【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  \6 m: Y  ~$ x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# r$ g" j" j+ K/ VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* o( I9 S' y1 U1 X# h% N& mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: d- v- ^' C( WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% V$ [# }. O" l" gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* v) l5 R- G8 z; {1 F/ i$ k+ R& }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 V5 y& t3 C5 g1 I5 U& C$ h2 XEvery other word you utter is love
( k9 w7 c) r: \3 G; pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 r" |9 P  Q2 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# q0 f3 w& g. I# p  \: C" [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- Q- }2 n$ o# J% v9 b/ UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 P" T6 h3 P9 v4 u! z% wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) a6 H' |9 ^5 y" g, @' w& g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 i: N+ n4 G; O2 C& v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  Q" v! ]' |6 \3 ?1 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 p/ T3 U, h, B8 Z8 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  N: s+ g+ C" F2 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 h% D9 `5 G7 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; Z+ J, q; G$ f, x( P: o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 F! _6 Y7 T8 @& K+ x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 T; \0 e* D0 A& X: D/ I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' y, g  W& f  k3 H1 H5 R. S2 i( Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! Q& T! T7 x! J1 o+ p- u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ z1 q% V+ L! W) l5 j8 g/ d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* n6 f' G* a5 J3 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 G3 m1 r) G) G9 G5 h0 k5 t+ k" Z3 n; l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ Y- D; P8 h3 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 [9 D' I$ q# n. p5 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 I; C- V3 Z& Y; g8 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ s7 J& x3 M6 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. T) G# V9 ]4 G9 y: F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. f2 t: s) M$ {( P6 O7 m3 Q2 o" N1 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. P' T, {. a$ i) N. ~- C& ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! z* o. k% z! L/ u2 h& w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% P2 |* r- U% @9 _5 w5 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ b8 |. b- k0 u9 }) I3 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& z' s2 {; @# |, X) ?& [7 U& T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 I8 j' k( S1 T* D* `我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# U! C. P% ]2 L0 P" _: g2 t' \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>