【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% z1 \, y6 W1 ^0 G歌词我附在后面。
" z0 P  u. n) l2 U& ?) ^1 h" iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, O4 E% m# V7 z( x/ k3 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 H- A6 e0 s* P- Z1 m7 G8 |; K) NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; J6 U& T3 S- F8 |8 |- s( BSeeing the sky content with its love
8 O" o0 [& R# G- Y! U# pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 K3 C" m) E! Y* Q/ L% j) Z3 REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ V/ i* Z3 X+ u2 t- BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 [7 x9 J; J0 gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 ~* j* R; _" BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 l' d/ u0 i7 p* h: c" F" E; }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# t4 q9 U! U, B6 j4 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& k( _& i3 \7 U, a5 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  E. @4 D3 k' E2 q2 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) [5 E4 v( B9 v  l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  c' }) b9 e; {/ s) t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 a& c* \/ u$ c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; y6 U. }! a/ W3 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* q& A) m. b. J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 D3 S' H/ F2 S' w$ {" e2 K4 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 P: r4 [7 y2 P, `( ?$ l2 D; l8 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 N) l8 H& w9 o+ Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( g) a1 Q& S) O# \' T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ l& L4 W5 Q. u! }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& c# o1 Q3 G2 @2 z9 P3 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( q& H7 m" z% }, e5 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! a" l5 G/ G( [' m% |. i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ h' e( m% y1 p3 w5 b: }- i$ }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% u* k5 a# M# P4 D# O" C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- n4 Q% Q* k( k6 q9 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* M8 {0 j4 j$ e% ]# h: g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* d: H$ @$ q6 i( y  Y, b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 W8 q/ P/ _, ^. q8 w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% i4 I: R+ y; Q% A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 m& l/ R, }% F$ z- C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 t/ D' h" ?* }; [) V# }, Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! X; [6 ]$ Q  }2 m' ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

, ^  S1 h3 j# S$ d& U* P- P& @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 {" z6 {" L: u! ~6 N7 P6 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>