【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ Q& N( ~2 |  tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 D1 b3 n4 w6 D  S: AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" }5 L. E2 j" e( P* QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ n: Z0 @" a( [9 e; eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 w5 u  o  Q0 r( l$ t) _1 q4 b4 pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 n2 y" F, Z; a2 c; T! Z" RI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) K1 ]& V9 J1 H, PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ a3 l3 G5 [$ s* W% ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( X/ L  I. v" l( E4 {/ a/ fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 Z; C! p9 e( E1 e3 U+ N) kI’m still filled with fear
6 d) `" y; B+ _' rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. z: D) |3 y# N) ~2 n- vI regret not dying
3 N- U+ K9 v) A  Y1 {. c" iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! a5 N2 r# c* O) ~8 f; w  FWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 {" u' e* A$ m/ AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  u( {0 x: ~0 v  b1 G% BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: T; R) A' _' n7 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ O) u; T, D9 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 P: k/ d' n1 ]) k- m. \, ~. F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. R9 i; V. m" l9 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, g9 F1 @) U" d. g  m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ |; h; o" e* l9 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 p9 E1 p% @7 y6 e- W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) |: Y$ J' f+ t: `* J& ~5 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; h: u1 E1 g. o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, b! }2 M* |) y5 _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ u, U; [# o5 ?: P. P8 y4 O) {) \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 a$ z4 W, Q) L' Y% ]% w8 s- O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 G. G$ H4 H& H! [5 [/ u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) `  s9 t2 u7 d" ]! r2 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; |2 T8 F2 K8 F- Z: ?- B2 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- U7 p# \7 h( n# R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  _* _& z3 R5 _! f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ J, ]% p+ ]# e: v; f  r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- Z& l; f! C$ M, |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 \  U( I; h2 I2 t9 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) h: F5 y& e6 F4 o6 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 F( L* I. E* U( F& N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( H) b* t1 V' f# j* f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: m! ?- N3 s& X" y& ]. w. O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 b! b2 X. d9 V3 C8 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' Z9 x- H% r4 J0 K  l# x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 B3 r# C. z8 {; \2 b% K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, V* d: C3 E6 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 Z1 C; Y8 y: T9 W% @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 R, m  C4 C/ H/ c7 c) g6 B# \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) N' N0 P6 c9 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ^- J! v5 k& a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 @  u7 U: T: C) E: ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, N& Y! S3 n0 D3 h' l% b" S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) `% E9 @) u8 W1 Z. v: ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ]! _  T7 [* ^1 |1 D  d! \( ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ j% f, R" a- H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

3 t+ v! c  B  ^/ d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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