【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# Q6 n0 j6 n! E1 p+ z0 s歌词我附在后面。
9 u3 x+ p2 ~% HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 {7 j* C% R8 t& R9 D. GThe sky is happy down to its soul
* p! a0 W: E- c5 N5 ^With the moon kissing it every night
; h( G  N, V( Z9 }. n' cSeeing the sky content with its love
5 l0 m5 a; J) ~% |- ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ `& f, N( T8 n4 `- c9 v. }+ REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( h9 A6 z; }, U! f( TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 `1 V: n$ D7 ?3 d7 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; R; g7 U. J0 g9 U+ wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' g* s2 c  N$ [5 n( AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 Y# D( C& T5 U1 J: EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ Z  [5 x2 g% eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( s4 i1 z7 k" c, ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# Z  p3 S# Q& c; L2 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 I; ]" k5 s% `5 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 W0 D4 n& W1 P$ M0 q1 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  Z& r2 s! ^5 A: y( v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 i; i7 U+ n! j' X. B0 l/ S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 g, V. \* U' N' R  `. j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 R& d+ W# }+ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ F( c& y/ d  X/ [, g" _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 F1 O( @2 k: N; p( j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, o/ P; {2 o" V3 ~. V# s* L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ i' p( u9 a6 v7 W' l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  G, `0 d$ E; Y  r( [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 p+ M3 ]. O; M: |; ]& b& N9 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 e1 C# E% W; [8 X( k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ L0 B" ?' R( a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 |. ~  ]$ @/ m8 S( C" |8 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Z2 K; a2 l. [' g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 g/ A0 S4 W$ E. J6 l2 V6 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; X1 x) Z4 ~, y4 Z' {6 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 |8 c) i5 F2 h1 f8 x! n. H' {! j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 w6 G5 A- h( ~1 V) N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 @1 h" Q$ b2 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ }2 p2 e1 w' @1 x+ j+ B- O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>