【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ N& m. M! L; p- \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* \% U3 ^( r- ~( l8 {With the moon kissing it every night
5 c, S' t+ M8 Q! p6 CSeeing the sky content with its love
' R' T0 c; f: q& v. z- jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ O0 g2 v* ^7 d) q2 Z/ nYou needn’t fear anything
2 m4 ^/ W+ {3 K6 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ F* ?1 W/ X- q  i* lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. Z7 B' X/ M) A7 C: |7 k# f4 {; h& }Nothing can compare to my love
( [4 f- {6 y$ D) Z3 d$ oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# |4 ]  n2 `3 |* mI want so much to see inside your heart
3 \# t, V( {' R5 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- B1 k  E3 o% C$ ^/ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* o, S- I% c& e: |, E3 X) R" _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& X9 E( }5 ?" T3 Z( Q/ `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' [$ }7 [6 U3 ?( MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) \1 ?% W* s: O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 m. e4 D5 V* V% w, N% }) Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 I. K, X" b- }# A% y- N( ^4 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- t: E; I% ^' g. y+ \: T% g3 C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ D$ E/ d6 w& D! P- N+ I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 b. q' n  {( }8 J+ F+ Y<P>你无需担心</P>
6 t# G" }/ E8 x# z& R0 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 Q, A0 q& ]7 w& U! |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 L9 a% |( m8 g% S& n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- x! r+ e" ^) v- O& r+ K5 Y2 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 J( \& C: f2 c( L( _, h. N, j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 N  z; c  p: o0 G; V- f& Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! N, o/ D* w. y9 T& R" w+ w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  }( I2 O' c3 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) ?. c: j" H- `) o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 Z3 G7 V0 O. C" w8 l7 ~7 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 f" a, H% S! ~. Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 n, a4 A8 X/ k4 R3 G0 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 S3 p8 |' S- c5 r' Q8 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 ?) k( l! m9 t7 K  |( y* Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 h3 \8 Z6 w9 c& Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>