【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) Q6 r/ k0 |2 N4 s3 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& }. Z! ], S. O2 ~8 a' yThe sky is happy down to its soul
: q! |+ G7 v0 s/ s- p- z& ^' \With the moon kissing it every night
4 _9 t1 g( m8 h! v0 iSeeing the sky content with its love
6 o: O9 @6 ]$ ~+ wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# q9 G) f4 e4 b, ]0 gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" E4 P# D  e' \/ a$ Y1 xEvery other word you utter is love
1 U" y( U! \! R: v" f) k* d( |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- L5 }+ S/ B4 o) D3 T; ?  bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 [- q+ W" m" a" JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  M! S# a. A, C% z$ p1 ^  _. D( _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: a1 z" y6 P+ B( [0 K1 p$ ?I regret not dying
, a3 k0 `' L* h$ o* L4 a9 b, \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( Y$ s, v, X, H7 V, @" k9 _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, W0 K2 g. X* v/ J  w- @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 W$ L) \$ y/ k5 f' v' F; L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 ^( j/ `5 H, m4 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 L" [* r. y) k3 ^( Y& Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% Y; t  S1 m8 S; r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 x+ {0 R- ~; C0 c- [2 O, ^7 n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 k) N2 O; c/ d2 F- o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  |& G$ B: v. _2 S- B( w' x- D% X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: m, V* @# \) f+ p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, `4 j  |" _3 K% A7 U& U. e* `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% \" j. u) z7 _  a% F% v8 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( P5 ^- P- }' J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 M' k- a- ?5 e* H/ }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& a6 U9 e1 u: [' c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* R/ t0 K- H& d* ]  K0 ?+ i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; e- a! N- B% K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& K7 x4 F8 P) i6 V3 z" `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 P' G' b3 b- B* J2 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# k( w7 q+ L# }/ \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 y, F: m7 [. b* f, g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 a/ f6 n: j2 N% l* U- M; M- S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ]; Q) s# p; F% u: F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 B9 H4 R/ N$ ]/ o5 U' |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: d" v6 e& O# ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& ]7 W' u. m- L8 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
( _, `2 Q# o, i  `$ f3 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 N2 L/ P# c, C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; U+ f" ]  s) }* C5 O% a* n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 E/ a! P& |( H9 Q% Y# c& G' p; b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ k; ?1 g7 l; F. Q! T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- S1 c& z8 m- k3 C) I3 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& Q- X) O5 e; N; n: K! Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 i8 h9 `) \( e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 K% e3 m$ g3 n0 x  I! X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>