【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 ~8 e/ t9 y1 e3 D7 Q6 h9 u( Z% o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# l+ w8 U" r( t9 ^, g% x1 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" a2 R/ y! l) O7 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ l3 j" U% g7 w. E9 G5 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& Y4 k2 l& O: w& \) OSeeing the sky content with its love
* i9 z7 s9 W2 a* o. SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 j# L1 J4 O* T& y; eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; s, w+ J9 I  c( ?Every other word you utter is love
# H6 ]5 @' ^' rI really want to know just how much you love me
' n9 o0 D8 n) B6 zI love you I love you with all my heart
1 e/ G% z' ?* ~! I3 x( fNothing can compare to my love
* n! p9 `2 r; d  i, ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 E/ t+ @$ ]4 O  F- XI’m still filled with fear
$ s- J2 L- Y9 H4 J$ p9 NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 o! k6 s" d, R. `  d8 ?I regret not dying
6 T. {) i; w  w: o0 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 t; ^& Q, y$ K1 Z3 ^0 b# P; }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  X# H. P  l& c( @; a1 v# a$ j: ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% @) u# a8 y" A# J7 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, t( P' R$ _! B' O( d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 J7 b4 d. Q, j9 M( o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* C, E: W/ p# H( ^  e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) w6 J, K& P1 m8 G% E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 O6 |# e9 u& B7 B' F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. r; l) c0 Q3 h* |! y+ \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) x, b. S1 e# O$ r+ }<P>你无需担心</P>
% Y! S  Q& v4 R: X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# u8 X( ]5 I, f4 w: z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, t. t4 b6 D9 G0 l* A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# ^# j% q* g2 J1 u% T5 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, H% t) L2 H1 k9 e3 a. x  T  J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! F/ Q" y7 f7 U) P1 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 E+ g6 f9 w* _$ G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 l. j. p7 T5 u" j  U9 J  g! B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! Z6 b( L+ z7 R8 v2 o' j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% P7 V8 F4 m0 @8 o( |' V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 N7 [9 ~0 P7 K8 h" i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; `5 q4 g, l2 u$ ~3 d( m8 O( L<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 {! T; ]7 Z% D9 l2 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ `! ^' t, V! M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* Y3 h$ q! f) t5 {# d. S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ Z$ ?. D- t6 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. H8 u) I, V( f! H, T7 f3 L$ [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ |$ H. d3 S5 z5 B8 K! k6 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ |8 l3 @$ y1 N6 }7 J9 s0 q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 A  _7 _$ `! R" Y0 A: c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ x5 v0 j5 S; h3 f# }6 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>