【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ P3 |% b* b* S. B$ xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, l$ ?  I' l* h# gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: \6 q6 l' h. g$ j5 V& y. uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' S: x9 r6 o; ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 L6 K. R3 Z6 A4 D9 ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( X1 Y$ e2 k/ _: qYou needn’t fear anything
/ P5 J1 w8 Y2 j5 i7 l$ q$ G# F& WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; f4 B3 n2 ?, p. P! ]/ uEvery other word you utter is love
% i0 x/ C; f7 k; ?" X( F0 B* Z+ P/ @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! I4 ?" r" V8 SNothing can compare to my love
# x: h, D2 }' q% M" BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, ^! l, V8 S8 ]$ n) H) K! H9 D: aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 M3 R' _' U0 e" B3 l; iI’m still filled with fear
- n% J7 H# M. N5 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 V" c' k: ?8 R7 ^2 s1 p; ~: |- pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% K) e6 j1 w% n2 i; p& S" m* lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 Q0 Z0 U, P" xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 p- X. }& M) t6 p2 l: u0 H1 ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: k& F$ b! w' ~; h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 f+ |2 Y: d( D6 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* x8 d& H' ?& u- o9 r' m- F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 z( }+ r5 i2 p( m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 c9 J$ b7 @8 f- E8 `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- S! O7 H9 @4 X/ L7 X9 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* T# [. N' Z" u1 N/ \9 G1 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. F" k6 X. h% S& R: f% e  J" E8 \0 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 u# X6 H0 k6 L6 H; y' V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 m, l- I$ I" j8 _4 \! E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  x. M9 o0 @9 d4 [# `* Q7 B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# i! t# P1 y& Q. d3 I/ G* n" m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 }, ]4 B: O5 W  ]: U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, ~" [' M; T. K9 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  b$ l/ b9 ~# w+ x. w4 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: ~/ Z$ b5 k; Z% N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 R  K  C3 I! d# {8 M- n: o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ R6 F* M; h- ^2 ~- C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 Q5 y. _& E- p9 T, n" g9 r9 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- V, T" t1 ]1 c! o  a$ b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: V/ H9 D* _3 n5 Y! T<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 r( s, `& H+ W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( |( M! V& k1 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 W4 m( {0 h( u, F% ^1 f) R6 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 r$ A% o0 J8 T8 k3 x6 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& _: ~* y+ k* A7 t9 }8 k) F' j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 ?( C  u. S0 k  ?5 @, z& r: l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! T% U( U3 s8 m* g1 ~: b& W, D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; k% Q. g) m  }8 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- w. c7 T( y' c+ f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>