【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) O+ e3 l  J" K. F2 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 M$ J9 D* I; P# h* a! x/ @) A; GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 R# }  O) P$ oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 J$ ^" i+ s; ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 s- n1 `4 p1 ^) ]$ Q) iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ c1 z% Z7 E2 J" y$ qEvery other word you utter is love
$ d+ h3 O1 ]- H; cI really want to know just how much you love me
& _# c7 i7 s. A1 _( X! FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ H) B+ h" d+ @% F! O8 l' ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" a/ B- B% v& ^) D0 `I’m still filled with fear
2 ~  q/ A0 ]( W+ f) \' H+ EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# f5 X9 k. {/ o" k; _2 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. ?0 X  G+ h- G- N/ _* wWith such a tongue as yours,
- y7 V3 m3 y; ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ m9 }& x" ?  kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! k3 q7 x- q0 J* t/ iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& ^/ o6 p5 ~* Z3 d) @& X2 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 A5 o: P* h2 _6 G! c. Z; P: |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) |# E- v8 A" W: t: t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! }+ Y1 d$ C+ n- [/ g1 I7 c$ t$ \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* s$ \# }- w* w! W2 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& k0 [: W8 T, m  \8 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 p5 d! O: v# ^% \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* o  f7 H1 q- ~% t. P% T2 u/ `; A% w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" ^' W8 t: I' `3 R3 E' W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# H+ [! Y0 m. X& I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* c1 d. m. {! w* A% z, M% Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; P% A1 |7 H5 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ?5 ?, v$ t' m( B- X: c+ v* @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ @, n6 E6 W* N9 h; l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) j! ?" ]" N- @1 S2 d0 k# v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! _/ \( }; m) z7 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 y$ I2 @: P* E7 E, d7 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 G9 @- y5 [* q9 w) f* D7 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% ^8 y0 f( P% Q# n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 Y8 N6 B; H; {' ?* n' E; R6 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>