【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# \( g' Y# B" |8 U* h; \歌词我附在后面。
2 u/ r4 Y3 M  v, AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 b4 T. i8 s( p1 k& O3 }# JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 |  y: [. }% V  [. z* Z& B" yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% @/ H- {6 Z9 G/ vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 Q, A% U! ?, A8 E- h# NYou needn’t fear anything
' c. ^$ U! c) e3 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 q# z  R6 h# W( `4 C9 z3 rI really want to know just how much you love me
0 `* b" ^6 c6 W; z9 EI love you I love you with all my heart
9 h4 Y: h' F$ t" U' @+ w5 \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# a8 N$ i, l: v3 L) P, ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( s* o4 X% `* J  X6 S' rI want so much to see inside your heart
/ s1 ]# |0 L  C, }9 J- hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 E: K4 @" S, ~6 j" h) |1 qWith such a tongue as yours,
& y" q7 B4 J  y) O6 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& K2 W. ]' s# ~, P0 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 g% `- J0 K- n2 ]! m" C  d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 q4 X2 F& p. _" P3 h4 r# K, R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: N1 n  Q: p4 W$ I4 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! D1 D+ r$ n1 _2 `: S3 X/ H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 {% X  L# n0 u4 S2 P- V8 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) m: Y' H1 r6 Z! H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 a" g8 a( `. `1 }) Q  p* B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) P$ j: C- I. y; p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, ^* \, h% Y" j: I* m1 m7 s# p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ S4 U' g( o# r/ N$ N8 m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ N' o. j# q7 m# Z: U' p3 @# R% ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) V1 w) t" j) C1 {* u/ V% Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: X! R' ^3 d, c$ T3 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 x7 ~, ]5 {; K& i" V8 U* r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 m; {9 v" _% X& [9 u- s7 k& `7 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 Z9 e7 t6 a. z# b# ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  t2 \+ t! L# l" L" R1 V& j4 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 _8 C: u7 D- [4 q; b0 I/ e- M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, g1 f0 F+ u8 O6 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; k, r$ K, ~; u. g6 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 z0 A9 p% |1 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- T' H* }- c# f2 q$ A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 K5 J0 Z& \5 h, z" l$ R$ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: O) q; p. h0 r- C+ S2 [" o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& R* r, w( a& z9 {4 [) Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 S# \- E$ K6 r! f% A5 G$ @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>