【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% K& n6 T+ B- v' ]. W1 l( e1 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 o( Q9 I: F1 J/ j: oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 j: [% y/ w% U" y7 |1 W; z) y  rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" Q( d! ~  i6 S. F% T/ h: j; sYou needn’t fear anything
1 T# f* u0 W5 j; ]$ D. TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, _  B, z# J: sNothing can compare to my love
) u3 o! `  k( T% F- D6 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# c# w8 `: r+ L9 U/ l2 F! @# X3 ]. O7 B  _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 x% A$ M9 m0 `" @( RI want so much to see inside your heart
: R  h! D4 J, `  t7 @( XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; D9 h* g# m/ n8 c& xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 w$ d3 S( ~3 Q. F6 D; p# {" }& ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 H# ?  V8 r3 m5 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  f* ]5 e0 C  F) eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' S1 _+ J9 m" O+ h) O& Z5 E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' N, X$ c2 J9 u+ L# D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 X$ y1 ^. _1 l9 e& \6 X, m; F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 {3 @' B7 v$ b8 f6 m, g( z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ y% }/ z6 T/ ^. f9 m1 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) \! j% p, G+ G- j* M7 ?7 u3 s7 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  _/ F9 k  H& f) y9 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* V. @$ J7 U- t! ^. z0 @2 Z9 M, t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 p4 T& ?! C- j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& P" \& A* h! h: B# D; O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ k0 b8 R9 L' J$ V: k$ T$ r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. x$ z/ X6 P: {7 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 d$ y9 _: F- j) j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# _' W- J1 F7 g+ ]8 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( |4 {8 _/ Y; ~3 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: R; h$ y1 n* T. x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 K8 j7 P% ~/ {! |8 U. n# F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 p- m0 W  R- R  U3 V6 ]: d5 K$ u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( M2 I" r. J- |8 m4 u$ A+ N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- s* a4 q; t8 t$ c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# P6 u! B, E8 ]6 g0 e* J1 ~" g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ~3 C/ C9 K8 Q% I% f% _: S, o4 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 n1 w7 S0 g( t" N+ R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* y+ m6 Y+ U  W. ?; l% l8 F1 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 r+ ^4 W! Q$ j( i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 o" f1 n4 {+ m/ N! W1 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 U. {- m! U! c9 h2 f6 H% S# `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>