【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' F, b) X; `$ l, N1 z; m) J7 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 V2 M0 y9 q4 a: p: {. aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 U+ H0 f# i6 i4 ?: LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 A! @& J* w0 x7 W2 qYou needn’t fear anything
  r$ e, L) M1 Z2 c8 o9 _7 J7 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ n/ w) N$ X/ X* YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 V% q; i  L% |+ J# T% k( [Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 k4 s. I) W! B1 Q( H) U& O5 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. |3 ?  {$ q& @- ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ D3 k1 R: \, \4 y$ d5 GI regret not dying
+ b/ D% E1 q) m& X, d5 ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; X: |! |) Z/ _' m, h& o+ b/ C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ K8 l' w/ J' L; B- S# i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' r- A% ~0 s) e* X  ^" D2 Q: X  W1 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 B9 ]" Y1 D. L- X# E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" A1 C( t6 @* |  W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" y$ W  X+ [% j6 ~( Y( u8 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( u0 `! b7 x5 T9 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 ]$ D$ E3 I) N. n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, C6 L6 }4 S1 R7 a; c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ L6 U  _  o" W& M! S5 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ t6 I5 a/ W6 G0 @2 l6 J" {) g<P>你无需担心</P>
2 Q' |$ U5 O( @  y* z- ~2 K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# I% k8 E4 ~$ ^' f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ I. {7 G, z) h- p# U7 O7 R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* M9 E: S" l- B# U) K* }0 b4 G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ [* {3 x( O+ p# D# o6 j, e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& [/ J" t- S& q# O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' J! W4 Z& }5 w) F) @! h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: s, V7 _! S! {+ R' Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- A' Y9 _, O! Q. `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) Z% ?5 C' K) |, {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( a) W6 u8 t/ V. N/ S6 ?6 z6 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ L* A& {4 K: l  h' {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; M$ n7 P# s$ y" P9 ~6 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& V- W8 U3 K9 k! l6 \$ N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" R7 X* F$ K9 u/ [" T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 V% i$ I6 G9 s( Y8 m2 D# D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; W% s( q2 S1 Z( q- Z. {0 E1 J/ ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 E; k/ |3 k6 Y0 L% t我请你剖开它
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$ {' w/ d3 L- N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 n2 \5 \- f7 \/ w* _) x7 m8 j' [& k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>