【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  g4 b) a: F7 I" vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 Z7 N+ R0 O0 R$ w$ R1 r  s2 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 y) z# n. G# J- Z1 a" ^8 O' sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 A9 d2 r0 X& \  k! a" B8 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 |# G; T1 O9 Y, {0 a* p' w( yThe sky is happy down to its soul
! J5 H2 \& `; H( A' @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: J. p7 A8 z8 R9 x5 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% s' q* K  b& [, TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 |( U  ]# H- e# Z' d, @% Q/ pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ j- u' l  [. S- A" }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! C$ `6 x4 V% J! Q/ yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 M9 z1 A) P" ~8 i$ E2 a8 A! _) ^I want so much to see inside your heart
) d( o* s3 Y8 S2 l/ PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 ]" n% E* y" ]: f2 o4 F- RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ R* s# G# E: _3 }% t3 S% TWith such a tongue as yours,
: Z( O  S/ `( ]/ c5 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ?0 n0 L1 e8 U4 }& NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, ?0 o6 \( a: h5 @% y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 V! a) q+ N( N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& H) z* J9 h# P& M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' ?4 m6 y1 N. V8 G2 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& k& `5 ^* ?/ w3 j0 l- W9 t, k! B8 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) g. @. _* q9 f8 J$ w% @% `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' r" I& i! Z" h: L! T0 E4 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( u) Y. i. K- {0 B% p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 c( ^; E4 F- w" ~, L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 z; i; N# k& w: b" J6 G/ y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 w. N' q) {. V( i0 w0 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% q8 T2 w5 F5 P) `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' o$ R9 b4 U, j' [8 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ V; x+ O6 Z& ~5 o4 [4 ^* G$ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 g0 p% D7 E  |5 g. L# x/ o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ p2 r1 r# n( O& {7 K6 e9 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ t$ A1 {, W: `. t, s$ B6 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; y; g9 j3 J: P5 `4 g/ F! e/ l<P>I regret not dying</P>
% U% |( n- H# h0 o9 \. ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( X4 E& R+ j8 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# {, h! N3 ]2 {* b% f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 s/ C$ p/ b- q% z$ ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' Q" M  Z+ ]; Y6 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ v  i8 C  J- J' W1 n' t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 n3 }$ y2 m6 S3 u7 m, @9 W( \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ Y, i- S  ?4 ^. s. S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>