ n7 A6 d: N7 b. [8 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" P8 j7 U  r% K* _9 r: ~1 u2 N2 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 D( ?- ]1 }$ ?& g. Y- G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. R! v5 T: }, z6 u2 S* O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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