【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 G8 A; ]' g" Q歌词我附在后面。
/ N+ Q4 n+ ]5 E- N. y0 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ ]) Q( H0 Z$ T; V. JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) g7 [; }2 r+ b* u& N. l( T# hThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ ?2 t! J3 b4 y4 R: JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 L* s, I5 T: w! SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ g" {- I" x+ ?- d+ s0 YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' e' ^6 d" A( ~; B5 @! BI really want to know just how much you love me
  @6 N% D& m: \4 \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! A8 p! }5 O9 f- iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" F% H4 w" D: @6 H& @* @, J5 Y3 fI’m still filled with fear
$ L6 r. P* x6 ^4 M( i) AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: ~( S! C. u+ _  s- UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* B- M) F" b) L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! W/ a! G' R# }0 o) @2 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' H& \: |  K6 ]$ ^0 Y+ u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* [# f9 [5 f( W6 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! v' _. o6 e0 W/ ]# ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% v7 F  ~' ?; O) |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% X0 s/ w# B7 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 w( q5 s6 i( t& F9 J8 M# J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 N+ X& Q" H1 P5 F! @* D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* G) X. l7 a" O4 z4 R5 u+ R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 U% z' Y) |  C4 E& z0 N* S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 N3 S0 }6 P! p, D8 F1 \, C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 b& f; m, Y! L6 f* q" W# ^/ f: @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 G/ p1 U4 F6 n; v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 V: T/ d2 P+ ~# Z) T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* r8 y4 X) q$ K8 u: I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  D2 ]; \4 v6 E8 @8 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 Y" {; n& ~) `$ W# e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 v" l8 ~* q- H5 G$ E9 Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 }& i8 K* W) m" B% D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, T! {! j; D* |( `: G& u0 N6 S+ G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% p8 s5 Y/ p/ l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>