【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' x' V7 A  ?- n; K6 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* y5 C. F7 A& }/ j% KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 c3 ?% C( o" d5 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- a- m  u. b: w( [Seeing the sky content with its love
- x1 U: z, l- t( d  zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 q2 G! _' i) O/ kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 ^- W1 e  _- fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, O; s) K0 X& u" |% NNothing can compare to my love
4 i  ^; b8 P; R$ vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* H! h1 O' ?  i4 M7 U% N. n" ~I want so much to see inside your heart
8 m9 G: H) R( k' s( C" PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: E2 }& b; C7 hI regret not dying
6 S9 _  d9 a) v% o. Y+ r4 C# ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% o1 ]1 }- N$ K' bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ l1 `- w* J9 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& r. p/ Z% t& S6 v' ^7 i2 a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- }- b5 L& R  g: K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) u) Z$ p6 [* ^: Y3 X. R- E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& I/ |1 w: E( ]) \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 U/ V+ b+ j( Q, M! Z3 o2 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 V$ W6 s" P3 F+ U" Q- r3 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 s0 u2 V9 v: Y6 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 g* U2 d- u7 f/ _$ s( Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, s5 z9 i+ u. T# Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ y* g1 i4 {& N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; u2 @; h) G$ U" t/ J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% e' G) Q! H% i6 v5 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 H( b, V1 H  n/ T" ^3 m, C: M8 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 M* i6 J- p& n- E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, x' Q) ]' i: {0 P& _- X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 e' X' s* E+ I  N; X<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 j- x8 c  H/ v" X) b4 e$ I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* [0 |- J+ R1 I1 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; j3 M  p) T, V5 ~+ R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: r; [( X4 p' J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 @9 [5 h! U5 S" W) F: s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 C+ W, V5 j  N% g# M# e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% s/ j% q! [" _" T: Z2 G+ C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 s, g3 g+ r* t9 h6 |* J5 M6 M+ K我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& w* n2 m6 \5 M3 U  z2 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>