【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ x, E; u4 ~$ U3 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: X4 K1 P& ^/ [1 K. W* K! bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! S3 m# E% c1 j( [: NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# I  Z: Z8 y9 A1 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. x5 q2 ^' b* F4 O* k3 z& _' YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& s9 {( l/ Y5 h7 d2 c7 M% A; tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ N' `0 l& X3 X# E! |: KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 g& }! b/ }( dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 C5 E  o3 R: P$ A( j( z( f* tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' R: V& ^* J' k6 I! h: S8 Z8 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) T  Z" Y) V' ^7 @) j+ X  tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  V: G* b; h& y! T) P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% i% E. L9 Z" S% n' J/ N: H+ O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 O! }# c4 }& x1 w+ h: H, o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 |' z. U, f" B$ z5 C+ @7 N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 \  p" V5 m' T, e$ j& V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; n- i- x' \/ K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 o# n$ |; B' S4 `5 _+ @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& L# K, `0 ^7 ]& S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! x6 N: X/ e" ^4 y& ^$ m2 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" g3 S& o+ m/ a: Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- M* o) j& [0 o- T7 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 i* [% |0 n! z% m$ b- S& d/ H<P>你无需担心</P>
& x2 ?6 G6 L% y6 z. C0 ^& t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 Z, k  @* N" Y. d( `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 M/ q; y8 O! j, i# a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 a0 j7 l9 \3 T0 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ~+ C& i% D4 C2 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 B/ V& J/ j9 t8 c1 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" G- F0 O) h9 x0 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 z; Q* k' h. f/ N8 z) s2 l* T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 j& Y0 B2 o. K/ i! l9 q% R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 a2 Y7 {  F' k  r0 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& a- k5 I* ~# X$ T2 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 R# K" w; E. U% {6 m( J+ C& I3 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 q  l8 z7 C/ g3 i$ `! u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 {& M1 W5 V% p9 D2 M% w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( E! K# B0 f* \3 l, V& K! b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ R( X' M/ Y  j5 s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 _7 ?; U, N2 l) J8 d7 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 J4 W& C1 U/ T+ }+ Q; K; ?: d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 ?' O+ l( y+ o% G( ^- }5 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! v; c) V3 Y/ U+ K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- H! @) {; f  j! L+ ?) o  j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) W0 [% c1 R) W* z2 W: ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ D2 }6 T. f+ E: I5 l$ Y$ v+ \我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" i  c! G# `+ {0 ~' |! v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>