【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& Z9 x7 l* V. E! p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: ~2 m% E  v, m; H, G! d  ~# {Making the sky glitter like gold,
: N6 I0 N2 S+ MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; m( e- J* i3 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" Z9 K2 M; C$ m+ g4 S" R% tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. t3 Q" E5 N1 G7 j- H; m' x9 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* N1 U1 \) g' k% n+ C* iEvery other word you utter is love
9 z% t5 W$ k. Z# J- e  RI really want to know just how much you love me
0 q" G' @/ R% s8 uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ M/ F& @2 _/ T, p" C+ M$ J/ L" h1 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 W3 v0 e* a: y* ~8 d- aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 Z8 z& N8 Y3 g% ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ i4 D8 V+ S5 R: j' [% @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 |' _( k" H& P& p; C$ Z% w) O8 KWith such a tongue as yours,
9 L% P' ?. C3 W( ]3 q8 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( w* O  w3 {: \; b. {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  d7 ]. p0 ?5 K0 v# Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: u, {' ^* x" d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ k9 i6 X+ B5 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  p, a) I3 a1 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; U! ?5 O3 b4 F( y) r' d4 Z$ a2 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  X9 ?3 i5 U# l1 b" N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% E8 a, p) a. x/ X7 K( s0 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  j; H+ C+ ^$ \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 E+ y8 m: T5 a6 Y3 h4 c$ b5 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: ~5 G- P; E8 n( b; T+ S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ M9 E% C8 [3 r+ Z<P>你无需担心</P>
! y9 u9 y1 L& y, {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# R1 J8 m: f" a3 a3 Z  C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 O8 T' T6 Z8 }8 A2 q! u) `8 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 ]) M9 [6 s) x! M4 w# L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 u* ~0 \) P( i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" l: d6 I5 f; ~9 @! s2 w* k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ @5 P/ Q2 G; g* P0 h" ]+ i# k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 @4 D. w% j% Q5 M) B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 b/ Z. N& y4 p  Z* ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 N4 t  s0 c3 i9 g$ p' y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 l5 h; d) N8 B4 R2 A$ I7 G2 M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" p! M% `) M- m8 t4 B. U: k) J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' P/ e# X, \, S4 c' k( [. ~& ^. ~3 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 @! J) n! O' @我请你剖开它
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8 w4 P* y7 h# Q2 E/ h" U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>