【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 w5 s+ H) k9 c歌词我附在后面。
, Z' e; N  a, h, X* h$ X1 K* KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ _  ~1 X2 i. H3 u" p5 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 }; G& E1 {8 n! ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 J# X9 q+ K7 X5 v: VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 H+ G# y  A( Q: S( r& F/ VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 z4 n6 [8 L4 x1 P; S3 |% xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 }7 a, o8 T& n3 b' KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 a0 e, L& c# ?+ yI’m still filled with fear
, a# @' g# P/ L7 H( U* c# S0 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 t$ B5 G) r9 II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! T: u7 L5 J" H8 v; ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- }- n' k3 ~/ Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ w! o" ?: |! ^3 j: a' D. b; n( F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! O+ o- @& `8 k5 D  p/ B1 [6 }5 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 H3 |  `- U3 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 i( h# T2 i- Z: H& q% n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% C& H( }8 |0 h( P) N3 H) h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 \# t& q: s" L+ z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* x: v; [0 m* Y. ?3 \6 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 L; L$ k5 ]  e9 i3 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" e" G7 y4 f% R5 }) S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! J* w! d$ S7 U" M$ I4 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) a6 M7 ~9 O( h& C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% f; [) I2 N/ Q8 T7 }3 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* L: C- k4 C8 u/ H8 n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- t& |5 G+ N& p% B7 ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 i: P* z- w7 Q7 _, I& ~$ `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 u# J' }3 p( j1 R2 J5 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, h( r, L) r: z" K- Y' K* M* c+ J( z<P>I regret not dying</P>
; W; |" X9 d& k/ p, y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, D1 Y6 N2 k; w. O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ c/ n. E% L5 O5 W9 n2 v; \6 r- v. k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& u5 ~2 Z* b8 I- i: q" A+ K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ f( i! ~7 b! {" ~) F$ b: u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 Z" a8 a& K' d: W2 H3 M4 T4 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 U+ x" n& q7 p2 l8 F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; [  M0 l6 m5 ?! u5 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>