【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ Q$ d6 a# C) F. w5 [3 f( aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 s2 c9 ~6 H  l% g; ^* _  \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ T5 I* S6 C( q! bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; V# Z, [, y/ N) I- `' M7 GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 m. _+ w0 @& `3 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 E. E4 {* a3 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. k1 f4 r. X+ {" t8 h" e! S  U4 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 T& f* j+ N0 C# P2 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; @/ J# X1 c& u2 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
' ~4 }% E% ^8 k, L+ jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ T* Q$ Y2 R5 p7 K7 M" P0 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# Q! |1 c, I/ `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; d: J1 q' M: j+ {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) t) I& v3 c  L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 K: c1 E3 ~  T" u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( n8 M* d3 e" I4 a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 P1 F# s. c4 i' h6 M; U) ^" e  x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 f% ?" Q! n( x$ G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- K/ N! k( ?6 b( E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% X, [% R4 D! ?, s6 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, H5 O$ Q6 I% ?; z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( @+ j6 s2 U5 C5 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 B! p9 t$ U7 e, ]" a1 }. L* \& O" O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" U+ J+ l! E  l9 W9 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
% a+ E! J5 V  B: V. M  k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, X, l$ ]$ `6 V8 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* k4 j( L! x/ \+ B9 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 o, I0 h3 O$ s, x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* i- }; B* }! h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! L5 S1 c7 |3 q. g* ]+ |% F/ b$ D- {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 s0 H. C% N- e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  Y/ B4 t" \7 p: V  v5 v* H- u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 _5 Y9 e* T6 g5 @1 ?  a% x+ I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 _" P# r: ^* X. T/ q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 Y; C9 C" ^. e! \+ R) Y4 N% P<P>I regret not dying</P>
) O2 \' e9 `; U9 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ~/ s8 O, p8 ^0 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! s$ d4 q  Q' E- z" p+ c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( |; s, r/ P" }7 D" `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 k0 p0 p% G, n8 H& M- |2 i; T! u% k; C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 R3 S9 C. k1 r- Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 Q. }6 }( ?' {  l8 v- D0 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' t- T0 W$ b' Q( X. B# F0 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. O( a" @! R( [6 `; u& B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>