【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 |+ O1 q2 e2 |' w1 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( |( ^0 A4 j: q! D+ h6 @% x# gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 \0 t- |1 B  m. ~: T: DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ Q$ C+ Y( T6 V% _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ x; _. P0 p2 A  M" _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: V- x1 H5 N$ CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! K  \2 J: s. D/ q  Q3 g$ {I’m still filled with fear
8 L9 }6 U8 \1 V! N7 g! mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 e/ q) u0 }- NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, Y4 u; G, s- e3 o* |% HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  g/ f8 n1 o8 _  B- GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 l9 @2 p: K3 B7 Z$ o) z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. L) F7 ~9 j$ f+ O* |$ g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' T7 c3 \$ A* |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 Q: M6 v* k& B" F( H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; s1 {, O: A2 f5 e5 s. W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 P  h, Y5 }, s- y  c. w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% |6 X* T: k- ]# o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* s% l, c# ~2 d" }0 i! h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 A/ q$ t4 S1 v) R& j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ C5 {$ E$ }! [: b6 C- m$ [- f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 \" X' \7 P6 Y' ?( p0 ]  J" W' k8 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 H. s6 T5 h1 ^) h* ~! f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 v; V9 O6 t% k4 ]  C/ u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 n: V/ ]  W1 ^% \& Z% I; H& N0 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 o& ~. D3 ?2 t0 p7 z+ Q; E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 Y! [) I( N& o% Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, a/ d8 V1 F1 W$ {; S4 }1 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! A  r+ e2 p' R4 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 X5 b2 H( H/ J& K6 b/ p: V& m2 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( b' ?8 ^8 Y! J& K& e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ C0 s" X- u! ~3 E% J& b6 P, j, q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# f0 z1 g( Z% E5 E4 d+ k' H! ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 n; a6 u" x, f! D& p3 N5 d5 ]  `8 k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# m4 |! Y" Q2 \$ Q/ P7 }/ d8 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. m  ~+ A1 D$ _; ~) _; x6 }& e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 Y! F9 p  c) X4 K- F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>