【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) y5 G# q0 H6 d: k+ e歌词我附在后面。
- B  G; J+ V' RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: K5 P% l& r/ |% \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 N3 P7 H; g- O0 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 \# d4 f# d, k. d1 J( jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, W1 h0 _6 P  U  b8 VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. O9 O! H. h2 a/ V, d0 \  o' TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 [# G$ m" F, N) i( hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 w! C7 I7 Q& F4 c0 y! cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% l. n) j# {: o% g. r- gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* r8 N9 R4 g4 z) D, Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( _7 u! V8 w$ E( u3 a0 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 o  F/ S0 c- B& o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 f% j" H4 N3 A5 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 b% D" j2 \& I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- q. v0 N/ C, d1 a0 q2 D- J# S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# V# M; B6 R7 [& U! q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% f$ E0 E1 Z, O/ T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( T$ N1 H- d. u' F8 G  x- g; n" ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 s2 ^( s, [/ Z: H2 L6 e9 h$ |. Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  `" v7 D7 a2 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- `3 J  U& p1 y, d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, E1 D  N; b$ Z6 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 f  ~$ ^  E2 `! @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 e% d: l2 y7 I3 U; Z4 G& U% g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 J* S; T  d; n0 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 R# T; O# Z4 B& W; V3 o+ W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 Y8 x( P, Z) q$ ?) K! S1 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 r9 r; Y  ?7 B' ]8 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) ?% J+ R. ~$ [0 ?4 m: t* \) N' z, c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 v! Q3 z# m) u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  u: R/ L; m/ C' V; ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ {+ a% d3 Q7 ~, G' w, J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" l! D8 ^* c5 ]9 S5 b: ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. R2 D% E$ }1 m$ t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>