【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& y4 F0 _# L2 t" ~: M& p( dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# O% h0 T& o* t+ N& Y! ]  T( y9 I# a3 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: p( C( K( K. {" i9 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- X' u" }4 }. l) ?With the moon kissing it every night
& z7 ^" g/ E9 qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ j& s( D9 {7 C' dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% `4 l+ U0 K, O! k8 u1 ]* O1 [/ Z& ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 O7 C9 d7 o  u* X9 DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 o9 R/ S( c0 l0 M- lI’m still filled with fear
% E+ ?/ c6 L3 h, E  I: gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 n/ }. N0 E# ^. zWith such a tongue as yours,
3 ?5 D5 N1 D1 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ S# `% ]8 Z1 Y5 e: kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 c! S1 W0 g  J3 f, x) }; u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% K/ n4 z2 w6 u: z) {3 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 r2 \3 d. W+ i, a6 _6 m3 K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- M$ L) ~/ f9 C3 l! h7 }6 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ A2 G: G& y  D! S9 L! p* W# R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 t. U# T' C- Z& ^! A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. F; n3 g" \* W; r7 }. m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# T) U, X4 ^* A" [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* {9 B$ H! s: Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ X( w" c" t' P' }3 g* ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 {1 B. N! M% q: r. w/ }0 g6 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% b& k+ S2 Y; u% Z7 v7 d* h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- D  g1 M" Z7 \* V4 ?, f! k) ?$ U6 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 F8 ]3 j, M* g) `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 G3 t; N/ U6 S1 A( J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; S  O/ }& ^+ L( o: d) Q! ^3 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, F1 ?+ \! ^$ X0 s# R9 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; I+ v# x/ Q3 G: x) ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* B& x& r% l  u# H, H* {% k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 v7 g( c& U4 E* J: M8 a9 `# ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 u: x  j' k6 L) W. z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 J; z' r4 h+ [; n- e' Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& j  g9 l  u; X$ Y. P: C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 [  Y; Q. C: ]5 y$ z: D' C# i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, ^8 W5 ~; ~6 a% L" O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>