【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; k" c+ Q8 ^- f+ ^. B6 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' z( }, B+ b3 Z6 H7 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; r9 Y& R* X$ t9 t& uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# @- d5 i' @2 s4 L) ]+ uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& A; [( \3 [) k* V3 CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. Y$ e' l: _+ ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: n6 `: {# T; X' p' `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; b- F+ _7 H9 z$ R( Q4 u; i/ nYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: O- ]3 x: a( P. v. F2 G! TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; @7 u/ N$ O+ ?& k) W6 f/ _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* B0 u5 I. Q5 u! {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 s/ Y/ G7 ^. E; N, h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" @' V. E. x4 q6 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 D4 {$ }) ^7 P7 u- W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- K) e! N6 t; c8 ?; S! P0 P5 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! m) J0 g/ l" S5 h0 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, ?0 R2 \' [7 `& u* i$ ~( N- G( y4 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 d- R2 v3 I/ ~- n5 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ b8 \  D+ R8 K3 m; c* g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 c2 b! E8 u( Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* v/ i" d7 P$ p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 L. M7 @7 M6 p  @1 N* Y, ?% f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ Q3 L  K, K! x4 r* e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: v& d, i3 D% T  N8 S" L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 n3 K; h; H9 E( t9 w7 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, }% Y$ ~7 J  W5 u- u, o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: |5 y  A' S& d8 X. x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- B+ z$ |  h+ {5 {, k- z- S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% |$ t$ X6 F2 a6 a" [" k! j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ B- J4 D8 G% K; v( X+ q1 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' \: H. `* l0 H  C( `( ?( q4 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; M( R: z( a$ q) _8 C' R: ?. Z/ W! `+ m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( A" X1 b# [( @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) ~8 n' |+ ~6 r9 F9 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* g9 q* A# D! {! e8 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* W, G6 @+ {- }7 ?4 n$ _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# o3 `) n: D3 [' K  x% ^0 Y我请你剖开它
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1 ^, y5 p6 K: p) H' S- I! n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 ?. X( [3 z$ q2 q2 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>