【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 y7 n( m* t8 HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 W0 e! {4 ]6 V( `1 G2 g- zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ D, H+ g; n) aThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 }2 k2 U; A) w: ]With the moon kissing it every night
4 L3 W6 ^# D$ Y) _* eSeeing the sky content with its love
- B+ z. s  c) I) q% ?! FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' w1 P) R! l  q; Z3 P# ?; b  RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* v8 h0 [* p. B5 z* Q- p( t9 fI love you I love you with all my heart
2 O# n3 q* j7 ]9 w' ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 y& U5 c4 S$ _$ |% @) tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& N# V0 |* B1 F& [$ \# JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 s- J' v. ~. G# NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) A" \: e1 E; U+ f1 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: v. D6 l9 ?  A0 K: @1 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, [+ M; u6 o8 o- `6 _; a& G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- u" T  e2 O/ }6 P/ y7 Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* E' M8 e  [1 |1 x: g  J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 V( p, _) n% ?6 m$ A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 [6 C; K8 |; |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( f9 Q5 g- h5 F% |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( f, s, n# b% K" t. q# |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 N8 @% i/ K! x+ I5 _6 ], C$ K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ `1 |% H7 Q. R8 ]2 Z9 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) B, W( F8 m5 p- a2 m: I) N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 c, b+ m+ `. ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, ]' j7 b. b# }7 U. j0 G4 I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ |$ m0 ]6 _) I9 u# M* |0 H. E: l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 C- ?4 `+ D3 V8 f4 w1 W" i7 P3 X0 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, ^8 H) @8 ~4 J# F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ `- U8 C3 ~: F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) e6 f3 j# G/ S+ k# P& P& F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ G0 h# H' u  @# j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 b3 e" l  Q# f  f" Z! `* V/ o<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ f& |0 r! ^+ v1 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 ~8 x' `2 b' I- _& q) W/ }) g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 @8 y) E7 K  z. S& e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 k5 X3 i# z+ V% s7 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- Y: O0 m$ _5 t3 |4 [6 O/ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 f0 A' f3 i, y# l1 s7 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 D3 p: G0 N! X: W: b2 ?$ `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' d3 R  V9 i# q+ K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 L5 r  X8 Z: H4 V5 U- }" G7 I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>