【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ~+ h: W0 ]% J' N2 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& K! Y/ e: }. M" U- vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* f' e  \' P/ H4 gEvery other word you utter is love
* @) p: Q' I2 ]3 {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 G  {* ?$ I  d; E4 W! i* r, h+ u) XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 J0 }1 Z; ~* C6 a- k) bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 t; i0 T  w1 G4 i2 [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 p% B! @& D9 s  FI regret not dying
/ l; A6 B/ H' d5 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" K1 b  A+ `) e2 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ r8 J& e- `( F" i- a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. r" ^! B  z) V( d5 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! ^. _- B8 A. y+ [+ T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# I! X1 p) _- ?$ V' Q, o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 k6 s# O/ U( ~) n: K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 w: W" z, F8 N7 N2 q2 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& ?2 z$ @9 a( u' n# _& i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- k4 k$ ?2 m3 T# m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: q1 O. r# Y/ G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( e3 M( y  y3 z$ K4 l<P>你无需担心</P>
6 d9 w- r4 j5 d5 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% A* u' f8 Z4 K) i. }/ q* O; p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, b: F- ?# Y, K$ P- E! R+ p$ z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) p( b$ o& H' a8 L$ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' ^0 `7 ?1 _* [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: j$ Y  ?8 e2 ^/ y$ T( p! n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' D, w  p1 t  Y' b7 k7 g# c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ L' F9 l) Q" T5 E; F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 g/ I  |: e* e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% {& o4 a8 H, _. @. g2 ^) `<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ \- u1 x4 l6 l, |1 |- K. b3 D. I5 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# b- Y8 l3 y; q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 S1 @9 s+ z6 b' x5 m* X7 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 u8 \% }7 B8 g, k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 A' |8 }) o  `4 P, Z3 z# A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 L+ ~/ p% N! ^- t0 [我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* i5 D  |9 R% O0 W; G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>