【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# X1 `1 x2 Y* mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 \, M& f- |5 |5 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 b4 D) K! ]" \; |4 [1 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
  e( l' |; T4 a1 }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 R+ I9 S; E+ N6 [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) i9 m% F- ]9 ~% P# M4 T4 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ W) E; f3 ]3 k  X: _I want so much to see inside your heart
1 u* X* T3 Y3 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 B7 V! Q, @9 y6 x0 N9 t8 E2 j' J. KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) {1 ]6 {) G) c$ oI regret not dying
7 H9 a/ P3 Z6 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& i' U" |, V" Y& ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 l9 q3 V9 r& W+ A' ]8 Y+ [! N7 }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 ]0 j4 f4 f' u8 O1 Q' C" @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, T+ _% [# }& ?4 o2 o% W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 D: g) @2 H: F! \6 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) I1 F. P0 ?: ~8 Z+ [* u; h% s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' C6 f; b* Q- Y0 U0 v) ^1 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 ?& K9 v6 C, \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ Q, H6 R" P( r" S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! ]! a: }! \# w# S; }. K! ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; @  r/ _4 u4 t- t/ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# v" r5 ?# g7 k. c1 w% s% ]2 f& `/ s( \) [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 @; A; v: h' [5 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ }2 f% ?! @6 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, u6 \0 n1 l- a8 H! ?. `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. q( u2 z( m; s9 w! |4 g4 Z" D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( h/ }6 P  T* I6 i+ z. Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" V* {. A% q  J  d8 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! `" U4 g# b, ^# |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; ^3 c9 \. A. I/ }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) E- n6 o: N" c9 `) s. w, q9 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) S0 A# `5 O& W, W3 e$ S5 B# F, k6 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- l4 m5 a. r% j* [  Q  p1 l" R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) f6 r% z9 y/ ^. v8 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 I' e% f5 x# ?5 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# N/ F* E( h9 m! {( b5 n' I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; N, g& f7 P1 l: f# W' u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, J; t. h) [1 e0 f3 j- ?$ |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ e- H. s: a# c4 t  j' n1 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 z/ L: A  s  g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 ]3 [' r' x1 w6 x2 e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, \& U8 n$ v/ h+ G0 S$ K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- d$ g" f- }1 F3 f/ }9 `, @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% V& \1 H* r' A+ k8 h6 \! f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) Z2 y. _- E8 T. `$ d4 R3 F: ~" M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 W, v( X9 |6 M6 ^7 C- E& E2 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. v4 o& c% ?+ x! S9 s  [, N4 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>