【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: K9 r+ T; p8 {( }: O( ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
; K. [% v1 k7 i# g  x( FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ D9 K6 t0 d/ d8 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* O" O0 H0 G6 q. }! Z7 ~7 K; BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: |& G" |9 Z" O, I7 C( @The sky is happy down to its soul
& ?3 J) ^" j# w$ D4 H4 J1 }With the moon kissing it every night
/ ]# n; G: q+ @8 l& c3 w1 k" u/ l5 nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( o, z% G8 S# PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# i6 t- `$ z& z5 C& ^2 ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- R- B; d* W( o) R0 X+ P+ @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 b+ `2 c: S2 z8 P; N& RI’m still filled with fear
1 f3 C" @; G: Q2 h- Q& @9 sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 @; y4 b7 n, T  P$ p, g6 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, D+ i0 T7 q2 k  j8 \With such a tongue as yours,
4 X" P! c2 l  }7 @( d& PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 g7 ^+ E  ]+ FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ g6 u( X3 s; k4 p. o1 A1 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 k2 O0 g% k! l# c9 Q& M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" `) }- ]. b- Y. l- o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ C% n' X1 T& I* L+ g' ^0 L$ R8 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  w0 j/ M0 R; [5 w' ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. H9 a$ |% j5 U6 S# a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* y; v/ S; x( T4 t3 O, ^4 X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 t, g. _9 {0 V) w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 G/ s5 U$ T; _. W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  D' w) c& l) D/ e<P>你无需担心</P>
1 U5 y" R& T" e4 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, q8 q9 m" u" S6 w0 d7 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ q8 k5 L; j8 d: x! g5 ?5 X6 |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& I% ^5 h0 M3 a- `! [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  P- v, s! @3 R+ j% {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 G! w! d" i, n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ t- w3 d3 T7 l/ w" @  h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 Q- ^: y2 G8 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 S* O8 c! b2 ^& r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  j8 x3 K* m' j+ d" v' w, I: e<P>I regret not dying</P>
  G0 `! ]/ k# ?# _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" n/ k" ^" c" Z4 U; O, B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# y/ R0 H, a: D: `% \( K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) l1 p1 ]. E' k/ g6 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# Z: U2 L+ _9 k% k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 K! S8 Z9 Y2 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>