【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 u* c. a' D2 W( E* d6 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ b% U) D2 J+ W- w" V' h( fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& V4 G' W* S2 X3 g# \The sky is happy down to its soul
4 M$ E( k4 ]1 VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 E( T2 J3 x: b2 r) z0 V7 Y7 kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# t0 o" d9 `( X. [# e- k4 \# CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ w2 U/ A* h* {! FI love you I love you with all my heart
* p8 v2 O/ [7 B3 x; z5 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 w0 @. S. q6 J, oI want so much to see inside your heart
4 c8 `' R- C" I( n$ Q- Q9 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) D  s5 ?3 a" `- S. U3 mI regret not dying
+ c# J/ F7 f3 ^9 L! I& BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' A& C9 n" @/ [9 s: a6 N2 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* J% g2 C' F+ h3 u" jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& G+ v& k* X* N1 x7 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% e/ N" W/ u* E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" b! V. H" h9 q8 m5 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 E" C1 l  g, P% {, Q+ l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# e2 N  Z& f/ O# e1 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, H6 b+ K# K" L( J4 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, j" _2 A- t3 o+ R5 g0 ~$ R2 v( @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: C8 D8 V# `0 _+ Q9 T+ O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 w  r7 Q9 K9 W  a6 b- p/ l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 a& ]+ N; q) H- T/ h) ^8 i<P>你无需担心</P>
, B. i- e% G! I$ b; b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: x% v  B( g# Z! x* G: Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; B. `& v* o( t# n8 y9 D1 z/ v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ a6 y4 H( `5 g/ P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 {# ]* ^1 m; F7 t' Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' D# Z, c; c: h( ?$ A' d7 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ [. Y, _. l* [4 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: Y. r* G; [3 E8 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 Q, k4 P9 b: P3 o9 [4 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 x- k1 m& b/ ?, f3 w& ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! p: y9 R8 s: z, S+ y( F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 O% L; i7 ?+ e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 h$ h1 S. L; w: q, b. {5 z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* q1 j% N0 \! y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, x2 R8 M5 U. A2 ]/ a8 C3 l+ E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. X/ s" \3 c) w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& I4 |& r0 {# R6 F+ b2 }; o1 d! T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; L! A+ w& \! X# h% j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 k8 f. Y( ?) P6 A' W我请你剖开它
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7 U$ J5 w; a+ J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ]" |$ I, N; t6 u, B$ s! o2 r7 ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>