【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% q( Q. p* X0 p/ s; K& C$ `- NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ J; E$ R! J& y+ o& bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 M% T* A! \/ d& l/ f- u! y) U- t3 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( S1 N# G/ v" n7 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. e" U8 r: u* f" ~& U# vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  }+ x' k% \# G4 X. k/ N6 wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# e- y' t, u( {5 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 q. P! }3 d; D! \$ HI’m still filled with fear
; m4 R, o& Q5 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- D4 g. x7 S: B0 D5 ?; oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ k  g  a- C( ~6 L5 ]7 c' L7 wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 N4 z# P( T, K4 Q+ {- K1 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' h8 A* X% v' ]# v6 v$ LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ L3 W% {! D3 G  ?2 @$ ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m. m1 Y) G! P$ E& f3 @  X" N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; a: i( b5 [; u# ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- p) ]- o' v3 ]5 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 R- }  {5 Z! c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) ?) T& w# y$ w7 V+ B# _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' {! c. a, C5 K- J" V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: e2 D' w' B7 h3 r0 c8 o4 v7 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! z* F# J* s  }9 O8 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 }$ {% l4 i6 M7 B; U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( z4 ?5 d8 r* E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 b4 c+ ]% L* A8 q9 v: X/ e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 \/ [- A) A) [' F% l; Y* U9 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" l9 t* O5 D' [2 `' z9 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 _# a" U+ A" J! {) O8 x5 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 ^1 a, O% x$ c; W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 ^& e1 D1 L! `7 b7 {4 G  q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 ^! C. H& L; d# c, E9 n+ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# |4 L6 K! ?5 e/ q) n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  m$ ]5 a+ X- b1 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 C2 K; \# ?: |+ U& y* h6 y- [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 W; B: e" Z: ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 C, x9 i8 U/ p. h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' \# _' B# _# L% \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, [+ F9 ~5 b& x: A" t& q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; ]7 d6 X* [/ }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 P- h0 }  k: e* F" `3 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>