【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# V# ^4 _# I9 o4 c/ {, a. M  x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 H. [. }: `- ?" L4 i9 P; o6 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, u8 i. L) {9 Y9 B! MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; v& ?/ ]2 R5 K- i- ~8 Z) xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: L4 X, v# s* b! E( qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 N( ]1 ?& y+ L, _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. b2 N, |; @' b0 X, f: WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# S, C/ N: I. B) Z1 z, m' hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 v' c! Y7 V, Q% m3 d9 X/ nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; J5 i& Q2 I0 @I want so much to see inside your heart
6 l9 X0 q. B5 @/ D- OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 v! S$ B$ ~6 s1 f: G1 oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; S( B0 e' j7 Z6 OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' i$ h) V6 a; X( |- xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; u, {. O) z. p; F2 r8 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# ]4 B  z7 U1 }; q/ U1 _8 [$ R" W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* q* R& P6 Q$ ^$ \/ I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* M; |/ D# t5 {# C- d5 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 z. T3 [% I* c- @: h8 _. c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- E+ ~0 E! s* ?' P) Z, C* q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 q8 T* ?. u. S8 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% o9 X6 B8 R- |) N& z  V0 ?9 z: Z  V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 k; M3 E2 P/ G+ s9 i2 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* M& P% `9 Y! G& e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; W$ B4 q. v2 W/ b4 ~% e0 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 G4 \% m5 _2 w* S' L<P>你无需担心</P>
+ j% U1 a; o2 U: q' Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- ^% {# o, i/ c- i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ Y- V2 p6 o; E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 L+ W( v- T9 t' V& l& V7 l: f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 I! R8 x2 g( G$ ]* p' D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! ?* y2 i. M) t. t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 J8 E' \- o8 s# J9 R6 e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' i% q$ G2 s1 s4 F2 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ ]5 x' W! _2 \+ f) u5 L# H+ |<P>I regret not dying</P>
" v2 ?  B: O; s: I5 i9 e- |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 H' R, F9 p# x6 N2 {. T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 i3 Y9 r5 @' \* u& [# a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 I( M% |% p8 M: o+ b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: ~  g7 t' d. U$ u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 z2 K! b* t3 v- O+ Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 H* R3 P- I7 {2 P9 j6 ^5 O( s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 {: u8 W; ^# S* {7 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* s# R, u. R/ u( ~* y$ B6 c) k9 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 n9 l$ Z( E# _; [; y5 s# [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" c6 C; ?; b8 S$ q  {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 F  b0 w% s+ d" R+ `) r* R5 z( w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>