【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 S' F( l* @. cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 P! Z3 \$ {" Y2 {9 c' NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) ~* F4 v! {4 c' m: j( D# _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. ?' V4 L* i+ qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 U7 x& o' X0 v$ NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ A9 Z4 n3 }9 a$ n* D2 I* ^; H$ fEvery other word you utter is love
8 v3 C  P, e6 V7 M' ]I really want to know just how much you love me
2 ?. @6 D! L& @$ |* X% v" ^I love you I love you with all my heart
% h9 I+ f1 Y' E) {7 c% h. lNothing can compare to my love
7 d/ S4 Q* y, M5 i' h; tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 N: q8 O/ N, h  l3 o1 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% c3 _, Q8 u' `' x& |, PI want so much to see inside your heart
& d0 w7 z- Q3 P) ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; h' t( L$ \  L; C+ F, Q: ?6 I1 lI’m still filled with fear
, v# K' Y" l+ \4 m4 \- JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& `, [: n; E4 T  VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, A& S5 O8 e% p% D, ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: t1 `3 z9 G0 o# gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, [8 R8 k; ?/ a$ C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; ]: _( T0 U( q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: K- {6 m2 M, i) J8 x6 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& Q$ j, }0 E( r0 ^9 R4 A0 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( m4 a- X2 F  J2 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. f+ Q4 n) L, r" d9 p- S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ O9 r9 u) i  g# A& s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 ]/ y$ ]9 [- ~" s8 s+ `3 W% C9 [) `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; Z  u; Z4 z; F; {9 I3 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  D+ d; m  y% I. |7 ?. w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 e: p0 w) q6 z8 h' p0 b8 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ~5 I- M' N5 w7 g' @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 }" {+ S! v5 j' g: e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' F* i: `; b2 H' f( `# C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 r1 S# n# m* ]  n( w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 c  r3 w& e( X$ g" k9 e" r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 p& R# X  U# G0 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ S3 R' q. {1 J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 h- v: @1 p# b8 W$ J! t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 D$ F6 F5 @( i) o' o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* \9 ~* M0 ^5 ]3 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 E9 u( ?6 G! W' v; n, R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, t0 _% R) V4 |' k6 a8 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 |5 C! k" o9 O" Y3 l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; u; y) n* K6 W3 \* T( `! o% m, l- S我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>