【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" {* W+ q: w  Z8 z& BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) L9 d4 z8 T+ ~0 y% A$ H4 _& PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 F. i% `( h  V, IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; K' F& }  U3 z/ v1 n  H! n" `) ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  g- E* J! T; }0 ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 `7 W  f7 U% t4 F. F' ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- f4 w9 m$ R: A. o, DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 v" \7 G, ~1 r3 ^; ?  z' X8 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. F) {: L/ a) U" S4 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 e! j8 ~9 s6 p8 ]4 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" h5 ]$ ~3 N" @. sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ O2 E2 @8 [' c4 {% [- O) R9 d$ G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 i! f! b2 T8 D- J. r' e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- O" r# d7 z4 M8 N9 m+ @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) {% C7 M' @2 [- X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 D& R+ x# h# t2 A; n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. _1 e. d9 Q% C6 }6 u% R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* V3 B2 [, K. _' M2 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 _6 c5 D# Y( m6 l9 l& r/ j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' e- |2 [4 i+ k' S; E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 u# p! M5 K+ K9 T/ L" M; Q* a) M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" U# v8 U" y! l/ Y1 V' @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 w" T) W5 H. U  R% w: Z/ @4 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( s6 h' u3 o% ~0 n2 }" w& \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% H, t1 e% D5 f2 Z2 L8 F0 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* F* {3 Z) A0 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* H8 p& W( x) I9 h7 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# O6 p- Y+ Y/ k7 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; U% f6 Z# |% N- d2 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 a* |2 g! q; k& n$ o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 G, h! A: R# ~4 N2 _3 P$ k% ~5 E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 i- _, J: R2 x, a) T3 E" u- t3 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, j& z- z8 [9 A1 @% M/ @0 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; {- N& K9 }3 \. O4 ?0 ~: `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 T7 U' W5 E& t( r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# @+ g" p' t, l; Z0 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ u# h* s: Y8 t# D9 B1 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. \" R9 \" I: P/ I+ M6 l, D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& g! V# u7 g; w) ~: r6 R% d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 u* R: W7 a) p. P1 w. p+ a! `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 M1 Y' `- n1 R0 p6 v0 I0 T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. i, i" o& `( N7 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>