【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) a( U* v$ L6 o1 n! Z# r9 H; W$ i歌词我附在后面。
6 E  f) P2 E$ TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 A  V( ~% `+ \$ S/ dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 H/ E% n7 E- S7 G' U* P1 O" SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! ]3 L: }8 y0 Q: ?! j0 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
( s) I' c% H2 TWith the moon kissing it every night
; m3 B; u; `0 m4 DSeeing the sky content with its love
7 `8 n2 g% |8 d. TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. O' n; G6 U9 U  v7 m7 L& b/ F  @You needn’t fear anything
1 g9 o* {  v1 o+ r( j4 ~/ w" WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 ^) Q6 }8 v4 r+ c  F" QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; R4 ~; I/ b8 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. E) H, j1 ]; u0 s# R; q) l- \( cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 t8 l* y' {6 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( I( F  D! x4 n. S- a! zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% e0 `1 m3 S9 i" @  A& fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 Q0 i) ^1 m3 M8 ~% }( f' |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- Z2 `8 n* K8 G+ z  X; F* v$ LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, U9 e9 [3 c) E1 V1 e; B7 o/ N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 k, W4 s& T* x6 K8 A, f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' B. m7 B0 O1 A6 U. `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, g. |$ m$ S# m! E8 ~- y+ o, G: q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% T) r5 P: G) }/ L  M/ J5 t6 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ ]# J& C, D) y9 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 ^6 e0 {1 k& z<P>你无需担心</P>
/ I# r0 A. P( k' H" l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ W! \2 n6 b# L# r& V6 m  u" Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' y6 R1 @+ _& Z3 I) d+ I5 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* t$ S) W" D2 a5 M3 p- }, i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 O, y6 m; t7 r% `0 n% |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; z  _9 }( D1 A" l/ E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; z' {% f+ |* t8 Y" P& E+ j, ?. R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 h" w0 K  \1 Y- N; O! G2 B7 R3 w3 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* _" [9 {: }8 }7 V7 y# r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ]1 L3 A. j) z, b# n" V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 Q) T' l! s. u1 P+ F* y7 i0 {) \3 ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 u% I( n5 v$ L<P>I regret not dying</P>
" \, {; |. ^( S( s9 z$ h9 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ R6 A. K' W, V) j& O! |4 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 \. K" o" [2 U# Q4 x) e# h. E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 d$ d+ m7 v9 |6 [* v1 w$ E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ n* N4 e# O9 k6 l6 t4 i& o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; V* S3 Q& C3 k( v4 v$ a3 ]5 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' c9 }! \8 n% s- P. Z( F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 a4 q2 j  W/ N" `" I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) z9 L4 u, t  S: |! K3 w6 x3 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

9 s7 L; n& Q3 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ d5 |. S% l1 t" \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>