【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& e7 }- f$ T" MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. |2 i. O- z' AThe sky is happy down to its soul
: m" ]2 @# Z. h! O" j  i# PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" g; ^8 n/ V) z9 V2 e4 N* GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 V( k( o# o' ]" T! ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 @5 `' J4 B! l  v0 cI really want to know just how much you love me
4 c, u5 K# @8 @8 q& d# h4 }I love you I love you with all my heart
' m  |6 a$ n" y& Z) V, QNothing can compare to my love
7 a9 m- @# F. k0 K. CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' k( P8 x1 o% l3 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 L! J9 A+ z0 \. A5 iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; n; t2 I2 O. zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 \- b) ^" q- O* x$ G; rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 g, Z* Q( h4 z$ @7 L: x  M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) l7 a, V3 b$ N5 `6 k- r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 y9 u7 T) ?( o6 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# @! F' m: H8 x% ^' j# I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ v) ^! s; o$ X, O: [# B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 i% U1 V8 m4 L3 S# f# F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 H3 j4 n0 O0 u" Y$ x4 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# |; s2 E7 n* ]" n% c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 k+ N5 b; m6 _2 C0 l1 F. A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- ^, B; E, @! V+ O9 G9 H- i# o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, f4 y. K6 Q" @: l6 s. |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 G: L5 B6 ]" s8 ^$ l* X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* ~8 l8 Z. m# g" g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 S) H$ L% s$ C* k) @* W9 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) ^4 J) M2 @$ z- ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, A0 ~# d- i; L# A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) s5 J) i& ~( n( v9 w7 b6 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! v) s* D+ g! T6 b3 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; G9 Q) k5 A) J6 D" }" Z/ R% \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- y' K1 r; E! E4 L) U. b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>