【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& i8 t$ B- ]$ z: d# E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ O/ p" _+ ^6 X- [0 E, }) h" YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: ~: e2 |% p+ KThe sky is happy down to its soul
! y% y  r* }0 KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) w/ b: G9 V* i; y( {4 N( lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: ~; h  ?3 I# ?, Y: L: }- K  {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 e3 j; p# R* J4 g0 {+ jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 C$ M+ c+ c5 N' RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- _7 _9 K+ V6 i, l6 s* uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 Y# R$ N  {& g' {( p: CWith such a tongue as yours,
' Z3 y/ F' @! UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* X+ c1 e; Y+ O- I5 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. n, J, [' h5 n% {8 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 J7 x/ d6 ^. D1 N% o2 u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& m8 J; b# W+ i0 |, l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  c4 C/ Q$ @8 A5 n. V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" O- t, t5 Y) m3 @1 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 N5 j& J9 A! Q7 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. k9 S8 b+ u+ l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: z7 |9 O$ [5 H) H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 _- [2 J6 ~5 X: [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 Q/ F5 |) @  c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 y; f" ]$ f2 {+ ?( F3 N( @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' ^8 K+ T; P. }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 f# |  T+ t3 r# t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 R5 h$ V; L8 z$ }" K7 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: W8 I4 @9 V6 j+ v<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 m" Y; G0 {3 b7 R& z3 ^, J0 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 s; A  \  g4 Y  q) k) `! C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 J! R2 O, H5 P. y% q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 x4 @& A# T9 J  a7 g0 o+ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; z; Y, W$ y* y6 `! N9 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>