【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 a9 l  [/ H7 c! A" m% ?8 p" Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! n7 m) l5 c0 S; }0 i, j+ |" KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) @* ~  f* w& M) h( V% y' F" s/ sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# v$ i2 a8 c5 K& j8 k6 |1 W# |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- A. g7 T- [- e# }) L; EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ D, P/ B, ~! H: Y) o: d/ t8 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 r0 M8 z6 d: ?2 y! a4 z, o  ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* M7 Y, P9 f4 r5 X7 _% wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 `9 |3 E$ T# yWith such a tongue as yours,
# @2 V# @+ \9 t* m" {: T$ E+ CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ w; |# S& u" ~/ l6 |; f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 x7 k7 m! s: x7 i- C9 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 {, Y: e* L' D& b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* e9 Q" {0 ~* g% [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ {1 K  T( Y* |/ h0 M9 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 C8 Q' z! X* e4 O5 @/ t' F- l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 f# Q* `" f# p9 a$ n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 h, C& c8 y- J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% M5 I& I/ g, w0 K3 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 O6 m1 @* N% {" d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! T2 \& I, _  e# B  e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) k* u7 W- Q# ~9 Q' ^2 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- W1 F6 M" R: U1 {4 [8 K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 T  x) M0 q% L' X& G% }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ d; M6 s5 ^2 K% V) a7 P/ P0 \( g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* F8 I8 q: o6 G. b; `. C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 V/ ?9 O7 ^8 A( q/ k8 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% z: k" F$ b; h) @) }9 X5 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 O% a$ t! R$ ~$ y, V9 y8 N* Y/ o" K# D; G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: Y. e* z6 a6 @0 l) Y: r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& {& t+ a/ b8 V3 v1 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' n3 u. i  J4 r' A" I! H$ T5 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 Y% j4 q# L  }% ^* a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 N1 _3 a8 ~/ g* v, R; X$ ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" ^4 H: _; ?7 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 v1 `5 W! O3 K7 o5 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 T; P* \+ F4 \: D+ V; k7 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* f6 [3 d6 H9 @! J% ~) F; D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 f' ^. L4 _2 H: q. w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( Y4 t0 I2 O( k% D2 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) F4 ?: T! q7 W! J  c; T& x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
* D1 y2 w" ~9 O4 q& \
我请你剖开它

; C, A3 n, K3 E: j* V9 f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; v2 s) h+ H  {' x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>