【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- u# ]* m1 G1 ^  GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ w) ~1 @# `# Y7 z6 D1 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ T7 K% x5 P- d# Y4 ~6 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, T6 ~" `" a0 B' {7 ]  p8 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
- j$ \1 Q4 n* u+ l/ v) CWith the moon kissing it every night
3 @* i) \) K7 r- t% b" dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ \7 r) D+ ?) j( tYou needn’t fear anything
: {1 s1 Y4 o: x5 F$ m& C* aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) o0 ~3 [6 X9 }, @0 Q, FEvery other word you utter is love
( `4 d3 f/ x* J; x9 F2 o8 P8 F2 vI really want to know just how much you love me
* @+ Z; x7 T! v3 d. u  T0 GI love you I love you with all my heart
0 s" A4 W6 Y- A! Y! U4 h" yNothing can compare to my love
$ L& L. E" J* S0 U- h4 j; ?4 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 s/ E* P( n5 y3 n$ Z3 w( nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! `, \1 I$ A* I* v+ F% CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& X& A, _4 l0 hWith such a tongue as yours,
! n5 y5 A+ f' C3 R( ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( p( q3 _' D, r5 }7 d" CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- k9 T* l6 V& @! ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) y8 @9 Q" h1 ^- T* ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' W3 y% q4 h) y5 G7 }, }! i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. E( v0 g3 G) W! |: g1 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" f( w3 f1 p: T0 f  i" M) _# F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) s( m$ P) r4 }3 w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ^! N# y3 n5 u# [; N# N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. Q" L! G; r' v+ y4 `9 B; z<P>你无需担心</P>
; N& ^5 K, N1 J- U' j$ ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' d) }$ \' \/ a, B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 i+ S: |5 x/ e8 @* y2 G6 \& {. z1 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! }- x$ K9 R3 Z+ \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" D( X+ c$ l. o( V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ ~6 p# i! S/ F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) n( k  b* _2 u" Q7 H& e* R/ m% K8 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" {. i) l) K% x6 i8 [* s1 ]  ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* R4 J0 m) l5 u8 i, u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  L+ I0 _3 S7 v5 O- u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% O. h0 [/ F6 T, a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 Z1 i  w5 W9 b( {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* m! p5 y! r1 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 f" l" J- R1 h. M9 q% V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ r/ M  W, U$ O0 p. m1 f0 `2 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, T; W' W9 o* d4 I6 p* @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 L% t/ f, X2 Q5 l$ p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( g. V. k8 @! e5 R+ @8 I" G9 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" b0 |0 P3 N5 |5 Q" [9 E: |( Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, U; }4 ?7 s) i  p: j4 [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 }! [# I# c- H+ |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  o5 q) z" x: r: p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 }8 i0 ?7 U4 [2 e  P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' W) |8 [! K" n  n1 t1 X5 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>