【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
( I1 Z8 F& F9 l/ }# ?& w; `# `5 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 ?0 t# ]5 c# G6 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 v: ^8 c0 P; {, U, j' E, s: [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' `9 I: y- u  b: Z8 fI really want to know just how much you love me
3 L1 j: e! r& ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# H" C0 H# u; TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- T) h! @/ w5 n- P5 yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& z& F3 G3 J$ A6 X$ b9 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' H5 Q' p  i! ^  R& fWith such a tongue as yours,
8 O- R  Z4 y% F1 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 l, g8 V& B9 ^' oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 I6 Z/ Z  H1 ]+ @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! e9 r: h* [5 `& v6 o! F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 E! t( C( l8 P/ T( F1 I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% h8 r- z0 s$ s1 s1 U3 T  r* a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  y+ v' [8 A6 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 q) M+ T7 S  l" X/ D& {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! U1 k4 j2 m, }+ U/ A# X9 o, d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 {) @2 I2 j- Y2 ^8 s* _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ c$ |) [/ k+ [$ T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: Q0 N1 U6 S( U4 K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% n! ~2 ]) q4 \1 b6 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. B$ _2 B7 j6 Y( p( j: \# I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ j5 D. U" \3 H& k3 B1 I$ g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. D! g1 x; u' [( ]4 T; x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# {8 ]! k" m5 v) M: U8 x; f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) }* n( i+ a' w$ N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ p: O- w( j3 x- Q$ i) J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. j$ G0 E& ?& K, x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) s. Q7 |  }% j. Z3 V0 i: [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 Y8 S: X) X1 @  p0 f" @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& c: ?3 M" Q% B6 ]$ b" Y% w% {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ s" \) x# v! Z9 O: b; L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! k0 D: Z% E! d9 Z9 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& |& O! _7 a2 O& Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 X) n8 G9 c2 v# C+ w% W' u1 Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 `" g/ @/ i: m4 Q* p. y# x7 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) m2 Y9 u% V, ^+ a" i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 E8 |) }' z2 c) z1 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>