【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 ^7 T0 ?% d% v5 `, \2 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) [% R. @' m% D& m# h" V# g2 p9 L  BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 {) G" ?, m, w* f2 S1 Q) H' g" [8 |With the moon kissing it every night
+ c2 z8 O+ b! i- T" U6 m0 A9 MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* r, m0 {. ~, K! I  A1 a2 xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( w$ A+ A3 i' h' f8 I- y' @& BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ R/ [2 D, J8 `. \" n2 I) uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 n" r/ S5 v; m2 P: O1 u$ n+ tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 K+ I! C* R  a  M' E1 a* T0 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ S$ J( r1 O& }I regret not dying
) F) Z4 b" ]! Y8 W) \. AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 j+ j3 B4 `5 P7 n- }( _With such a tongue as yours,
6 c9 i& M! O& J) ^% _( zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 q6 B7 s1 [  u& s  ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" B9 {+ B1 H) u/ c! [* J. s( gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# O8 Y! E6 l" _9 \7 s5 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 L# @& i6 ~9 B7 [/ G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 C* F2 G2 \4 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( ^# w1 q  A7 W- R8 v; q' w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 N) O  w' w, p/ J6 \. |/ G2 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( ]5 L) i2 L$ g+ {3 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: l6 o6 y8 ]2 P$ A+ f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, R+ P# t* q# g+ v<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 A5 N4 q0 ^! k1 w" v' i: |# N! z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) |7 |2 A5 f: H/ N! A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 X% R$ z3 I$ j7 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; h9 h  r4 }: m9 T3 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ I3 W! m) X# k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 v4 N! J( e8 U& `  z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 @4 T0 }# s8 U6 A1 W  w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 E0 o4 E- |( y% c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 J0 g- T: m3 i! p6 ?, C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: [8 s  \# s5 ?# e6 f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 u4 p# h! J9 |" @- d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 N( _" V: w  e2 R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  v# Z  T+ Y3 d0 t2 t3 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 M5 N6 l4 A# c7 L8 A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, q- n6 a) n" j- l2 E5 ?4 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, f! A3 K( ]" r, w. b( F$ k0 P& |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ r! [- L3 }+ \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' R0 J. g' @) G# D& N0 X9 ?& ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, Y( c( r+ k5 `# x7 @! k0 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% q" E2 A9 W, Q9 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# Z3 b6 D/ i" y1 G% A4 B! d! {! t我请你剖开它

8 A# e8 ?  b( h9 e, [. E! m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" x: x$ P& D% P8 i+ i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>