【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


歌词我附在后面。
1 Z+ P+ s% v+ E, ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 j$ w9 J/ |  p5 I0 U) QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 P3 h- d0 m& \- \5 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" L5 e; {, E  S& @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# B4 S7 J7 U6 c; GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 I- ]* ?# m+ g* D6 f# d$ PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; s# ]+ d5 f0 [3 l; r' F% Z1 `9 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 q( M. u. X' @& bI want so much to see inside your heart
% |/ V' o3 u  }4 h3 `4 P. }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 S! N" b$ m# u1 M: sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ ~* q  s! D) a( y$ N! vWith such a tongue as yours,
; n$ K% z4 T' Z" B- E4 c/ p' OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# T$ D& X# E: \2 `7 ~  W; j; `! M% }* X) HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 @$ J6 P( C- H* Q4 b$ m& ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 j$ `6 @1 {1 _6 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 v* _2 m& D# ^- Y7 T  P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% R% w$ D  b+ m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 l5 x; r- J8 g  B+ f; @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 t, M, t5 A* f  k3 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; o% ], N/ O2 R  z7 v$ i1 {; w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' v' G7 k: X+ D; }+ b. ]+ u" J8 V+ J- f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, W' [: ?% }: \; P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. U7 Y/ \8 c5 m$ s' f; C) _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' w* D7 |  w' [9 [) Q6 ]: }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ q4 ]: K( s& O1 \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 r; h: ]0 a/ X& o$ s1 p* ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ [0 m4 T& J, o7 p2 S7 K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ c! n7 l( v) @6 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 |; j; [7 B- j) x1 |* ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! j) ~* g8 d7 w( I: \9 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 I3 q5 y! |" l" U/ j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 l( I; B1 |6 a$ p; v1 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. c8 v8 _2 ?& ?. p3 m% X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& T; Y  X/ Q4 K9 o# l" A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ x* V* g7 w3 Y/ m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 Q! V9 N* B( G0 J/ e5 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# V% b% Y1 H5 I' d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# h* e' ~/ q8 W; ^  D* |6 ]/ O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* Y# S" U2 x! S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 d% Y5 ]1 Q+ `5 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ Z' j% Z' W, y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( d0 [2 ^) U' N9 g% o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: p2 R4 P4 r1 R. H/ d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 |  M. x7 v* N+ r& N/ S/ ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% K) V! b, L1 |( w$ X& ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, ~3 K4 [" p& \( w! O$ f9 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- u8 _( z7 ~  s6 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% t2 H2 x; n" q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% d" R8 n- S3 \我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
* \$ R3 G# l' d' j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>