【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- P, M/ O8 E2 {4 ?1 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' S8 y7 D. O/ e  g1 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 i; S. T4 T) C' _( o- A! @) \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 J2 C3 E& J) i1 a- ^- H$ ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 x. J4 q+ @* r! g( b5 |, GYou needn’t fear anything
" @: o) S" R1 ]0 l, h/ w' n" wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 n+ V4 L: M9 _8 }2 [" j. u" `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ s* j/ `4 {5 M$ W1 ~  v& fI want so much to see inside your heart
4 |+ }2 a7 {8 C% I. MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- u8 B. u' Y3 F" b; aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! }' W! T  e2 V: b  a  J/ I1 N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. V) M. E4 `& Q7 L) b1 W* m0 @6 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 |0 q& e$ S# W. \7 [! C, |2 u* q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" B$ L/ v; h% z: x2 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" R2 o4 G/ d' W& E8 c1 v7 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( ]  f  I! Z7 U+ r/ W1 M5 }! I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, t0 I1 X# Z& h, F2 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ `" p8 q6 C  D- B$ v7 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! A: m" F- S6 t) i4 e0 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 ^8 n9 I( V! v: Y! @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- T; k) a. ]  k/ ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# J6 O, U$ @! w( m! d. D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 k8 v; C. j* e# j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& F0 q2 k. m2 }- Q8 i+ P- D- f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* E* B6 B) t. b4 a9 ]8 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ e+ r6 c; k1 ]; T7 u: R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" Q) S: a* r% n, b8 U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* i* |# u4 V, d9 p% \' H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ?1 a9 ?2 Y! f$ p+ ?# G' {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# [6 I! ^; v/ s& |- f0 y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( N6 z& M+ t: T0 y& F) P5 g) B/ ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 O% h, Y/ o3 `) {<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ K9 I; M& C& B! d6 f- y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 A- W, [. S, n6 W) z+ E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, j# ~: F3 n* c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 H$ \% P4 ?. I3 o4 w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" w5 f8 F3 d; i$ u, D% r0 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; f' u' I. u1 _! b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: c# h1 ]8 q- r  P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( |" }$ O8 O8 M/ |7 {3 d5 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& i, \# z, N7 f) p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* n: A- t7 ]- C) U) l/ v( w+ I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>