【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ p( ^+ K" s/ e/ oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 ~2 B4 L& `/ l/ j1 R( K$ R) V9 w# o, wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 B. G: O- n2 j2 H/ g' ?' AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. ^9 O, a' w5 u  \You needn’t fear anything
7 u4 [, c5 T" B% T& hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ Z: P' p7 a$ e! {' _* I: t& DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! H" p. B0 Q$ W+ m5 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) C' z. h7 S: M8 V5 F7 w; S$ SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# d; K. I, h: |* V) K8 L* BI regret not dying
3 W* D4 y, P1 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 |* X6 @4 K0 `) r& [With such a tongue as yours,
4 Z5 q( G' d4 w. p1 W  O! z8 S8 Z# [/ zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, c6 A# N8 I) wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; H8 V8 X7 V& d0 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 t0 b3 g: S5 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 F: t0 f* }/ g8 P" |: w, a2 V& y9 i/ F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! }7 \; g' K& r) o( T2 s0 d$ p- z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' ?: R( C" K; k+ K) ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 [6 u( y6 {+ X8 a/ n6 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* q3 Y" a! ^2 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ s9 ~6 ~) S  }) q% J4 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' K$ ^4 l) d- m- B0 I: w7 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  y" q, I2 n) S8 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 z  l/ L  B5 X5 w& v; Z' @: W( b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 q0 U  ~( q' g. ^% k1 z. C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( {5 r/ X5 A+ C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ P2 c% c; W5 f. A0 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 U# |7 E5 r  w5 x- X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* o# J$ P2 T$ J7 W* K; S3 h/ T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 X' K9 _/ F6 N1 Z' {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 u, R; M6 d& I* l6 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" U. t2 Y! I/ Q0 Y" q( h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 D. g. b" j$ Y" r6 a. C我请你剖开它

  D0 I" l+ v, O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# A# a0 r1 L) f# b- L6 r5 S" l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>