【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' W2 `/ [6 f8 p7 J1 T6 E歌词我附在后面。
0 \# f3 r' H3 X3 n6 w9 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 x) w! B7 W5 ]9 OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 e0 j5 T' ?* L+ W& O7 G6 M5 WSeeing the sky content with its love
0 Z) v4 Y9 Q# B1 K* u5 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( y1 z" K- W5 `, DYou needn’t fear anything
0 x2 ?  m" ?1 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ b8 B# P8 T: e% \0 _3 }2 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
0 |/ h7 I; f! k; I+ B- S1 m: P1 h% aNothing can compare to my love
8 B3 b$ _: @$ R- F% ~5 W9 i$ LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( f1 s+ G" {/ g+ P& RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 L* Y% z+ K8 S) e; `, u9 D2 SI want so much to see inside your heart
9 c8 L8 d% Q4 M/ B7 C0 Y% vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ W) L- s3 o, ^# a9 b5 qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ v- O  _2 ]- sWith such a tongue as yours,
  A( K" R# O* e: ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  F/ ^2 K+ B* ~* i% C6 y+ tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: x4 B# `' |/ B. q* A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& [# F+ j8 g( I- m  A; E0 r' l3 b, G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! J* v6 o& x$ s4 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! g  G( K1 D. V# p( O7 j# @/ E7 }. G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ], \7 h+ E) B9 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 p! `5 g% q$ M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 K2 E7 Y( N3 s. s* D; E: B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% H5 f9 ^4 V5 D1 K# L+ D5 T  ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 {3 r5 a0 `, R: r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ O1 [9 M8 h" w! `9 {+ ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 n4 n  q2 A( A% e* H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, U$ s. f' z, |! y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- Q5 v& V3 W: N3 ?9 Q+ Q( D8 Z/ K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* r+ i5 C0 [! C0 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& d3 x- \( h1 z* p. M1 P( G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; V" ^; U& F  H/ \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 g* K( l; i* {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 N0 q* a# @* l, C- t8 i0 ~9 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 T7 x$ j" p$ |" v7 N4 O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 c5 {; g% ]' n& s; r# h: Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; x8 w+ ]( p" Q2 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) Q" h* \' Z. `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 j* B6 y+ g+ L8 j5 L& x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>