【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' h# v& f  {2 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 o2 j3 t' r% X: N0 z2 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 W& L# {; }4 ^& b) I& EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- ?* v& t: T9 l# o: eSeeing the sky content with its love
2 ]% Q/ K1 b5 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) ?" i9 X2 Q2 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 Q. s! V, _: e7 b: B% v% b. DEvery other word you utter is love
" [% k/ j- V0 Q; D( d" f8 u* S8 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) i. T, A8 z7 k5 pI want so much to see inside your heart
4 Y8 k- ^) B% ]- fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" X! u9 b. \2 k" N5 P7 nI’m still filled with fear
, O  y# o) l: Y, Z3 T: o+ ~8 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 t* y: n, e# w: e2 D$ S! B* i* u8 XWith such a tongue as yours,
$ [7 A! Q* j( o5 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 ~- o, z% e! C( ^# c/ @" I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 @( Q( ?% z) ^! V! Z& p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 }5 N: m8 \9 V( Y" m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, z3 ?2 w: r( I& s2 l' G/ ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 m! Y6 g% i' }- V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- H. C3 J/ A! B5 k- L% U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: H, \; r- B4 Z7 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- s) c5 n  k, f* j4 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) [) b" t1 n3 U# h) D) D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ H, `4 p# A, S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( @. X$ G# }9 `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 {0 Z1 M. {4 j# q' D( t) E$ g3 r0 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: o  [' {. w% t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 U9 {3 D$ Z, c6 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, r- G/ l7 ^* ~9 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; h  B) g' B9 h0 A0 p: b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( g* k# h& J2 V" r% L7 f( C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 ?3 n. k9 x) \; n( T, g* t' q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# Q$ E9 c$ \# Z6 J8 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 ~+ {3 O9 |2 J7 Q( y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( _! O' n2 M. n0 c9 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ i# R; o5 K, S2 r  @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% o3 j9 N, x, W2 a& a! _, T' n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, x; g) h7 e# N) g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' C  |3 d; q1 k4 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ |; O1 N! s. }/ P! K' X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 R: L3 J( h5 r4 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ a: z8 j: l/ `/ f3 z& _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 s9 M$ _4 B& c5 B' Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  ~. l1 I+ t9 K2 ~3 B# g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 H% V" ]3 m6 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# }) N9 S* p! X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- C  Z8 `+ e" i  K( ?( i* ~0 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 _- X' t& h6 y- o: p2 V1 q( n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 T+ V3 |/ q+ G- \  O2 @; s  {+ N( J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# s+ q( x9 S5 o我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>