【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 a5 Q- ~: F3 b! o' zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 n. h. M( ?' W/ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ }* o. M8 S6 k3 I( u, g7 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 X( G5 o) C- i% F% _! X) LEvery other word you utter is love
" D# M( _6 n( d! M" d8 r$ O1 gI really want to know just how much you love me
# o5 Q. ]* B, rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; Z# ~2 I7 a* c* G( C' C# tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( b1 W( g" y6 ]) HI want so much to see inside your heart
* i1 R4 Q0 r% Y8 aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 p# k7 k# g/ |& ~! j1 fI’m still filled with fear
& }& O' w: h2 b: F! l; q6 `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ n- \) F, m5 K3 m3 _+ cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) R+ E4 D. v5 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 p# i6 N7 o$ C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 U" o5 N) G! \$ c- O* O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 l5 s4 u7 X0 i/ a$ b" t$ o, ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, G9 F0 b' G) Y1 `6 Y% {7 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# s" o# h4 W- q( y. g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 B# i  R, [" \4 u* k) z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% p% O" h8 J7 V% w* L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- C% ]1 |, H3 y5 O0 d4 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  c) \- u. D+ Z" h" M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) c1 b3 V# d: r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" p7 m  q' s) E% J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 z5 N4 C  x" I) ~0 ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" N/ N7 |4 V6 n4 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 U1 K& M+ ~, ]& z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, P. n% T: H* ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) m" p5 Y0 u! W- P8 \5 T7 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ N5 H3 j+ S9 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 {# C5 N9 |# l! |: o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 W: ~' z1 Z( ^% J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 H( R& s) ]: h7 s0 E4 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! M9 ^( A- q; }' K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 F1 s6 K: a1 r2 {' e' G9 b3 z" N: p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>