【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; e+ ^& n1 F9 E- X8 Y$ }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 u* v5 C* c, Z4 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 t  R; k% k& W0 W* \" JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ l( x. E7 O+ E: `& @3 [' E$ iThe sky is happy down to its soul
) U0 Y, _' ~  A6 GWith the moon kissing it every night
% ^6 J" k- |" ?" P+ B* u( W. W; LSeeing the sky content with its love
; R' j" n4 C1 }. @! {0 @' ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 E, v$ J! N' k' v1 ]  PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, H  Y- W& }, eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ l8 \: ]& g# s  F- [I love you I love you with all my heart
2 q/ W) E; R8 \3 U+ b' [; [, @Nothing can compare to my love
0 s4 b0 [/ D6 A, d% tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ u( s2 p( r- v6 SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ c8 o; P* o# y% QI regret not dying
9 R! i# ]! S% U( J( ~0 J, j* AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& y9 Q& O; p( s' v9 N' zWith such a tongue as yours,
. ^6 d. e1 s& ?# Q; y1 {. s/ w* F$ mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 J6 Y0 m9 j" `* ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) y2 W, q: W' E  g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( a* Z  f( }- q9 D6 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  Z8 W' w' r% E6 o! f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, L9 e0 j5 s# v" {9 J# @9 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' b: a+ Y! w) c5 x; ]$ c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 b/ u  O2 M! u9 j; [% E$ B; t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 w5 T9 F# v# C- q/ E) F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; F" z; ]7 j8 @$ F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, B3 q/ Q- K7 e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- z) R- e# U- ~: \# Q/ W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# ?: q2 a2 K  {6 b% B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. K1 l: t) D) n* M2 n$ _- }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) f/ r! @  N  j, z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' X2 h7 u, x0 _; I- s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' E9 k1 q2 L& a, @) A4 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 m9 C% J8 C: ?( k5 w# h+ Q/ i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- A  a6 b9 B. a% h3 T# V8 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 k0 g0 w7 t# r% n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* R3 E. W/ J% h( G, g, N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, i4 m0 h  Z. v* @3 a8 @9 ^# q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 z2 Q* c0 u/ d  }% v) U" o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 \4 T. R0 `. N; F) [2 v6 o, z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& W) z1 o" t" J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 c! Z% O  {) f# Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  X/ C5 s  U$ W( E# {: g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 g0 J7 o- V5 F% _4 ^: X: J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( c, k4 C" ~* d+ n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 d* y  M) U. P9 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) `% U, ]! W9 \) {/ J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 U* q. i$ M- _- u( h  z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 c- `- z: R, _0 h" S" Z/ q; i+ O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# I/ Y) t% \/ f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

2 {2 N6 k! x' J/ ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' Z9 P4 Q5 A, C; {/ P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>