【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 K4 y1 h; n2 ]& G0 T3 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: N& l" c7 G  _+ b# J9 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- O, W* @9 @, i& `( y, x& D* QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ m" K  U. q) X. m" p$ J9 T6 ~You needn’t fear anything
! Q% p, A) S" N& kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% @& @6 y' v) e' [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. R! d( n, L- a; qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# F6 A! d. m1 f( ^; }3 G$ ]7 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 ~& @4 C+ m- p% j! S0 ~/ V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ b0 R/ z4 M+ ~# r$ s$ K! w" B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  J- F% B, b: U' M: M1 B1 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 m. u4 ^+ |0 e* n- q/ h9 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# x; j( r1 C4 |5 K& E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* [4 X# [' ?& j* t; ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 V) Y; P" U8 C- O- f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ r! _8 V! J: i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- m! U9 t0 C: I( G2 R, v: g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ a# B1 A+ z' m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 }' R3 b9 ]! Q! x, i0 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 ]& v1 d4 m  C, L, }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 j3 A" ~& H2 P. z6 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ L! A& h- ]2 B) E* J3 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 B# j  a4 `- X+ B7 @6 k8 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# [( x, a" e& G# k# L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ k6 R2 U) p( T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; S: H; M/ W4 n4 e$ w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ F) Q- d5 B2 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 ]! C/ @4 z- J2 s$ E7 m+ c9 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- p, m& y8 L/ N; W) Z2 _* ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* e/ S& u* v7 I3 ?4 {! y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" l* s- A% ^: J! V  O7 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, q$ n' |5 b/ [# F7 L1 |; N+ |' X" P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 ?# G; k2 e* }. o. h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 k$ d; }; p2 v% C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, l7 C  c: m* A6 c5 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' M% x+ O1 U/ S9 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. G2 W- |6 x& q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 r/ C4 }8 P' \# x) F. I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. a3 ]/ h; p! F8 F0 x, p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>