【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 i: N7 W7 \& Q% o9 _( F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 g. s* Z% I7 x* N# X  nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* R/ H  I7 L* DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) `( N8 K$ u, }/ v, t. xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" `4 S8 T8 Z* [+ w+ `" {5 f* GThe sky is happy down to its soul
' k& k' |+ K, t- wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( Y5 _2 w) `! C# @/ Q0 C- O* KI really want to know just how much you love me
* I& F6 Q( L! u7 p& {# _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ l7 ]. Z' t5 P1 v% I9 N4 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! v; ]5 O7 f( O4 `( A7 X( }I’m still filled with fear
; F- X$ s7 e2 Q# UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 b( ?* ~7 }' M# R, r9 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: e# g4 a) }8 e+ @9 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 A. H0 S  G$ x" P7 |( `5 k" l8 P% FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* W& k# d" v# F( U( m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ r9 E3 u: x8 P! `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 r- M' b% S6 [6 B- |( f: Y" l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 @* t0 _' R$ q2 |* m" w1 I! J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 y$ ~, v5 W0 y2 e! @& V; O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 _! [5 m! a0 S* f9 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' C" P/ O7 b" H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# b! D( S1 \, A8 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 z0 k* @- ?, |6 n4 j' S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# q- M/ ]$ l' E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* s4 V0 o8 P8 u/ x2 h- e7 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 u2 Y8 T! y. L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; @) P$ V, D, P6 K: p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- i! I) s/ Z8 K3 F3 i/ y. F/ f4 Z, o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 @! n, ~2 v1 _$ m( T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, Z; ]  O- a- _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- k3 {& h/ @9 t6 m6 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, h: ?. e) D+ b& Z+ b0 u4 q  b; d7 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# N' N. k' u. L) g. x! m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. i4 j8 _! q+ ]+ [: g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 a* \; i  r: a, b& d/ e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 g0 |4 q7 K+ c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 Y" @* Y) V4 Z( B" [& Y/ H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( Y. i3 Q$ l4 x1 {4 R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 \: b$ e' J5 I2 R3 s5 q9 \8 h: o6 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 l! Q3 [; T! q' U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* U; T/ Y- o+ O0 i! E) L+ s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: g5 R: U7 t, X3 y/ }* s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>