【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! v9 H* S. U! s2 k4 U& PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* |2 w* j' c2 e$ {: F* NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 C+ _/ U& j, j8 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 b6 N0 w2 a7 i) J$ i1 S' ~; `The sky is happy down to its soul
; c) K5 M! O6 d/ x8 ~With the moon kissing it every night
1 c, p0 f% k1 o0 L7 jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 b$ c+ x* e) k3 N1 g* }, _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 K) }( I# e+ B* S; k4 Q  OI really want to know just how much you love me
) r0 q* ?7 G- b+ aI love you I love you with all my heart
, U) J; ?+ w) dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- @2 L6 X: a5 U/ S7 \I’m still filled with fear
% J. `8 H- A$ S0 v" Z5 q, vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; M/ ~5 M( U. X$ d: R' u6 y1 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 t# }& Z% W# H- o1 XWith such a tongue as yours,
  I' v  o/ s- q* J8 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% |- f; b0 R6 M) C+ J+ H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 P9 N4 Y! n& F# t( Y1 V1 d$ @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ^8 i) s, I8 Y4 c. ^1 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 F' \  E) N8 a# Y4 e+ |7 S! ]# g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( p/ q! V) U% U6 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 ?. s. n+ E9 m5 z+ z5 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 Z5 d$ [& C( _4 |: w* o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 i. {; |. z4 D0 j- ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 ^* z' K2 D4 a( Y  A7 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ q' r' u% {: |% g* c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ F) ~3 H, E7 R9 k- o( @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, q! [* K. s( a2 }; p: h/ [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) J# v% E  N8 I3 e/ Z2 u<P>你无需担心</P>
1 I: i% v' k4 v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: t0 J! }/ Y! A% D( j2 c, q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ j! r3 M, y# M9 k' G( R* z8 s9 U& T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ J& w) R" |; U$ [8 k3 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 b3 ~0 T5 u' N% ^$ R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( {: F5 h  {! l6 ]- `9 J9 ?9 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& v) L) \; Q# s' a5 ^; }# K0 z% e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 A7 @! x$ z6 a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: k' i; b) L5 D. ~7 z9 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 S4 e  }! S7 I+ d& C& J; c$ ]" `/ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, l1 J  C+ l: J7 U  y8 D) G0 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& K$ q: J) T/ ~" D, q; I4 c4 f: g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& t0 f, b. P  Y$ E$ ]( f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 S3 i: N8 U% L2 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. k& E( y2 o+ T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" Z9 u& K# J8 E% ?7 }& F: \# e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 R% h- s8 {) s3 v* b8 f$ |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% @9 ?6 K0 o2 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. i: C' F+ }$ o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; y" `) g! H1 O, b3 `6 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% F7 {- }9 ^; Y! N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" \/ ^( v$ K# a2 \我请你剖开它

" u) z' @6 O& n) J( F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>