【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( [4 R2 U8 X$ |# y6 s; q9 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& Q4 ^, n$ r; J; F  SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 q+ N$ T4 e2 Q) B# AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" r& d# a: ~6 ?7 S# _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 Q# B' z$ `- `; zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' {1 q) ?" @$ Z7 J& N8 ~4 rI’m still filled with fear
3 s1 m$ `1 J8 z) \$ H) sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( Y) Z. ~# W: z0 p- aWith such a tongue as yours,
1 k3 y6 [$ j5 F% xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ M4 u5 @% f6 v/ dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* G% l6 p$ z& A+ ?. zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' N: \! y" g, Y. w& X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 M4 J) ?1 W) l7 L; f! [0 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 h  V' I* d0 {- h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' [# i1 _: a" z; s' d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& Z% \5 T9 D, O7 `0 P; C9 d7 k/ \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, ^: o- w+ P3 J6 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ G4 a& p( V) e6 `& E' g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  M6 E) d; w: r) p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 x, b; }4 t" H" _1 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 W. M" _- j$ J; C4 z6 }& T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( d; f! D, l3 j4 Q/ b$ N% K<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  z* _$ y. o/ b" b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 P# C( S3 K* u/ C1 X4 ^# E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 w1 Q8 w" G# ~% y$ S2 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ~  m% {8 f% _9 `, F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 {; q. j' |" i5 ~3 ~, w6 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& ?) m' p2 m9 A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 [! h% P1 B* P/ K# w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ D& q" \% U6 G  A" {3 o; ?( B$ g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 @6 v  j) Y9 U. V3 s: Z- V; R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ |1 M( |. C- f0 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 p/ f* W3 s; B- c0 m6 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. |1 N+ w: G" x  x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' Y" ]0 `3 Y( S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 K3 x% j1 b5 @( u+ T. a+ R9 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' p3 P" Q* Q7 r: {' I3 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' e2 K" G. H9 o0 r3 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ d- D1 R) o7 w8 d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 |- c" r, v4 B6 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& B  P/ p* U8 I+ F& A6 N/ N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" W0 J; {+ Y) G  y. x0 m/ @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 k$ v1 x! [- m# r8 d9 S. E5 Y8 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 Q4 X* Z5 v: h6 q2 A9 s/ W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; T2 k0 \; X* I- x- m0 f  _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: g# d. F% \1 ^$ U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>