【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& }6 k9 y8 U9 y* }歌词我附在后面。
  o$ p9 P" m' x1 b5 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
. A7 l4 Q9 {% @& aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; o7 y9 ?- s' m+ j  n6 k" j) GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( }, j7 h& D: z+ ?( Q5 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 Y- }1 R  w& N8 B8 C! s: QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 b4 F. f, Y$ D7 g- L' r6 HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ ]# x3 B) }6 w7 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 e& N7 ~, \/ z; J0 D0 w+ B, XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  d9 ]  A- D5 Y! C( Y$ UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# b0 J3 @" Q" @7 u) [I want so much to see inside your heart
! b$ E" q& R& G# q7 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ ]- C; M8 X( @1 E# n0 y6 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# @% A9 v. l% h, h. w/ D+ @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  ^: U% m' f, l4 QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 F6 P+ M: N9 d+ N, s  Q. g5 D- NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ `% n4 \1 l; x3 o) B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 Q8 Q1 F- ~. Z" S; e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  Z3 w6 x- M8 T. e+ d2 ~5 Y. X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 S7 O- E* A* y* v8 i0 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ s( F2 h! o; B" f5 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( V: w3 Z) b" u$ Z2 e- O5 a# w& N3 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ u* F  Q/ b' C6 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" E1 a4 z" u! Y8 l: Q6 U! V: z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 F5 Z, y( ?. l. U' [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) K. J( W+ p2 b! I! f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 `8 X) R0 w4 S7 i  J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ s$ ^6 d- D6 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: _+ G; m8 F/ j! ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; |6 W! \1 v8 C3 T: S. m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 Z$ v4 N, R. ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 v1 R# |( m! W8 z9 t$ s; i- [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 ~2 W  Z8 B0 j# F/ s, l, k/ C4 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# R9 n, ~' `3 `$ M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! R2 ~- m" |$ \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ L+ Q' Z& {$ v9 [" t1 k* f" C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ \4 }0 ]1 B7 ~. J# t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! C0 W/ A' ?& L* c- p$ y<P>I regret not dying</P>
( f4 o/ ~( Q, ^/ k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, N. l4 y# L+ L- u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 b$ K2 ?' a, o8 R& i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 T7 {2 B/ L* l2 @6 F3 R/ [, r9 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 q% P# R' e0 [2 ?* t: b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 W# i% e3 p1 R* l# {$ \; [) ?- g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>