【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 [. C& l- ?+ u6 i9 m* a9 M歌词我附在后面。
/ b' i/ m$ G3 `! s& B$ TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 c5 `  y, [5 ^9 D, }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" `; L( n" k. Y, a' n; gThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 q3 n) ~) p% ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- i- y2 {* C) s0 O1 J' ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 t7 h5 o3 {( [% mEvery other word you utter is love
( O/ a( H' a6 {8 f, Z7 `" WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 D+ ~+ M, k* y4 A4 t/ QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 I" B+ c* F+ U7 J+ C0 `7 k- GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 L: S. u" g* N$ e3 C" LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' X. b& q2 M2 YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, a5 Y3 Y# s0 ~' X3 W/ `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 r+ w6 I) q$ Y  l( SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* G! }# N  P- ?, C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# Y4 L1 x& k% c/ q0 @( {' f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 d1 A$ h, w6 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 f' O& o# @5 V' S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 w# `5 Z' V* V& `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- _! s( d+ @8 I: `7 h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) x% p, C! r3 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 Z; e# ~* u; c% u& B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  n/ t/ v" s' X  b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ M; Z4 p) s7 o3 z5 w& ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* p/ }: G1 l5 e; J4 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 j! e$ {! ?6 O3 q& E4 v0 r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ J7 z0 w" |' l& u$ n- n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" J; M5 j1 _, _5 k- D# |5 x" ~; u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ J1 p/ d! J: v  f) Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ e1 q( t  I0 F+ V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) r6 P5 e" `% |5 O& c9 C1 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# W0 W6 V! v' p2 P9 Q  h& _: p& e" ?* s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, l/ y0 {7 R" c: W$ k2 N- L- L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# H4 n; V9 f: M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 g; }) Q1 q7 u- N  \& y0 [- `% M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 }" {; G# `. K( q0 t5 W- G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 ^9 D' d/ a: O: q% I# ]; y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 J6 p4 Q* x# q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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7 d1 O, f6 H1 F6 @6 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>