【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. n" g8 _5 Z4 C& e/ CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' V* z9 s" e! ~* V. K# s) xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 ~7 }) ]) G. H" \With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 H& h# L; G7 u/ g* J, N) W0 ?4 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* }- d4 c9 u7 @7 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* N5 D/ ]! j1 hI love you I love you with all my heart
! C8 d$ C' M. QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" G& @$ Z% n- l. ~, `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& K" k, h# q0 n/ \I want so much to see inside your heart
4 G$ s# F: M5 R/ j% R* l& v9 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 m% y/ q% I( \; K( BI’m still filled with fear
3 g# m$ j, k1 H: \/ p% x6 ^, WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 \8 u" K+ f6 ]6 H- b; Q9 f6 R+ ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 Q/ x3 p' i+ c# G+ p) D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  H" b. o2 M1 }8 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 x2 P  c4 Y+ y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 n. j" P! m4 D: X8 @5 f' z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! i) I' A8 z- J: v& c9 J* N4 V5 D+ i1 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 ^# s+ w+ t7 b- {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: k; |3 i  [& g5 e2 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! _5 P; b! X, }$ ^% [  \- r. P  a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* R) m* c4 T' J3 j# V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 }4 n( D9 U7 N; D$ O% _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 G* ?5 e" m% o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) G/ f) ~% H) `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ i# {% Y# g2 O; z7 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 Q" r% z6 G! D. }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 @% Z0 E6 c: N0 F' x  C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* J# R0 T0 `& r1 x5 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# k" W: F0 j- G3 k) [+ h8 R4 S, o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 @+ Z/ E8 V9 G" x* a$ h" c/ g5 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! t* q- a6 V! n9 L$ ^: C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  L' t3 l8 M( D) z7 d# o+ d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ B6 a6 U# E+ y. }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* [9 @3 s4 ]: {* w. J3 k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; I/ ~6 Y3 h) O0 C8 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: V0 g3 G3 q& }- s! E4 j1 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" F0 {4 `+ x2 ?8 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, e4 w! g+ o  f" S' q- o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 X3 F- m; g4 ?+ r* Z! Y8 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>