【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: @) d1 m' l  T; P7 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# R- ^& h7 o- d# t4 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 J( q; F: [' P# d8 @. II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& W+ T5 i9 W  q1 {& K7 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- y# z! }& j6 T& a% aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 [8 |0 @7 O0 z: gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& Y* V/ \8 b- Z6 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, {4 y9 J5 J3 f7 A/ f* r( y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, @+ k; R5 Q5 C; [$ x. D) t8 L6 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 ^/ s# l1 o2 k; d  \5 H1 S: j3 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! e, k* H% P: V3 k* b9 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& r# x3 O5 j6 ~" I) }7 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ H4 K9 i# P1 |+ P+ P) V" }% \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 _8 i; D6 l) P' c0 G" U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ H* m8 e0 x0 h5 e5 a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) N5 O3 w3 o/ M, s" f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* H' r; t+ A$ q1 B) C% d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 y6 D6 i; h/ i: w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 J+ M+ X( E8 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( J* V3 C* Z  N& T9 T<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! K% K. r, @, j& e1 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 Y) O; K8 p5 A" c2 X- Z" n2 [# j# r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 q: d- f8 ^+ A. `: ^+ f' x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 k' P) e6 ~, }% f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; o9 y+ N) E6 |) m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 a! }$ m8 \4 T) h) u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 x4 O) G; L, V- F4 p" r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, n' Q4 a: K% S/ ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; X* U) E. e6 r) O/ S$ S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% [$ w2 @/ O; N* @8 d! Z) j$ \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 H6 T8 O; D2 {  H# y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ x- B  Z; O) g5 N2 d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 f6 U. w% l! L. i) F/ v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& n; u4 @. \4 C9 v' t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* Z5 Z1 Q$ z1 N5 @, [; ^. C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ?0 v8 Q, }5 x6 Q% ?0 {5 U4 p2 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
/ t6 G8 {6 w) W+ b/ c
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* j8 O  q$ `4 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>