【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% H* |6 `8 d3 h  v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 r% w+ N( p" y% U2 c$ cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* a7 G4 \: ^: s4 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  N4 `8 U: g& B0 S& I$ m* o) |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( x6 B0 i, F8 [8 [3 f  @+ DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 n4 O% `1 }3 ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 U7 j- X' ?  E# A) jEvery other word you utter is love
  M- B/ ^4 l- g" m6 w& {6 sI really want to know just how much you love me
5 B# F' M, d9 W& iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- H$ [3 ^  b/ e. h- `8 u. hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 ^- {+ |% w4 F6 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: k( _* F& D- Y0 o4 a! _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" m9 l7 H, N* C  O9 k3 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: r8 X) s8 S" _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; |2 ^+ T) l) a3 @7 M5 e: f6 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, S  f0 p+ g- H! x; W/ _4 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 n8 D+ o$ t0 z5 w9 `* A7 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ~2 n" \. @/ J9 W) C- X8 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* w9 f1 o8 y- Z  [8 c8 {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 ~6 l5 O$ }. W3 H# n/ |. P+ L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: B% \( P. `5 _. c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- h. j& y; p! r9 j2 D# U2 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" C2 Z4 y- w: R8 ], c" j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 p6 L1 N" C. _) Q8 k* p. o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ g1 g! A  X3 d' r7 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 N  q) f9 {9 W9 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! d' @% d. E0 D3 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# z$ `* _) S9 e2 f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  m% N: L- c( H" J- p; W; T/ C0 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' C+ O+ ]- e5 y+ w6 J" B7 x* E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 N9 F) N0 V2 I) k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 Q) t/ j7 q7 A0 \) e, E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# P* f4 J; Z3 G  K/ E! l5 f% g: ^# ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 O9 [5 u1 }6 ~8 @6 d+ \7 O5 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 e) i9 L- v0 w) F3 Z: q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 i& U, o* D$ o' E! Y4 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, G6 j0 j$ c" [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: s2 k: J7 Y, X0 A# s! E; ]+ H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% K1 I* q, j0 H. L/ p# i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( ~* i4 I4 D! a) Y, k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 A4 J( C. s7 F: ^7 B3 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ {( d: n; s- q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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+ i$ `% b  t. W7 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>