【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 R% z% {" U  |, p0 o0 v& }7 jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ j1 y' w# X; I6 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; k) t6 _7 o( ]6 x! ~( |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( g$ m% p' }! b# \" QYou needn’t fear anything
5 A+ X2 }6 y( C  l5 u8 n; N% EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" |' }- V: T" h* \$ rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 \6 n+ f3 v2 h# P% ^" S* K# sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  T" w5 O4 Z" c4 A1 cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. K+ i/ J+ o( ^/ a( F  WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 j4 Z0 e4 s+ w; ]5 {/ k% SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 u4 E8 ]% f+ k, C  ^! n8 ]* ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' f5 H* h+ A9 s, \. W1 U* KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& _7 m% _0 M% S# x; W9 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. o+ K, M) }0 R# @0 b" U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 q  _) R: N" w3 d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 ^2 v. m6 }# }+ H/ S2 z# z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: @5 p, j% E, b/ U8 r/ z% w5 Y  V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ Q* ^4 O5 y6 J$ i2 \! O. K1 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 V0 `0 @, Q, N% j$ z8 F7 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; m- _. H; K! X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- \" a( u+ s/ a* ?<P>你无需担心</P>
; ~* i7 I9 `8 J0 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% a7 O/ c5 Y1 Z$ n* R$ D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- O4 B8 I( I7 W  E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 e6 ]! E. B( F4 \  [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 d6 L' Y; ?8 {! Z8 U; n0 b1 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ?& C" {! ~( J2 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 Z. E9 x% K; d4 Y7 S8 u+ w8 Q6 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 l% C; c$ K+ D, n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% `: y" }% q# l2 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& M9 c8 y" F- g+ A* _1 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! I( [3 ?; P; G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 w4 Q5 Q& G6 _- u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 a. X# G4 Y6 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>