【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 i5 F- p4 d* K# r, zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! N, ]  ^5 F7 u/ BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 W' Y# Q+ G1 u/ T* x2 ~' B# H. wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  t) H" b6 P- ]- X8 GWith the moon kissing it every night
2 \0 R; ]7 R" b) A% ]- \Seeing the sky content with its love
) h, Q  ]: w+ C- _/ y5 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 d# H' ^, h$ I2 }/ N' u& RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% Q3 F% s+ t$ K4 IEvery other word you utter is love
& \3 M9 i' u% v+ E; p# N( lI really want to know just how much you love me
1 j, e0 b" V; lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" h3 _1 Q+ c5 p7 N7 e( NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 [, ?) E: O1 x8 ]( lI want so much to see inside your heart
7 n, p* V, q8 M( S, PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- G. [6 N, ]) Z6 Q2 }# M4 aI’m still filled with fear
+ P8 l) f4 R9 g4 I, @* AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: y2 O* ?( N6 i1 t- d  a) SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  c6 U2 }2 A2 e2 P9 V. |With such a tongue as yours,
" c* j7 _) g3 ~7 s  ]4 S" g# @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( D) O8 ?' Q, T- s" a& ]; ]8 P6 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 \& H9 c5 j( z* o% r5 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% o+ e! M8 G! J* ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ |$ Q- N4 e, Y, G( a* u6 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 D5 o) q+ T3 T( D5 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" H1 w' i6 Y' {' f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- W# U7 e3 F! |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# d0 s# p! Y3 Y, [  }3 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 I+ l5 e' V6 u! }" C9 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; M9 j) D4 Y5 B5 Z5 C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 O- `4 w. U+ C. W: ~  C0 w. p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 v& W7 e1 d2 O4 T; n5 _5 f- O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  b! z: c# M: Q( z; b3 z0 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: |" S. }  }" D& m5 U0 r: u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& l# I- d/ u; p  {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) p6 F) o/ J8 J- ^' p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% N5 |6 F* u! V* z  H) z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  z# |" ?2 d/ ^$ b5 E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ R0 J, E$ O- T3 B2 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ V: G6 p" A$ y( t0 n: q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 L' W- G) [) D1 u! r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' G* H. ^. ?3 b  m% v6 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 R  y: u( ~. p  E3 m0 u- ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. Q* j. k1 d$ ]/ }( g' `/ F. c; [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( l/ Y7 T/ i6 J* ?1 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ R2 {" }3 k0 [, b6 |. L# \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 Q1 j2 z# n% M* I, y. W4 T) V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ x2 A; Y. M- P0 W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>