【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 R% Z# g* [, W6 N  A8 ]8 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) P7 D" z3 r( Z( \6 IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; Z& O6 U- ~& |# ~1 F0 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) L5 Y6 X5 |5 T: h9 p0 J$ W1 P/ GYou needn’t fear anything
$ f, a8 G1 @0 E5 b* U% QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% i- `# m$ m1 ]. v6 q2 E) ^I love you I love you with all my heart
% R, o# V& m' k" g& N2 G, j$ HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& P: c7 P1 S! dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* B6 H4 t8 X7 |0 d/ ]8 C% y. iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 {$ C: \. b* o0 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 J/ `. F4 G, rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. o) L! m* m5 G& x/ d5 w: D) M2 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 }( I# O8 J4 K, S( y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: G- u- m$ y" V$ }/ b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; p  Z, g" R% n1 q. Y3 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& \( X& w# Q7 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ C+ Y( t+ W: N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& L) e" m5 M8 ~# ^/ a+ v0 x: v, x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' x- m) ?1 K5 d! Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 b9 R- N1 K# ]0 h3 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) J5 N, p- r" l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 x( z3 D" m; R3 S+ z<P>你无需担心</P>
2 v. y% e7 |8 P% R7 Y7 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 L; w  I) a+ T& G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! i# u1 M4 \7 q% |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& ^" g. K, z9 C4 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; U: j, E  v1 V4 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! Q' p) c5 H$ h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 K4 W* K8 C, u. G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 d% ?! n2 _' x, Z4 J( T# C6 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 A# j+ W1 N3 r- \! k6 Z7 N4 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" b1 H) x, M8 U* m* e0 Q4 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" F9 O* w  r4 @( n& @2 L% r3 z2 |6 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 i0 c6 v6 h0 M3 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- Q: o5 g6 w+ ^2 Y- U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& r2 G9 B/ b4 H! u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' G  V4 Z# D2 ]  K9 c0 B; `& j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( N) O* v) I) m0 D( c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# v3 H! Z2 b4 j( _* e. x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* q2 Z( j; E: r% {3 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 V( Y2 B4 y( t9 T* a: \8 ]$ M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>