【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' ?6 z0 o8 C, L- E2 UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 M/ p" {4 ]9 p8 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 ]" o1 _3 f* W/ ]$ M1 p* HThe sky is happy down to its soul
  |' h) g! B* Q$ w, RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& i0 v# t6 Q. PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 O$ T6 m  L5 L9 aNothing can compare to my love
# w/ t% R2 s# x- g* GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: n% _, d8 l" e. l6 R% ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# P  Z  A0 m1 f2 k5 SI’m still filled with fear
7 O" U- h: z& O1 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' `$ M, `$ m! T, bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- b7 p: a% s6 R0 e- g3 m/ T( FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 B4 M1 n" ^0 o* A. H, K9 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ ~) b3 p: t6 `6 |+ s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 p8 o3 L4 a7 v% L0 Y+ A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; m1 v+ ]& ?8 U7 a2 @. L$ I* O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, S. U! O% q! ~2 r9 o" M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! }1 S- ?4 e, Z( V; D. ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, Y( K+ M7 Z. X, E* C" \3 Q. d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* |/ B" X, ^, i) R$ @( i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 P% }- T0 S) f; T8 \. h  }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! @/ _4 y4 q; B6 i3 S8 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* `# V* ~, w- |% X2 J+ i) `6 f# o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# O* s* H" s' R" @# t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 W: T  ^, a# t6 ^: O4 w% F  W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: U. [$ S5 d$ V' z7 s$ @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 ]( ?3 p6 [! E! V; m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 }' N' I( U" e, d* |! S) e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ b0 V. N2 E" O, g6 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* l4 l1 ~& o( P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% L6 n( Y( `7 H; n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  x, P- d5 g$ S* a+ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ C* \: s3 R. _* n<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ f- m4 l. }0 F5 ~) ~. X# `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, V4 |4 }0 }# G# x" W8 C# p( s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 T) a1 B& d7 @: _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: A# Z/ c  L6 b+ V7 E. w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) e: ]! D' c3 R; c; F. n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; M) g4 Z- P0 j% j3 s6 w$ \6 C, y; R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( p- j; f3 c" U! p' M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" g* O! w# W( C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ o9 ~' a! y9 B9 b2 T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

% w* q) L7 A$ K% i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>