【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 t% `) C& m2 P* m9 n+ FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% y! A# T" R5 x9 ?7 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% W* X; r  B+ [+ B4 v; d  i, {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% }# O+ i7 E3 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; [/ r& K" G( OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 W; h# k0 b. A4 C8 d7 ^' V9 H  \+ JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. k! G2 Z* Z" X: vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ J) z1 ?6 c& B' a4 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" j: m4 M' H+ j: J7 _( ^0 j3 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' ~7 a) f, n# S' i" iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 ?+ h- j# R1 }5 Q5 W2 U, eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* h3 T+ V# L' b# r, ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 @6 }; }1 H5 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  P" z2 `# L8 O; r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) r  `! l2 O* f; ]; _2 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 g! o0 f7 w" P3 h8 Z7 X5 g3 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 _0 p3 ]2 J/ l6 K' d( s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 U3 i# g5 p3 L# w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" I& E" Q. F6 n4 g9 H, n) o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 M# U( F& d* k8 N# ~6 X6 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 P# f7 F; p9 h- x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 x( `* t" h: u& Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ I( d# `5 B6 v7 ^' {. F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( g4 ]1 k. K; o( e- O/ H& A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 u( g3 W. ~+ i: [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 X% P- Y# q# O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* O, Z3 z3 c6 T$ ]7 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. q, I6 S+ T9 Z' o* R& k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 M1 b3 ]5 W+ |6 a7 R: \7 ^* M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: J) _- ]- S' P! U2 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- U5 w! M, T2 O& j, O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 p8 }+ s- ^7 e% Y% B3 \9 m+ f( c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- j+ G2 b! T. D8 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 W  o' [% V/ G1 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 f2 j9 d0 g! S. F5 D6 V3 l8 X我请你剖开它
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; @5 @5 A" m* Z  Y  |- S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>