【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! U! J+ H6 X) y9 Z5 c9 i歌词我附在后面。
: E. h' d1 f8 \; A0 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 r. I. X/ G* ?6 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 x- s$ s  D9 x6 H# @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- L5 p# T( v$ l) L5 `! HYou needn’t fear anything
  t- K0 N" a; d/ l6 \% m4 [( X% HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 ~. u  ^8 ~2 f& ^( Z/ vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" c$ t/ @1 [* l6 YNothing can compare to my love
% x$ F  V7 ~6 ~8 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# A2 h/ J9 X+ I, FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! J" n, n! i7 `# m; N( w1 l4 `I want so much to see inside your heart
1 P4 }+ W6 b; G" B- G$ i' WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 L  o2 j" k% ]9 ]- {# V- LI’m still filled with fear
* P. T! g# u+ ?4 m  I7 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 A) o( @+ m  i1 |4 W8 W/ II regret not dying
$ R% o) n  C1 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, l2 @' F/ l, m( ~& K! cWith such a tongue as yours,
8 O7 ^2 W' y1 \* ~* @+ OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, L" d4 ?5 r- d( W; J+ V4 z% gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 S. `0 v' V3 Q. g- _- P! A% l9 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 L1 C, p" D. F8 J2 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& @3 J8 h7 S4 B# U, F& Q( p( Z$ i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ g1 e$ ^, j; a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 o4 h' u. i" [6 z- I2 U: q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, A5 ~  L& m" s; f  p* R5 J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  X9 ]5 m( P8 Q4 \( Z% s2 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 w, A! }% C+ y4 a- Q' v6 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( C7 V3 a) y; `) j1 ^% K4 g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 f% W. U/ t3 L" c" p# b4 @+ j/ R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 d2 G( b) s# n! r; v4 C- K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" F4 a; D  O6 d0 I' I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 E* H* [  \3 P& ]7 V* K! I4 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 P  x- i2 A% b( {' M1 S% E& n3 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 c( R, z# q1 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 {+ o) F" D+ f! s/ C# R/ i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* M2 \2 y- y. T+ A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 i4 p" ^; f- v; i8 I8 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 _2 M" f5 N2 f- R5 O: m  W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 W+ F! c) Q- L' b! g" z& d% X( A* d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ B* Q6 ?' R' I6 I. w7 ]/ B( s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 T9 R' T' ]% @9 _2 k! B( F/ I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 |) T( `) ^$ I3 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 L# G; x$ d/ l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& ?3 `# M; J& G我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" y/ R1 c% I- D5 M* o  c& M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>