【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 a, d% W- _% ^1 F' F9 P歌词我附在后面。
! k0 n! [- `9 |' L# n/ BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 {/ I+ z9 U( F5 G8 N/ pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% d7 J7 s( o9 Y* V8 I5 m) EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# q$ Q8 H( @# i) ?The sky is happy down to its soul
5 M5 i2 W  g  ]& t: j- IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( {, Q5 H6 X3 m! `, i+ `Every other word you utter is love
' F9 h# R- R' S/ Y7 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
& X" S0 l# T# B$ iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" N' T( O, p  g) A5 l$ PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 G  W$ K4 w+ |# u9 X6 `0 Q; SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ e2 R) E! h4 O( rI want so much to see inside your heart
0 v3 e' Z7 i, R6 R- xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 U  L- }3 r1 o# i5 t7 i( o/ PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 _" _" _9 {$ p! {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' {1 v* M# `, F) E' rWith such a tongue as yours,
/ e# P; _5 k$ y2 o, s( ^2 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 ]) M/ L! A, @2 N5 C) Q( ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ W( @! o' V! C1 R) ]5 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" B9 `1 a& e4 C- q) P6 d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" R6 u& Y, y2 `% h' L0 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; G3 ]* X- h) F2 E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ I# j5 W( F0 u0 |8 b" w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& b# r  z/ X# f8 o/ N/ S, w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 F" I/ @* e" h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* }! f- t5 H6 }. F6 e7 c! Y+ k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 ?. ?- m7 @; }+ B" {$ R" q( c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 m. K2 V" ~8 u( S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* ~" Z. N" a9 h2 Z9 c2 ~$ [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* W9 q8 r! d3 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ I% K# D0 X# r* y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; ^: N) {% Q; \! @4 d# l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 D' Q8 N  D$ Q+ v5 z5 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, E/ d7 I! X9 T. o+ z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  f+ M! U4 v9 j7 z  N/ m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* Z. K( b. d; G8 f! c9 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 [; W" D) E9 w. o" ~% c# p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) F0 U# L5 V! m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ X& k1 O! s8 u" S2 i% O) a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 z4 V& B8 h! k6 S3 N# O+ H5 I! \( S4 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; J" F3 W2 A5 i1 h7 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; j4 C5 [3 }+ E5 |9 c( K; n我请你剖开它
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  ^! t: B) P* E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>