【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 r( ~9 E! z  eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* f- W+ ^$ C; p$ nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 ]9 |. Y* [4 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 {. j) t7 n; q1 }' o7 XWith the moon kissing it every night
4 Z9 v7 w1 D  _1 U# r. G. m( CSeeing the sky content with its love
% A: y7 i! Y" ^$ S: HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! s( c" y: k, @  BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# B) ?& O; }" c5 MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& I$ V  W1 [5 m* lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 @4 V* @2 U& |, Q2 W, ^. T0 `1 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 ^" Z! h% G& p* oI’m still filled with fear
" W5 M6 J% s& G3 q, }. z' o$ YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' t! a$ Q# h4 ^! b; d  AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' W& \5 c1 g0 N/ r# }% qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 o5 s! o) u* d6 U: \2 L* U0 m% y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 D/ W9 P0 U3 j5 O2 b" ]' J# I* E( k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 Q# L( f* i% ^( j+ z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' {% ?5 b: N6 A( [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" c  p6 I% r) X% P- K# j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 |2 V: C* i) [7 b7 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, x: o5 t9 X! N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 J% ^5 f7 m6 e. V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% o# ^  N9 D. d5 Q, H8 i1 A+ H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 p( [. t8 l& p! b7 Z: Z1 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  v/ b( w( [, E8 i% @1 I* u<P>你无需担心</P>
  W. }' @& f5 v. q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 L0 X2 e/ Z2 ?" {$ G; O$ W' P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! N4 ~' f' F* q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 ]8 o+ R6 U# g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 T5 q3 ]. Q. j- i& A4 N0 T9 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% r" ?% e7 Z3 w. X0 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' e) b4 }3 ^" A. k+ q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- K7 m: F! k4 B( z: P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! h; W6 b# C! X  E3 [9 N4 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ g6 L  z" U- a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) C2 ~7 |; u8 Q6 n/ s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 Y: }& n. _& h7 f! O' q7 _: {$ t1 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 R( _! A$ J& K& X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 V9 z* E$ P/ A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ~- q4 b" K! G+ M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 t! g' K8 w: }- H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 f# c9 h* O0 {4 S. F! [1 K& v7 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- ~8 j  m: Q2 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 {1 W% z0 T. M/ w9 a/ U9 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 f4 ~9 M4 g8 F8 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 I9 C+ T* z( v1 a3 y; V我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>