【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ {2 B7 I# u9 F& SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; M7 o# Y$ m  w& N4 j- Y  f, n6 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 d, a- M$ x- m: b9 J/ w& s9 k. ?, MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ R& u/ v% @- z% N; KWith the moon kissing it every night
. L$ v1 m( p1 u9 ~  H  mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" V# W' A. Y# D& g4 n9 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# W) r/ ?! O7 }  a. zI really want to know just how much you love me
8 T& c& E- _  u' t" L" kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 L$ D4 r& N' ~) k, G7 c9 F- r3 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 Z( A' ]0 X0 y+ D8 i7 v' oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 M3 u$ A- |$ R! XI want so much to see inside your heart
1 c' C& h& q" |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! B; c. d/ o" {: j* h/ bI’m still filled with fear
. l2 R. q' b- C( ?% ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& J- g; u0 _8 ~: c, i( yI regret not dying
2 i$ W$ _. r. S6 j1 n- ?- J" PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 C- W+ g9 v8 Z: hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: U& }$ g$ Q5 |2 M" RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 Q0 O. G9 N) O& ]+ }6 b2 p" \0 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ e+ R2 Q5 ?9 X6 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* f4 ~! Y$ v! V0 ^5 v: f' Q3 [) e) S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ A0 E$ ^$ V- l# z5 c9 i6 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) [' e- {1 E4 D! H# _' m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  S, T5 Z2 R5 U, b1 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 h0 ^; D3 a( F3 [- M2 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 x  Q( h4 Z: J$ D7 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( A3 B! f* l- ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ S* v3 y& ~2 m5 i9 ^' Q6 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* v  n2 ^3 _. J! j, O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' d' I8 \) g. @/ p2 [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; T9 n; u, R7 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ x' X! {. p5 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 y* G- P/ _; l$ R% Z# Q" S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 R3 s6 b: I9 B& V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 ]* F& V0 Y" k: Z% R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) u3 ]7 U/ M' w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 X' J* Q8 e# I- O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ X* [; F8 d6 S, U- m) b  o( [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ o$ B& B; f0 L+ @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 ]+ N- x; e4 f0 l2 q5 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; f+ c  P0 [2 ^* L  X8 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# d8 F: {- K, ]; r  B  _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% A0 S* C2 ^# d3 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 C: F) i" l6 A8 i( l; M7 n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 Y. @- }6 K1 F$ Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  U( i' d' h5 z+ r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 L9 y) \$ k2 Q& _0 s" o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ s2 w) O( z% q+ `7 ?4 x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 _$ X" D0 Y% Y/ h7 U. k: i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ E0 u7 M' Q6 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 U% W. y4 X8 u) S3 x我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 q& l1 A% S( v) u3 a0 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>