【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! ?  Z5 e8 E: ?/ y( _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ~$ W# S0 W+ t' H+ S' q% ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; r- C* U$ M9 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 ]9 H3 D, u5 R/ c' YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" V1 L1 w# }: u- h* s8 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 g( ]8 Z/ ~$ aYou needn’t fear anything
7 y- ^4 u* u. ~- H3 Z1 n. L2 l6 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 K$ ~+ P/ o6 {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 D% T. A7 |# @" U- y2 v/ WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) D' \% m; Y# a7 V2 @7 ?4 JI want so much to see inside your heart
4 R7 Y- S) \& {+ c% d# EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 y  p7 ]$ g  g2 Y) zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ @* U: x- A: H! ~7 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( r% q7 I% y9 m5 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' r! _5 m  b9 P+ D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& O8 q% O" v/ r/ Z5 [1 g' N4 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% G% e' {, |& O  b3 d% L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; N* K% O, @3 x6 p) f- i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% R& g% a( Y+ w1 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" y% K. j: f9 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% f, ~- u! _+ o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! N& M5 ?, t) b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 j; l) N- _. {' @" `7 C" G5 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 J2 R1 D+ t! L$ X! y' L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 @" g0 y5 w3 M, v8 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* s6 `5 m. q0 u" f# w9 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  R& ], i/ m% Y( `* L8 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" c- g* X' x4 r% g" S5 M! }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. u' Z3 t7 b; d7 A" W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: a! l6 _" w. A- K5 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- Y3 N8 u2 E. M7 `" x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- K. ~" n# ]" n! ~( E) v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' ]4 a- b2 U% O$ [  j6 R& m9 X0 d( _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 k) e$ J$ b% j5 j# t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 e4 \0 E8 a5 @6 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 n6 |: S/ T, b( ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( {8 \# |- Q3 m1 Y; N' d" n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- G% e8 T; F, W! P: Z, a& r- n/ r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 X) q) j; _! c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! J! g3 M. I5 T8 A' ?, C9 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 P0 q5 |6 g  m8 R1 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ~! j2 k& O' K6 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ {# d2 Y9 s. r$ m3 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: o. S2 _3 |- c& ]$ ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% L" N8 N$ Z8 T( G: F7 x" k5 G: H/ P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; z( ^4 M, ^, z7 a6 v& J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' b6 k5 O9 `* p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 Z2 u9 Z# n/ F) ~7 {- i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 p% d; s& U" b( O9 O& j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 g4 K- _2 L- l5 J! c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>