【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: C7 m2 c7 z5 o" ^7 x' hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 {* ]* V8 s; v/ N- b4 Q0 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 b4 N; B' u% ~( `& VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ E7 J0 l4 e' F) `" B# y% GSeeing the sky content with its love
6 {2 ]5 N4 L1 F" ^8 W& e7 X9 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# g; Q6 ?6 k; I$ D7 N, EYou needn’t fear anything
; F( q7 c+ \$ h% VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* R) @$ L/ a# `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- n1 V, O% o# G  w% G2 G7 H# eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. I9 l+ E; w! EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) u% P  Q; r$ OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. J, N# }) r/ R5 U& QWith such a tongue as yours,
+ ~( B  a9 ]$ n: uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. e5 m. v) m7 H. v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  y% y+ g/ @6 S4 e5 ]( N0 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" e/ C. i8 \# X1 l6 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 ^: ?9 E1 V3 g% S" |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 W8 g& [7 X6 t! t) W- _9 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! B8 u/ v1 g- X0 W1 V8 p# S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ k& V' [/ R  V+ J3 b9 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  ~' c/ z  o. ~" V% o: S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 i5 X) S3 z6 f* \# v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( A1 a0 ~" j6 [9 w' U! e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; i: @$ ~1 `  o' O6 A& ^0 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! q: o3 c/ p0 {. d( |% e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: Z+ C9 b  {/ ?9 d" f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, i3 k; f+ F$ a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 N, N. v$ l0 ]) @4 K3 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- P' F1 ?# Z4 c' C+ ^, v" S+ |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) V7 k6 m9 R) }7 L- K+ S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 d% f5 T1 s& `5 y1 x9 h) X" B7 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# V+ c$ R9 x% b9 C: X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 _. y8 V7 D) a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( ^6 V& o) B, g' t2 G: Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 x6 P: ^4 {, m8 [  O! \3 H3 ?& o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* R8 N- a! B( S7 F3 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 |8 h% F/ p$ T: t/ o3 M& t) Z- T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 L$ L4 `& j8 V, K8 c% V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 v5 \' T& {: n4 ?5 K6 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>