【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 T/ |3 U# y. s& D4 q. M7 Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& H5 O7 Z6 ^; T; l' JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; W! [9 V# |1 q' E! t/ iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 Z' u2 @3 Z0 x  A$ l# X5 P0 [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! V" H0 N: M& {* O5 MI’m still filled with fear
  @6 L2 e+ g' [$ B# }1 u) k. e2 O- nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 U* U+ e7 W7 h  l' G+ E% s* I# |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- _7 }# x! [4 x2 L# f% }" K9 pWith such a tongue as yours,
( l& j) y' ~: A. UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ a/ C. `9 x6 S. l2 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 ?4 O3 H- F/ O- H& @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& i, |9 G0 ~; E5 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 ?) _' L+ k9 g1 c. ?! W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; c' n2 t5 Y3 b2 r  l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( G2 {: o* ?0 H" D! d8 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( q7 A  B6 O% d1 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 U$ r: Q# S  z: @- }8 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 W4 x! j# \- j# G0 |# F7 J& H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ }/ W2 |; ~1 ]* x, j4 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: S0 c$ E4 W! @/ y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 ]4 O; g( n- M$ L- N/ V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! m- |- N4 [" R5 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 i4 c* _, E7 ?9 u% d# c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 d4 N/ ~% M, W! i; B! K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# Z. q$ C6 H. u9 }: c6 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 u/ n7 S% `% `7 K, A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 t8 ]# z( J$ {8 s4 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ P% R7 [1 H* a# s1 p/ r+ |. j. q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 f# i. |7 f% i, W, ?2 c  Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" [+ v7 r7 Z. ]1 e, n- ?% d0 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ F, I; O  e, n, k2 x+ D8 q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- l1 ~) j) Y4 y  M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 c0 C% z2 S0 Z' ~/ Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, B0 \5 G$ G: s% G! B4 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) [, l5 F3 M+ o. `. ^9 a5 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 X- H. H9 K4 \% s; U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 H+ l9 o) d3 ?. c, N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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) C) p; J) ^* ]. C5 a# `8 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 L" Q0 ]+ H4 Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>