【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 ?3 A( Q6 z) f6 X* K# AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; d2 e+ c9 S1 B/ D9 U: Y' TWith the moon kissing it every night
- S6 \: u* o1 o% H8 OSeeing the sky content with its love
" N1 _/ ?8 V& U# j, ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# b5 u8 q  B4 n2 k  A  ]; VYou needn’t fear anything
, j0 T! }( c  y6 q9 vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' W/ c3 n( W2 B4 H2 s' s3 PNothing can compare to my love
4 G. F6 u* O; K. E+ Y9 {; jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 f7 {% S% S, ~$ x9 W  ^+ m, c. x& A; b( WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' R5 }, \% I# iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 |* x+ N+ ]) t) R, w0 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 R! X, Y9 ]4 _5 Q" QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 ?) g& z3 S% o! H, Q& O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ S3 G3 S$ I6 N0 p! Y- }- V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  M+ E- R8 |( `0 x. @) I: V7 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 H3 p9 t9 Y2 f' L3 Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- x1 h+ y$ w, r2 G  H3 X: B5 W7 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( H: C: `2 \% q8 r1 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" V$ {) A# x2 r* r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 o0 |; q' ~/ ]6 |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 K) E; p& B" U, j! @2 e# S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ M9 o# }/ t3 T2 f  S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ C# E: f6 V( ^7 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 A; h1 S8 K9 u1 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* I) N' _7 _% f4 v8 H4 j; d, Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) b+ h8 M9 g" A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. I) u5 l" B( ^& x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 y- s$ f8 o8 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ J; p- w  Q5 @" R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* H% x* Z  u1 s' f, }* x0 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 P4 T) W& y2 k& d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' d& S: h* S% \9 y: Y8 ]# ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 Q; A; T; T/ q9 m) m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 F* U, ]( t3 _" C# j$ z/ I% _1 }+ X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ G6 r/ p9 ]( }# @- v% {  h0 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! B" C3 L% h8 p: ]* L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. o  T# L+ T& A: @+ R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ B$ `4 m/ B6 B: w9 g! j- n7 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 B: U, Z0 h7 d6 W' L2 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ \  l+ }" c  h5 W! t: w+ n4 |$ ]# {4 h6 g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 W& ^4 F" m/ h, v! i" P我请你剖开它

* K; ~. V+ `# C2 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>