【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( q# W0 S: }4 x7 l/ Z3 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 \( ?- |9 c7 H% u% y# ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 k- {) C+ v9 f$ b3 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ o  X7 v% N8 L! m$ O( A( OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' b" `0 R$ Y0 u5 FEvery other word you utter is love
3 ^* K8 i% C7 P5 N6 s  H- zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 o8 W0 w7 V- @2 Q' v" @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% P! S+ f2 Q- u4 Z& ?( r5 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 V# l5 O& ]/ B/ t* X  e4 OI regret not dying
; [, E2 N6 C7 _3 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) K7 z2 a! S+ V+ z" X  A( l# rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 \1 g; D* A: J) @. i8 @# }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. }7 @, \) _( T5 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ a3 e$ W3 [! x6 F2 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! G7 G9 I9 \- L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% ?# v. Z# ^% G# a+ o, m: s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& B& c, P7 w( x' i) n+ |9 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. [7 S4 f. h' G. C! o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  V" A0 k* }  ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ p2 ~9 f; ?6 p( M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# {. \1 F1 r- g+ I7 Q; M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 o) }4 l% U2 R/ f: O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% u' G1 ?& ?  D8 X  I! s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 F* U" k$ f: `6 \6 c4 l9 G" O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* \& ]/ c2 d2 p4 X; e' a7 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ f" S6 A. T, W8 R* e/ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 j  \2 P: q  x* x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ {8 J( T  _4 f9 Z' ]5 K  l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; Y5 V7 ^) p) l/ }$ g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' A8 {' F7 k9 L2 c9 z3 L' |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" d! q* T/ ]( m3 G8 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: ]. q8 t* Y' s9 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 d# @0 z4 M' ~8 c2 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ S, \0 F9 [. ~/ ^1 I4 {  }# w/ g我请你剖开它

5 g7 z3 j2 j  b/ k" Z; E3 l( c  c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ |9 c/ R: [* h* z8 a# T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>