【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 G, u- |2 A* e, `, S# E$ WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: L% ?. F. S! S& S6 `: nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 A) a+ j( {% G# Q% E# e" DThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 O: r$ _$ r- V. `9 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 Y! ~( I" D# I  z* bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 {( ]) A+ i! X( o# ?( tI really want to know just how much you love me
+ X/ ]4 C0 k$ Q0 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ p3 K' n  k0 [  J0 AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 |$ y0 e4 k3 R5 S' f, mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" O) W% A8 J' |4 q* c+ JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 H9 m1 z3 J8 j( m2 X  oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ e9 a# o, v: FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ q6 `# ?0 A( C2 Q: P+ M" K2 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ `( t. F/ i9 I' P4 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 V% X! r- g9 q. @0 C, C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# g5 v6 j' `" E: A) ^7 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 G4 `: j) a% P& c8 S6 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% M: n0 p. G5 V' |7 c6 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 C  N  ?/ T, V) y% ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& U' F( y9 u! S; N9 i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- u; q% d# n" @: I* E' c- f1 L9 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" h- v; I/ {; j4 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 v. l6 p8 M$ x0 U0 s7 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% }, K; ?& E+ O+ m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* [5 X. |6 q% j4 _! P8 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 T1 Q2 M1 q$ ~! e5 H& J/ A/ n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 W5 v6 @* N. ~4 i. b$ U1 o4 p( R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& R: H; ]- Q( w3 Y7 t1 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) S2 H6 S9 X# l* a3 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! B  W& N6 Y1 U/ O/ |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% u0 _  f4 p2 w" c* o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 ^# F1 }) I, E8 S( r8 W6 B  f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 F1 H1 c$ f3 y5 f+ l0 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* `8 D9 s0 g# |# |, k3 n* o' N% _! s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 T5 ], E0 i% ^8 K& Y( M; `' ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, }) U9 l3 q- f, P  n1 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ G8 ]$ E. b! A* s0 c7 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ H% k$ Q3 }) c% S! q: e3 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 R* x( p  B4 z9 U# D7 G  s5 N4 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

  X* V/ z. K$ \- ?+ L, f# w' Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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