【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 a$ |" N5 r1 x0 j# W; q8 R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 c# u- y/ g7 G# G* h( P& c# fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* Q. X* G4 V0 i4 V7 ?9 N, fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# w8 k8 o) W# E: U! |+ {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' l6 e  O6 n0 G) {7 F# O' Y; SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 j% ~$ J$ N' G1 ^' Y. t! rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% q' E2 @* [  C& s9 \4 F% i8 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ _) B5 C$ u/ q; t; \" U/ g0 z1 s0 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, q4 |) A5 @! DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ G. i9 ~5 J6 S1 X7 II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# l& W) Y+ c9 p2 Y+ _* EI’m still filled with fear
5 Z0 @5 s: T1 V1 h: u# I; kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( `; i* z7 @" g& h# ]: GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ J' {  k9 V7 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. v1 ?) r9 X8 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 x; R6 G8 M7 S- LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 o, o, T/ Q. D2 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! U( r5 F9 Y1 w* u4 b0 w5 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 s# q5 I6 `$ Z& ~. f" r7 P5 Q" u; ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& n$ E6 e- v+ F+ W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( Q. D6 A. c1 p) `9 n5 {: n# ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 ?; ?2 x) ]! g# h% ?' ~; C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 z7 o; n' [) t, s( T, T; ^! V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 P. j% ~% P- O! X- s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ q* v1 l+ T* H2 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. K! g, `' D1 G, X% T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% H7 u4 D, k8 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) L! L, }# X' r# @1 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ ?8 {" W; G7 S. |# S" Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, ^; `+ C6 ?7 I7 m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 d2 p# U; t" v+ z- n, O$ Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 P- \& O  I- ^3 K7 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% e$ p1 m8 |) D. j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' [9 V$ A; w/ ^2 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 x* Q9 T( S/ T" B) L/ F( I5 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 l# \2 n0 q; L( U; x1 O7 e; z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 a4 A: {1 J% o* k- C& z1 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ t( _0 e; K9 _( c8 z4 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 i3 A) N" a# {  @6 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- J( `5 Q0 @: w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- Z0 c5 g" O3 Y; `. F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 C* u9 E6 U  m3 w: Q( e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>