【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" B/ B# m) ]7 ~2 T6 J9 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, i& s8 w! A% o9 k& DSeeing the sky content with its love
3 I+ R# K% h( }4 b* h& [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: ^6 U* t# r8 M+ z( t5 n- v. q4 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 k' n$ b: I0 H3 r8 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( e, t* U% i0 P. Q% zI regret not dying
' ]' [% G4 J* ~. g) C% S. DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 h- T4 s) W5 D2 t# G: u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 C6 h7 M/ F' h) W. G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; p# c5 C" U  E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 X- R; z9 |; A) W$ i8 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; \  {* |4 A. H4 L( L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ v! V/ t. b0 K' e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 l+ d  h2 i1 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 f  D/ b: V* R  B0 i2 Z- b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 i# K8 |8 R. b% j( v* O/ g+ n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 l$ h! P* ]+ m2 E. K6 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 x6 [2 b& h$ P; @% s. T8 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 ^2 l# a+ r* l2 I' }) t1 ~7 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# K& z9 w5 k$ w; ]: b( [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! ?+ \0 a0 o% X0 C2 D! g9 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- O* o' S% @8 T* \; f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' }# ]4 r* X7 U! u" S. u% z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: B/ |. p. r8 d; V, b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* R1 p8 k0 m$ D$ ]9 q9 N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- X- c1 p7 L7 S3 {+ z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) ~, f* s& l- u# I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ `6 I' [1 u6 b7 |1 n+ a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. _1 N, D9 b1 M3 v& g( q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( l: G7 y; u) h0 X8 ~$ N! O' r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ p9 \) U; H5 K2 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: w, m; p0 T* b  o6 S& J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ A8 B! w5 W: ^! J  d  Q+ D# P0 N0 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 b3 g! H' S( w6 E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" M% R! R% ]+ ^' ^/ l, V' A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  }! E$ S+ F, [4 E. }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 c+ s: y9 l% G/ F0 _% x' I1 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, o% Y% f  w' x9 B, Z1 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# o, ?# q& i# j5 ?# h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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; M; r9 y# y" U0 Y7 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>