【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ k9 t0 m9 c' W% a歌词我附在后面。
3 E) t* g( t- r5 @7 v1 c- tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" A: B: ]$ L$ R* GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( Y+ F5 f( ~7 t, oThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 ~3 e2 e% a7 t: VWith the moon kissing it every night
, F! v  j; ^+ D- X; jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& l; r2 F3 b! X! hYou needn’t fear anything
6 q" C: w- U& G  B6 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 C# V% R3 O6 D0 E: ]2 ^; n' gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 h: S9 x7 {" C8 U$ z/ ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& a0 S+ e) ?" c; m; |/ Z  yI want so much to see inside your heart
, Y3 s9 M7 ]  f: @% rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 z6 z7 n" y' d* U5 H+ \9 x& \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' h7 S. V* a4 n9 H8 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; q4 o0 T9 G9 J9 Z' O9 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) X2 {( U# n+ ~0 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- Q$ v* K6 P' ]3 w9 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, B" O( o9 A7 k6 G6 B: P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 C3 o, {: j0 A5 U+ E; D. i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& I& S$ L- r3 e+ e/ {8 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' ?+ r, D# J+ S  ?+ O) F9 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* Y1 D) G! M/ Q) O0 y. g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: ^* [4 J* `2 _' o3 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( u% u/ R2 E  B- Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 ^6 q, [$ s" p/ E5 |8 ^  D: w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 [, T/ i6 H+ o% B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* ]# c$ {5 H4 Y: Z/ I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ i- w2 S- g) U1 @# Q! i/ C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* {' y$ j# z2 j! x2 b4 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( f& z; Q& P% |# Z+ Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 N! T+ Y* Q) s- c$ h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. l5 K+ f4 b% a. A! I4 `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ A& `5 H+ ^& l: d' B- {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* H) i2 Z% r4 W" g3 C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 a* y# D7 ]( a' @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 I, Q: y; H* i) [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. `8 \; `- [$ E, s3 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ d! l! h  @" h5 K& E2 Z, v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) J% r* @6 @- e; [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! U' r1 Z- _3 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  l- u2 m( z9 g+ }! _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" V7 {( t. ?* T3 K$ ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. |' c9 k) c' H) ^我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>