【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" u1 K4 q! p% U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- G9 ?3 f' W4 _; u4 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ O' Z8 @9 F, IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 F+ l0 r0 \5 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  Z$ ~( Y+ K6 @2 D+ ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* ]9 w$ j- D5 N3 [- Y8 b4 ]) ZYou needn’t fear anything
  a; c$ a" C  e) |1 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* N+ S3 @; W- j' ?# jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 t* |1 l- a- g* o, C8 d1 ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 w# P' g! j. l5 GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 f  b9 K; G( ^0 h, C( k3 \4 wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 f: ^0 E0 O$ g) sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& c; q4 M. n$ `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 k6 d* z  `5 E9 j2 v/ p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& u! m$ s( r) f# B7 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" e. e. }1 ^: k8 U7 j' ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; o( i2 L) ?' x1 v$ l% u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* S, e+ m! [: y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ T5 }# N; ?0 B/ X2 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( v( a6 Z+ S7 a: ~7 N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! S- |% ]0 E, k0 R) n( y! @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 ]7 S+ C; T  z" Z* [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. n4 \1 ]% [( \4 a1 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; I* Y% l! ]/ u1 R2 T% e<P>你无需担心</P>
/ [' l, ^# A& s% I3 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 `- ^$ J7 |1 \4 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ X) G! O. i/ X* z  m9 ?) R# T1 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 r. f5 U4 e0 ]9 B7 u6 ]5 E$ c$ C( L: o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) a& e0 E* q: Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% f2 h6 |% W) K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  {1 |2 C) G; J' a0 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 F$ j9 H1 Y7 I& e, \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ y% e9 D! ~. |' A0 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ L" ]6 _( v+ X: A2 N' _( |$ z8 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  h' T* b0 v5 C2 K1 J( R9 T  t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' [' V4 `# ~1 g3 e2 ]! _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 h; r0 i* }( F! u, _9 S: V. o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 _8 @5 P# `! B1 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" Q5 q. v2 ]3 ^9 [  b9 Y6 w. x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 n. `$ w2 P2 d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) C; n6 U1 g$ u# {; N0 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ }  r9 b7 ?' k2 I  D& S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ ]" B+ I1 H. d. M我请你剖开它

; T2 k# z* Q( z8 ?3 ?8 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ D) R+ p* c. v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>