【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ V% A+ ?1 g9 C/ `; Y# s( U# t* rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 l# O! l# W+ _% c# p( l  ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 N/ a0 ?" B  p6 CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" x: Q- X4 k- d+ kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- q; ~! B" H" z2 W/ CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 [% T5 G/ Q/ D) K- {# ?/ lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 ~' F; c+ @! I8 \2 {" XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 P# q' k8 M9 p& {I’m still filled with fear
  _0 b4 [$ g) d! q3 tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 M" l3 X0 U+ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& ^8 b$ F) z3 oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. o% ~, `7 D( w+ v  d0 ?  L. mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 N  a0 F1 J7 X. ~2 v5 u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, H. S( U5 I. G9 D' r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% v! C- U* e; T5 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! n5 r5 H3 t/ s, o% l- K* d* p& |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 N& B5 W9 d3 W+ m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 Z, c& m9 e- l1 w5 N& H# M1 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 e; B. A. u5 W5 m- F* m) K' r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  y! R8 G: s& w& v6 a! M" O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 j5 U( ?! \/ [- {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 M! r& W' ^' r) b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 C  w& a; j& P% t  x& e: S4 ?8 t( p: A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 E9 h- J, n6 F% m" F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 R/ |9 \8 x% ?6 k5 R7 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) O& Z0 q, B' z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 V* ]! b5 s5 j4 @; X3 q9 }. s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& e; ~5 [, \* g4 K$ S/ O! P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- l9 r- E% B! B9 W5 q# ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( V1 _4 c/ v: l* E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 N* m7 [$ c& h1 ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 e7 B* f( O, e7 F0 [7 z1 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% `" @+ m, m, I1 g% d& V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 q; N5 Z) K& ~5 `( R2 r# A( Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- t1 e" E0 F0 u" Q* I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( E! u: e& q; g8 n! \  r$ B7 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>