【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 m7 k! S" T  j歌词我附在后面。
% {- q9 e2 d) L# \5 [* N4 c# aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. f  X8 }6 [5 N$ @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 N, j' y5 W7 y& W- `Seeing the sky content with its love
- g7 \7 d" t  f6 `4 x. A+ yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% u" F& t* H- X% II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' B: S7 r/ R* \5 h: k" x2 KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 R6 @* T% y# k: s0 oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% }$ a# t6 u* Z! `. n5 Z% C3 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 [3 ^! c4 Z/ ~1 |3 M' HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 H: w; h" m& S, \1 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" l( Q/ e: e7 G+ ]* x9 c7 P+ q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 i: O* W4 V& u/ a* z; A1 V! k: t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" s9 Z/ {/ C: F4 S- r( Q3 _2 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( v& y+ @) L4 ?4 I- V* ^' ^" z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ O7 C6 F2 \; o8 d: x5 g$ z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& \# G' J2 N  f% I* B, w! U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- x! O: Q' G; l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 N: z( t. Q5 Y; l1 U; u; m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 V) t- R. Y' n3 F# Q% r" D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 \: }# T( g3 o  O: y! Y3 I4 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: W, t2 Q$ z5 _. C( _# A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' e6 T9 G: e" X: @( |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 ]/ k, _4 x0 s1 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, g. }  a4 S8 u! ], C6 \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; m' m' o( M. N9 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* G  p* p6 j( v" |) V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  ]0 P; Y' D9 E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 _# |9 c' i% g% Y  _& Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 V. Q, V9 ]# B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 N9 g% y. a# h/ i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ^# D' m5 G) [' Q: w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 s4 d9 J# i  z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ H0 {, |$ v7 O( Y( o: `: x1 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 W8 n- M$ `+ I' z我请你剖开它

7 O# ]  H) q1 G. s+ R+ O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& R4 }( z' |7 f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>