【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 }  }1 x! q3 a' X9 r' JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% i6 `6 ]3 o, o" ^$ hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! P& G  y9 A) w8 B9 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' s" e9 M- _( F0 Q# pThe sky is happy down to its soul
. W+ J' N- Q) s  R0 `  x% nWith the moon kissing it every night
* d* q+ u/ |# J1 k$ @" a0 d0 }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' L0 {; Z8 L: O$ c" a% KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% F, N5 J7 y5 q5 E  ^! I5 a1 n& AEvery other word you utter is love
5 q- {) P& O3 _7 FI really want to know just how much you love me
0 Y+ y( m* R# ^  g0 H2 M3 W) \6 kI love you I love you with all my heart
& u0 `) A( i# q& M% y! U. _% vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 f  _9 X( M1 D6 X7 |+ u  WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 m+ P3 k! V* O0 ~$ d% R  Z0 I7 CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ f0 D# t( X6 |* {7 r( N& Z9 ?6 |I regret not dying
& {& `# s9 R' ?1 q" Z6 o- OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ t- h: n9 L; P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* }4 C- M# H. x# p1 l: \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 k! w% c7 v* M3 c- b+ T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 a" V3 e# f2 `. z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  i; _( K4 |$ R0 c0 R2 O9 `$ N5 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 e; o; T3 T- ]4 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ i4 m( H$ R/ {4 _1 G% N1 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  Q* M0 }9 ~( n! ~# h8 h3 Q# e  m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- s) a" a  c8 I9 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ _$ [( d- x* s/ V$ a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% |# l8 y+ c) T! @1 V: B. i9 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 D1 d# I4 L' V% g& V: f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  y0 p$ f. w: }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 o% J# h4 j8 F; F8 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' Y8 I# C$ k3 b/ @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 B9 h5 M4 O" m* W) Z* ]* R1 Z- B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 ]7 N: P. ^4 C; H; V+ G" j/ e/ \  q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- R/ n. F3 E8 L' x, T0 G) b3 ^' p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! C: Q4 @2 J9 K+ N) s9 |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- n9 x* C% W7 Z* I$ b' Y% k, s, H0 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 p1 }8 F& j' M: q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ k7 I6 w0 g- D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 J$ C5 J! z  E" H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; N5 K; K( |7 K6 E/ S  O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 {& C! H% B7 P6 J5 P: j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 ?$ B1 h) z" [4 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- b  D+ I# q& A( P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" ^8 [0 o( j1 }. m3 V. E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! }" k$ S5 ?8 K( o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- t! a6 p0 L/ p& J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>