【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 Y' c8 Y2 S3 J% vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; e/ S& S7 {, L1 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 e2 Z- c7 I* ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( X! p# B+ H& b( n$ D9 m) D" rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 A' T; B/ F$ X, A- I3 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 L) G8 |, u6 F7 FI love you I love you with all my heart
3 S$ Y. a6 }* C  p+ O& eNothing can compare to my love
2 E4 ]" d: C7 t# d1 |5 R- CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) X2 ]! J9 |& {4 `6 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 r+ a+ t$ C' \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( T! `5 [- H1 }% s/ Z7 S& Z7 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ Z6 d* I) C# I" h6 j' y" ]4 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 A+ G/ f5 ?( sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 l6 s, g( O0 @/ j" O* i+ _! Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, W+ Q6 w$ Q( H/ i2 M& C/ @: `' l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 I( t$ O) H, q) b/ V7 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 p: Z/ \' M" o8 r/ b9 @% q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ?) A3 Y! d% s" S. R9 X! {# ]) K5 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) z) o# F  x; F2 b6 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. k' I; {6 N% _. T8 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ]* ?% y' ~" S8 p5 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ C1 A" g3 l: Y* m; ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ z& X" Z# s9 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 v' H" w8 P1 U7 \: _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 Y) W: n8 ]# m5 t3 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 @4 Y4 F& \" r% @# U; s( L% c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 }& J; e* r  _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. B: j% x/ V0 r0 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. t  {! a/ b' o% k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 `1 V( z) a2 h5 m. \* }1 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 A, |5 P3 E1 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ W2 @7 Q. B. n6 y4 J* v7 b9 g2 c; B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- U% f3 z. M4 K# |$ l& h# T1 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  H  |0 S! v! e+ E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  M. k1 x# N* ^) `" J; k: j; D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ o7 I# G# b+ p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- M8 F! a- m* d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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# M' d6 b6 o4 e$ K5 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, Z- F" R/ R6 v" x/ E  C; {( X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>