【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' p, z% W* R  M2 m3 M8 F1 K3 j歌词我附在后面。
. m6 C" f- w  p( S% }6 ~& ~# l, GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) `' s' Q- G* w5 o" K; \6 K9 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" F/ @1 m$ ~6 k/ L5 X' JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 ]1 y# o4 n  X$ qThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 J$ m1 D- M" H! lWith the moon kissing it every night
. R8 _" [$ \% C+ B2 gSeeing the sky content with its love
) c7 F, \1 ^; c3 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ s: L4 O8 O" k( P6 J. O, II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& l# Q& `/ t3 y  |I want so much to see inside your heart
: F" g2 Z$ \& q' o' ]& }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* {& V" Q0 W/ m0 u4 eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# l4 g, J8 Q& _* j/ k  L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& `0 ]+ @* m9 _- |- X) X3 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( b6 F1 H  U' V& q# }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% }% ?/ V! u' \- u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 g0 Z6 ^& @2 F; C( x& F* F9 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 Q- A  Q/ U% z3 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 W6 H+ f) N8 s& p# t1 t: J1 t. Y+ h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% B/ d; r6 y, Z. e; j% P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! N5 g1 B# K- n2 l: [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. Y7 v6 f: |: Z1 K' [  a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ g( q$ }: i2 p# a3 u6 B0 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, f) R- v% ]; _% L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' f0 S' b! b* Q3 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ Y  i$ V5 D1 N/ ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. Y* F3 h; W& _; Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& @  Z& ~* n8 ^) f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ L" e  F' m/ \7 n7 L: W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% g# r, c. a. \+ Q" D; {- u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! @8 G% U1 c, J8 l6 ]/ _8 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: s7 ]) Z2 W1 b0 m0 g. z* l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 T1 S" q: f1 B7 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 X5 \% u% y0 P- Z. d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# w0 n5 S& |9 A" I, }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( n% g2 O5 N/ O) s# V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; n* z7 T0 K) u& T+ R) z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 N  l& E* j4 ~& Q, w0 @. t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>