【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 W0 r* |2 x- i9 P0 Y/ q& DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 o0 S( G/ c" P: n5 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, g) W" G' F3 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 ]2 m% M* e* E1 a8 v& }. sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, E, I( j5 Q) Q: m8 aSeeing the sky content with its love
7 D5 o$ Z# n+ FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% X- O$ L7 C" _) h8 Q* _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, F6 @3 }/ j2 p0 \, g* w. x1 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 z- N7 `; ~9 O9 ]8 ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! r# k2 f; ^8 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 B) c' A7 `0 P! ^9 uI’m still filled with fear
8 B" j" C: J# J" D. ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. Y5 f' I1 c/ f$ t& KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 H5 ?6 u& |1 ~1 ~9 ?7 ?, ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 F6 X, r( P1 y6 s$ r4 S0 A6 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) j* w, F# W8 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ @/ [& q1 f3 `+ ?0 `% R2 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, J0 Q+ a9 ]5 x( D# [2 j! O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* B) x  ]; f7 l, ]4 b6 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 }7 E3 {1 h2 |! R& \5 K2 i5 ^" E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' p& G7 A5 @" W, Z; M& i* ^, S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ x: `6 Q8 H" L, Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 W2 {6 s8 F! s8 [, H. k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ @: M4 x! Q$ F7 W! _+ \9 p  |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( [; \0 ?6 q% v1 z3 f4 A! D. `1 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: W1 ?2 w8 y7 H$ N# D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 V+ q* f5 s: o7 {9 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* `1 V$ @6 A& |) ~6 q) P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% z( R+ L: z' ]$ F2 c+ h, `" H. t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 z: q( b( t8 u* b5 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' ^% {% N2 b* D" ]: @7 H3 \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* o$ i. Y( {! L1 \# i7 Y2 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
, I0 v- H& b/ C2 R1 l. r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( @3 A: Y& p0 ^0 a5 a  x% w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: F/ |6 V8 k1 {2 q# R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 v' z7 m; I2 D/ U$ d' D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) x6 c- d$ M# O: ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* G' d! z) @3 l; Q$ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; U* _0 M2 S9 o: G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( f; p8 s& n2 I+ ~4 ]5 }$ e2 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( f7 H  _) Q* ~! R; n; n( r+ _# n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 }+ e7 a! @2 A9 I/ b0 X5 k  c1 G我请你剖开它
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2 d( C# N4 I5 t. k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! k1 @) ^  V( K: f8 o8 v" u8 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>