【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( E9 a& Y6 q# d( H( S歌词我附在后面。
" f- r7 P6 N& e; yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ @) q' P* t4 U( N: `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' _( c% R) u$ AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. d' \' w' w5 C  _  u9 t1 `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! `6 k* C& J  h4 j: }0 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% n. m. N; O1 j# V" P7 [5 TYou needn’t fear anything
  b* J  o& x9 E. O. Z$ L. ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) O: C9 A/ E4 o7 c" }( w" f  t; HI really want to know just how much you love me
5 Y) F! q' h! A' z- L4 x* d# TI love you I love you with all my heart
8 D6 [! u7 P3 K. x7 O, `Nothing can compare to my love
8 r3 T: p. I/ {4 ^' K" L% w0 M" WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 \! a# Y+ ~9 ]# G5 x# HI want so much to see inside your heart
. ~3 z! Y% p  Q/ @% t# C# c1 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, k! n* }' ^$ k8 LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ L* |6 _& o0 v* ?8 Q% FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ \' ]( e0 k% J2 Z6 T- KWith such a tongue as yours,
7 g0 ?' d. [2 h5 N2 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) p2 |3 k: S% JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& c) k9 ~' j0 v: W8 r  WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 }9 I* I$ c& X# r: Z& S: k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 i7 e1 J9 T# X7 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( |2 O2 A2 N8 f5 h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' `; Q' e4 R7 o. f; m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( o! K( T1 o9 E3 @* M  C9 e" {/ E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# U8 U. v9 C+ [. d* V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 A& E9 ^$ ]  J; `7 N! X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" D" L1 \. T2 ~! S1 d  a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. w9 u4 t3 D- w; t: @( e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" e& ^* \1 E) C( d; c3 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 k9 u6 U  O6 j, u/ T: w* z, g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* t4 l+ f; Z: V4 W2 w9 x( h5 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% E2 d7 q) y* P0 i' O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" I7 ?  q5 @9 r- E7 J* z9 m3 Z$ V( y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" M8 [- E3 ]2 b# C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- m  I3 ?& Y, U7 B% h$ H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" V3 [& Q: F" U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 R/ U5 @! n: y- f6 ^- G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ D' x; ^' V" e2 V6 R; B+ n) {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 n. O9 `' I' v3 y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. h0 m/ Y: ^: a- T* z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- }* w, O" r5 n; g* L2 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( h$ n6 C$ ~( J( O, ^2 E- g6 ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ~; l0 G+ s5 V8 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' K7 w9 ?: r6 I# k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 e: a/ l5 ], P- ?$ S9 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( }" f! a) h7 @+ e: O& |8 ~4 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 P. B) |! x9 z# Z3 `- {4 m+ B2 p' n4 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! S' U0 R6 h5 x; o, g* o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>