【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 ^1 B/ J& _( r6 X9 j4 `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 G+ j) F" _2 k  DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 f& v2 y2 A* Z' ?) x) m7 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) d. ?# w. g* D& dYou needn’t fear anything
7 ?# G6 Q( d/ R% |1 t4 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" @8 T( F$ Z) n$ S2 R% i9 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 c/ U7 v% H8 w% ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ U& R0 z/ L+ ^6 oI want so much to see inside your heart
' `0 g2 t; I. b/ |% R! zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 |; F1 R! U1 k0 i& hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! y8 Z7 S+ j! S6 M  y; w: ~" iWith such a tongue as yours,
: h" i+ ]. ?/ A1 {0 @' SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( c+ }4 W0 ~! I5 T/ K4 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! U0 f% z6 M+ l; `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; g( N; H8 n9 ?& e& q9 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ w9 c  K- _. B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ r8 i. V3 ]5 i" d. U, w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: \8 f2 d2 d: E/ P, f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* t% l' k" y8 U; Z/ l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ?2 n  V7 Q/ `$ t, N% C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! E9 b! i- }  I7 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" l: M9 h* C# m3 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 w/ ~" ^! s1 z6 ^1 B9 g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ~4 ]6 i& X4 ]3 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 r3 Y6 ~. g; u2 {3 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 I* T) H% r2 T! @9 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( q2 B7 s5 Z# _9 g" F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" h! D. L' I3 [& L# y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ q4 |5 {# `1 x8 f. J. H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% e; }5 ]5 N& G7 k- {0 {" D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# X6 T; {$ J3 o0 b. S* a8 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' j8 F, Z6 E* @+ L2 t, B7 |' F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 [4 |6 t; t" X<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 v7 B5 B4 N- b$ J. ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 t: i" j$ ^$ a3 ]3 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  i) A" x" e1 Q0 |3 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 k1 a( M% m3 f4 \7 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- l- j# K" w  b# \, a/ F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 w( k8 D/ h- g3 e. x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; \- G$ F9 k0 @; ]) K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

7 r3 v4 h4 ]+ d3 t( e8 F) O3 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>