【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 T7 x6 R, y- A" v' r, bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 o. N( Y$ ^. Q$ I1 P* h9 A9 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. F/ c0 N" x) q& _- _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 a5 @! w% ~' OWith the moon kissing it every night
- N$ X2 U, ^% W. ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' ], s3 \6 `: E: B- ~6 v" A% cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! @4 {8 E  A1 i- B" ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 t9 O1 ~; v/ Y4 _6 H7 PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 g) p8 k; G" O+ yI want so much to see inside your heart
4 X6 a% F1 B6 p3 A0 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 v1 A3 z/ |  n7 g" T7 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 Z' G  E9 y8 c4 _3 S1 t( lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* K. a! _. h5 W7 U4 d' v% I1 [; E/ v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ \" o4 i' h) D7 Z. }% d: U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ v. n: V; A0 m; L+ K9 t. `" ]( L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 H) Y- q0 p6 K. T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& E2 L4 M( P* W) d0 o3 s5 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% }3 D' s" U% `, K& h1 @/ S# U! B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; I4 t0 ?9 u- j* C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  [6 D' k* i  E& y1 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- K8 f/ M! m2 P+ o# R$ b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% |* p* s8 s: F' p4 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' ]6 s, Q& p' Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' r$ I4 k$ ]1 \; Q7 J+ A+ O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  @) d: m+ g, x8 g8 U% N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- [. }) |( B- R2 K; y, Y& @, M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" C# h* b3 g) h$ n7 Y! W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ H& T, A" T' w: A( _7 ]0 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 ?3 }6 |0 K4 @3 V1 d  V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 \9 R- t1 }& g+ K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# F7 h4 s; L0 v5 g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 ?- W7 j( X8 I$ Y* Y8 m7 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
* Y" q$ _* M0 a1 A! V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 b& l) n/ _0 M# |& G# ]7 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ]) i' m4 q8 `. A6 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! U9 ~6 P7 q$ W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% M: D8 d$ G' P4 s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ c$ r0 H. L1 T' X6 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# y6 B* Z9 d0 G; C* d) w8 H7 ~! \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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8 m4 H6 D  s5 h+ l& W6 S' s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 [2 u6 V7 I1 V- u  W/ A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>