【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) }) f9 k* o6 B" m( s0 N3 \歌词我附在后面。
2 ?" U) P$ T- R, BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 A. r+ {; k) P* W, u: o; w1 n6 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# Q# B! V# t/ F1 _9 g6 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 V* u+ q( P. S+ u. MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ U/ C! \4 v; W6 k' hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& w6 Y# m0 o( o6 ^& Z2 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# l' h8 c1 P2 o( U' u9 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 N( J3 B! N4 U( X7 S6 R* y" A: {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 g' s2 \1 r# k1 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 |& J3 J( k& g( c  F$ W7 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. ^/ T- R! _- a" e1 Z7 q* N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* H. W1 n( x- f; g6 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 S- Y" {! f2 z8 k) q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; w0 m8 K8 n0 L. f/ u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 D; \! ]# y! T# m9 C1 O. R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 R  k" ^0 o7 \  f7 C! r6 |) o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( q1 p! r2 H. \" R) o% L+ T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; v4 ]- ~+ P) p: `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: D* |: r, {7 A, y9 D; V) S7 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  `, v, Z' o- s! t6 `9 H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 r: L( U4 N( B% T0 H  Z% p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 I" k$ s" M  g7 @( ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ \$ d6 h8 J# B+ S0 Y# H1 [) `/ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 O9 P2 `6 Y: w3 |* S3 {& O) I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 a6 n& u7 C# a5 T% \+ v: K5 ~5 c0 {7 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" l3 W* I# M/ N/ Y. B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% X* ~1 p, A% ~% Z: \: t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 [/ b# u# x2 ?& j3 Z( g& x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 _8 K8 H  T, ~* ]$ K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) U5 ?* V: r7 y1 Y) _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! j* I& ^, f/ x4 \/ U! N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 H' x+ _( D+ P' C5 n8 t8 H我请你剖开它

% |5 V0 c5 f) r  @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>