【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ z+ T" X5 u6 X7 j( fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# j4 ]+ @) d" a2 U" q+ ]8 H$ q3 {' vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ H& }/ I) x8 N: N; _, {! Y+ AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; P# u2 k/ u& V5 n3 c; JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( z7 p5 q4 ^9 n$ [  r8 wNothing can compare to my love
' X" ~; i1 @7 r" R# L' m3 B9 o' T' F- TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 P) V- [; u4 l: w) \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- M# ]3 C$ L4 S7 V7 K% m" P! Q( SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! K3 W: n5 e6 Y. WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; |- L- o0 L7 j, n: `1 V  A  u: e! QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% v& N8 J, @6 W. Q8 g8 y+ [4 g* T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' p' \  O6 D# D% m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 ]8 M- @% }* O; a( u8 D) K" ~- G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, m+ e/ w6 E* k7 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 B2 f1 N' c+ y: ?# q" |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 D  G4 S: t' p. z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  n# k2 B7 ~6 p/ {, D5 L% I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, f: u4 U+ }- g% C  v9 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 d% {  k- X& |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. ~* E' \# J0 f, \4 b; D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 {  \3 m% B  [$ a; ^0 r5 @<P>你无需担心</P>
; u, I9 ]' d8 j  \: [4 I  ]% D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 B2 F, H3 C& n# m$ ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  D' `6 L9 Q2 E: W2 s8 N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 K! s  C6 n& d0 \2 q9 _: L; J5 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; _/ x+ e+ y' N& b& k$ L* N1 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 h9 @0 c4 ?4 Q9 U( K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! @" ^0 j' x+ s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# y8 E, X3 Z: r. ]) L" O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ ~! ~9 e0 ?( e' ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  X! j) _. r7 U# f' m. P* n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' R! a2 ]( ~1 ]& L9 Q3 K# N+ f. e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; N* M! Q1 A9 C5 L/ k) l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# ~  J* k! ~0 V  s0 B5 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 ?) v3 m) ~! I" m5 ~% j$ [. T# q% r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 F7 l$ _6 P: t" T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ ^& Y+ j  M0 t) J1 ?! L. Q5 L% C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 P4 E# Z: K* W( S" A$ p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 |1 i+ X- \. n  E$ v2 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>