【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( m6 a9 A! F% a6 Z' {0 G歌词我附在后面。
+ M. |3 d6 `" e  {# D+ a7 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
& a6 F/ L' j* H) b2 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 _$ u, [4 M6 W( e, }6 H" a7 @& ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  E3 G  U2 V5 G3 d) u% m2 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 m6 j0 {3 Q& b8 E# }* @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ t" M7 h# Q1 AYou needn’t fear anything
( J* }' k* w) ]9 d' B0 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 m/ M1 ?  X/ q5 lI really want to know just how much you love me
% D; |+ V* G  p; I5 t2 w" l5 MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 {; J) o" b) i- S/ m" @+ _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; N2 J% I4 p2 Y  v0 ?& B3 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ f) Q  x8 S7 j. V. m9 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) ?( k3 I% Q5 \5 N/ e, Z6 r  tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 F2 i6 t& F" t) Z! e  i+ B( IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 R! J" h4 ^; {. N. K" z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& Y1 z6 d$ z% ~8 C% {. u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( i) l7 ]6 V. c) T" b, @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) O' |% g- N7 @! [' L; o9 \/ n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' e$ q& t! [1 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 e6 n. q8 E) X0 V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 V! c4 W; L. R4 R# k0 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 }3 h; ?) H) D0 M, t3 F( f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 F* d$ a9 ?2 a& }" Y" D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* f" ?% ^: f  f% X+ z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* v9 H5 c8 c( f! r$ l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" c- U3 R& Z0 Q1 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! {5 }" {8 _* [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 N7 s' T& e0 V; [- {1 u  N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 |5 n4 k5 N, u8 [$ Z8 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 J8 F8 J0 a# ?: ?$ K4 @/ T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 e- Y) G* t/ K% e3 J+ V3 ~  v' c9 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 s( z; W, K; |  D0 [8 V8 w+ T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. {" T' x3 q3 S. V1 A! c) F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ ^/ k) D) g/ r& \: b* ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 k2 L' w) J' y) a0 c% ^2 S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 `. }) i1 B: G& j* N" H; z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 Y# D, W9 z& u% Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# n0 H7 y6 P$ V7 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; T+ v9 @" p/ |. e& X; x2 m: x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! k2 {+ F: Y) b, F, r) k' m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ r9 B9 A7 x$ x# o9 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 t+ e! J/ ]/ o+ g9 S: ]  d# M& h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& d8 k* |- K0 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 Z$ u+ Y! g: q" m+ c* h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>