【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 m& W  Y  b" \% MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- [( E8 h6 s% l' cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- b* j" r3 T+ \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) H' c# v' ^& n4 G7 WYou needn’t fear anything
, b; [8 [5 k  v9 V+ w" {. fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 {+ H. q% a/ W& R- l6 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- C6 i; {6 f4 O! I6 }" @- ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( n! f$ e5 ~& _. Q6 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 J$ D3 Q- `* ~7 a' kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, x* h0 _3 H7 C* w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 j5 |5 [9 G' D! r5 @. _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: N; ?& z6 d0 _2 U9 `! }( q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ x: v( Q1 T: j9 d- i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* Q+ [& D+ X1 e% j! D, k  v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ b6 [# H, q/ A7 }( c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. W, l7 Q4 q5 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 q( r$ ^" Y- ^$ b<P>你无需担心</P>
! E$ l8 f1 ]; J  U8 }# s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 |( j5 a, I3 E/ {' A6 ~7 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, h/ E" Z" y* l6 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 w: N8 H% p( B2 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 R4 ^: m' t1 ?) a/ u( c: s% F2 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 c4 H/ r. ?0 v) ^1 U/ x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 t# _% r) L7 h; b1 e0 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 W6 B% a8 K6 i: z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 u, M1 O5 d' T' z& f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& n- H* n$ m/ U  `  ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ D  g% l" B* u" I( d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 e8 [- O: a1 U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) n, P5 \: B' l* X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: D1 f: K4 @: `# K$ X5 l2 ?! A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ Y: t) N9 p8 b* }/ [6 z# B" r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- S- R3 k: s5 B5 v4 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) ]: o/ M$ v5 J" C6 c" B" h我请你剖开它
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gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>