【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 b6 {  S1 W9 y& q% ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 i/ {  w7 ^2 n( Z( nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 |5 F* S) ^0 p  h; M, q" qThe sky is happy down to its soul
' ^0 L# _9 |$ F% D( n5 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" w3 Z4 p2 c& P1 zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 P) l1 B0 C) e; f1 t( n: q6 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ W$ j% Y% s$ D( gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 A. o# k& H( m. c5 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! r9 ]7 B+ T+ J# C6 EI want so much to see inside your heart
/ B5 z/ X: D' w# }' \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" {/ d# A7 x/ j8 l+ oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 E. L  k0 e7 x) E3 p( g* nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ t1 e. r! M3 A4 |6 v2 Q$ Z$ n8 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! @6 I8 `7 M% B7 c; I/ ?+ v% s% |) Z* p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ p( Y4 Z+ G  }& z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 y, w5 f! u& L7 c! v: ~% _* a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 [& N% I! u7 O8 \* K, T- P6 Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& ^. D% ]) D# i5 i* W# m) Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  N6 }  q. J' C; E: a$ m! d- H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* F  b8 y! g* S, V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 x2 N* d9 g, S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  R4 [- l+ Q& P& w  z( ^* I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' j+ e4 w2 O3 l2 E' m+ A& b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 U: G$ T* S; a3 G& c! o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: }: b( e8 W+ U# E/ Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 W% t$ Q9 i0 U/ E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) C, q% q, [8 G  Y2 x- v3 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 A' k7 V  H3 b. V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 T; n) v3 H! @( X8 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 |3 ?  I6 b( d: Q# L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  R7 |/ U& X6 @2 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  s9 F* R* J( X4 g# {6 b/ M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& N6 x, O) }1 C  q  H* q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ~! t3 |/ O5 l1 |8 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% ]" l1 e6 J7 F" h: k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: g+ W  c9 m( a9 Z! n; n; v2 a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 O; B3 _" @4 D& d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# }9 a: O% b) _5 j6 c5 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( G) m% Y& v, \& L4 {0 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ t& B4 m- p6 }+ d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 {9 N0 R; z% L- I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 n  ?0 }$ A, G6 i, E1 d9 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
7 H& N1 B# S' j$ R4 c
% \8 {# W# f6 |: Z8 ~5 m我请你剖开它

- c5 Y7 Z& l0 P! K- A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>