【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( Q* c8 n3 g9 {# }) I% `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ n: H* u- t7 H* XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, G6 O  z9 x8 F7 p7 V9 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 w& I( X3 Y3 o( R( q, ~. TWith the moon kissing it every night
- Y' g' y2 }* f4 _" R" Q7 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 r1 O* Z0 z2 M# LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) n! y  |: ]1 L/ {2 rI love you I love you with all my heart
: Q% E: K! U$ d- c+ ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( z8 t0 N: \- @& nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 A4 X: O: P! O% OI regret not dying
; e: _, s# a: ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. }  Q  x1 J; }6 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 l. f6 r7 E; R9 ^$ EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 R/ o: V4 J- K' a! F9 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 K! I- g! X. t" b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ t3 ~' A  P) u3 O4 U. Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% ^) l% k0 p# M$ L% a; W. x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- N2 H9 u0 m* X1 Z3 P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  |7 d0 D( [  j, j- A<P>你无需担心</P>
5 \0 X+ y7 q8 M! ^/ ?5 a3 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# x# i: n) u# N7 Q4 i; q; h' ]+ F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ]" V8 f3 @7 N9 t( d6 p% u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 V) t5 l1 R( U# e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, e/ ?  u( ^$ P3 h' b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! H. O0 |6 F0 `! d3 q2 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; ?! j. R6 Q% _6 J/ ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ c& B. n) Q* P' v( W7 o3 a+ m3 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  r+ D) p8 e' _. ^# X3 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- |5 x/ @- [5 S* ?* {* U% J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 S/ W8 w5 i. F  F) E+ b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 w- v+ O. s) f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ y6 K0 R5 E( @8 [& Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, ^' V# @: b2 _" D- v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" ]: z9 c) A9 V4 F( a. v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" h3 x( U" r3 _) g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 Y; o6 B- d9 A3 }' M( Z. {( v& \4 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 L# E/ h( L& X5 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 t9 P. p- W4 q. o0 ?% |6 w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ p, y0 S6 \7 x8 R$ T我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>