【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' F$ s0 O* h0 {+ BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  o0 X0 t  x3 d: lWith the moon kissing it every night
; o2 z9 |9 ^+ s# J0 G. h# gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ B6 ^5 m0 A0 D9 y; t. z* M; _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* B1 [; }5 S* x# ~# [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 s& S7 P) ?9 S9 T9 B$ MI love you I love you with all my heart
" K$ y: u* N* L; a4 x: W1 h6 P( eNothing can compare to my love
, [; G" Q- v2 o) H  r) YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 m, M4 {4 g+ H# ?) @! zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ p$ z3 U6 o, O/ W  s) ?5 zI’m still filled with fear
6 m( S2 P' g) E& j& YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ h7 ?" h0 ?2 @6 L; l2 Q! h& _" k6 PI regret not dying
( A, H% w' n* a' p* PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 ]/ M" Z  d4 v5 D- X! `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" N' A8 f/ g4 X0 ^5 S  uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; S' y% N# C# Q/ ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- U* b+ I: c2 b' W0 E; e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: b1 D  |2 u/ e% c" b# g$ @0 Y0 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' r8 V# `: W7 r* D1 s, U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* b/ y, w( J% I3 d5 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' X" G# l' k4 W' K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ r9 T4 l1 Z3 V- c+ z8 z% Z. F) R! d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 l- k- d# Z- p. \2 U4 c$ b. ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" G/ n& M, I7 l( X3 ~2 ]" _7 S+ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- ~# I/ o7 I9 n& `" R3 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# l$ l; a3 `  ]* E+ q: P+ w  y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- }. d* B$ `( Y- E: o( q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ }8 T; |3 d+ }9 `* D+ N& e/ @) Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 O8 b3 n5 G' k, N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. H3 S* ~1 _+ v( R. a7 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 u: L' E2 x$ {8 f/ g7 V! Z9 A2 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, \; R1 o, S* Z3 U4 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, q! d. ?% R+ H8 O2 g/ |1 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 K, U$ y# R' k: ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 D1 q9 o, t7 @# Z( j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ R. y8 J4 l4 S# F, ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 \' n7 S/ `( x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* a7 Y% }* `* W8 f6 A9 f" x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# m, }* w/ h. g6 D0 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 E/ p# y2 U# N7 V2 f+ \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>