【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& k2 B& Y" a2 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 j. s4 X0 q+ Y  @) |/ h, [The sky is happy down to its soul
5 ]" o! v2 h4 y' q  g" G# CWith the moon kissing it every night
; Y3 l; m$ g. O# j" MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 V  s, I; I5 fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- y, `3 @# p/ a. u4 f9 cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 w8 X& I+ @$ d4 B+ R4 d* JNothing can compare to my love
& j6 [% l- j. U, [" bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 Q7 \9 q# U0 m: I' _5 ~0 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' ^; d" r: V2 _$ s& D6 LI want so much to see inside your heart
' L7 o) `* p) }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, B9 A( @$ A( Y7 Z2 t. n0 h3 ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ e7 Y* p2 {- U3 C( p- KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 @7 z% {, v" ]) {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, T, Q! t9 R( s1 i9 s. VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: e8 `. e# ~: r2 q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  F  D& h; F7 o) c" M$ l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' F. i! S# P# Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ i3 N% k. m- q3 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ J3 S3 W( T& ^; b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, S+ i6 H# p, i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 c4 F. e* N$ v5 t6 Y; }0 N: U6 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& [2 w. J$ O) B0 O2 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- S$ t$ Y; Y& d+ q4 D6 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 x8 l' h' |8 K) Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ }, F5 P1 V4 ]  E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 j3 L8 d( ]' p; Y$ K  M0 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% M3 M. e+ I1 ]* f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ K5 U9 X) Z$ J& a' V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' o* a" ^  R. N$ J! u7 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ g- D+ x, I* w4 V0 q% S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& J, J5 B( v; p) R6 L# b% Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! L( e# E, t; [0 T8 C: t& i0 {6 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& x* |& c: h/ p; ^& n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 G1 D& m4 U  d8 v# C4 J. r/ H' n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 `9 W9 c* n  R+ A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* w! C, N8 I3 }1 @6 h; P  X, _<P>I regret not dying</P>
- c3 }% K! C" ^7 T- {/ B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ Z: |) f! c( b+ M# c. {7 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ?, P4 F# Z8 t/ a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 L( c4 g5 N; [2 ?4 `' y2 M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; j# S9 d* \7 \& n8 R" L1 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 K9 K) k) _, E) y* y: p& v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- x+ E! \/ q1 t! I6 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 T: y2 D! G. Y  F, C$ r- M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 p% z9 p1 V4 X2 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 R- M3 E  W2 y; U7 I9 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% U% s- B. T8 G我请你剖开它
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: |; D& @2 O3 V" O& t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>