【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' B' z: V! S  P! O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: i1 D) D/ g/ C' G7 F6 K3 e7 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" c* r) F+ H/ IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& [9 O5 q+ Q* tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 ^2 ]2 [! B/ z4 |' vWith the moon kissing it every night
8 ^; ?* t! L5 s; Q% qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, }  W+ i" `; [Every other word you utter is love
' l  S; w/ ]: c1 p" ], k8 BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ j- T7 L2 V$ y2 v# m6 X! ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 I7 }) q9 s" T" H" E" rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 d4 X( C5 k# z9 E, XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& ]' S/ h: `1 G8 W9 C" O7 g6 KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, z! v, R8 M/ y9 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' \+ Y! t! v+ ]# G$ {- @( G3 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, G" C$ b, x  g( W6 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 e1 `2 R. e1 K. l/ U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ j; X# |, l, n1 A" U3 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& y8 E1 u$ `( Q" y9 q  i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# M1 p- l* `+ Z9 b+ A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 N8 C! |2 [% w$ ?( I$ E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 H4 p) b  R& S/ z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 ^1 F. z3 I9 K/ s1 y( _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 b6 d8 g7 a# S$ \  C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 b" o2 d: t1 E+ {9 W1 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! m( A2 r; v+ m2 q/ W/ W% A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* `4 \  `8 d# ^, X4 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ R4 _, \6 {: d3 j% D8 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- U% H8 p: b' P$ G4 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" K( a1 c; o" x2 ]: V, r- a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) a. G6 }) S" ^. P5 [1 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# V4 o! ~6 ?. P, J# P. m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) o9 C! t! c0 K1 i/ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ^8 W" p6 z, \' U- v. m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 x3 M( t2 F. K0 w' v- c, s* A! c/ H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% V3 ]- G+ e: J9 o: F3 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# p6 I+ c9 ?4 G9 n' _- @  V4 _0 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 l3 `& s! @0 y+ D6 C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 P3 K, d& J% [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 @: p! O: j5 v' [$ o) }! _$ c" G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 P9 v+ r) u* @. o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ X. ^4 |9 M0 ~4 {* Y$ v* O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 d: X5 S2 A9 d, g: ]: d1 |3 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' s5 n- ]5 c4 p% b# y4 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 d, O; _2 q$ |  [; B$ Z4 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 ~! O' c- O9 L; w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& i7 y* t" a+ l1 B, }' z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>