【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 F, A& c8 P7 X* n9 j1 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 N  P1 d& g* ]' Z3 n$ kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# g+ J1 U1 ?) x1 Y- F5 E8 {3 B& mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* y: t! J6 p  b8 u# v5 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
! K; Z4 \0 {  s- tWith the moon kissing it every night
1 S: ~& X9 j3 y$ E' d- ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* B; m' p8 @' @, X2 d4 bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ^" ~5 U. ?& D9 H3 I0 h  Z- E' pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 @2 \7 c4 E1 H: c5 dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 @) w( |% W' t' ~$ pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 R7 d/ B5 J% u, N% Y/ s2 j* f& II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% K( N/ n; P' V/ _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" K. a; M8 M) Q# u( V- c6 nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* Z& K" z* y" yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 B. C6 P1 \5 _* f% ]1 d7 v  Y/ I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ g' Y/ F! O9 j2 B3 t9 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 O  K6 e6 B* N" h' D0 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* g8 E/ ^; v4 j  M6 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ~! u: a; S. q<P>你无需担心</P>
- n9 ^) y& I- P9 t2 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 n% q  M) }% n+ E' w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! m2 S7 T. c0 n7 a  P5 ~; S* E( E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" _1 b/ j% G) R/ c8 H+ Z6 O0 x$ P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  j' k; c* I9 c2 M' l5 {8 \- o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) T- U+ S. }  a6 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* G; v) }2 P) D# O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  u4 b; Z) b$ j7 o" P% J* o- r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! o0 h& ^3 G+ a  a5 |& O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* @1 L. h0 f$ L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 i7 }1 r8 z8 ^% s# p3 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% }# q+ M) P' G+ j. u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 d7 F+ W  s* T# I" Q) w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" B  L/ }7 @1 a/ y" t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" U8 |0 x& |' x0 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: e" @: k5 s9 s* y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% Y& a6 H# a/ ?+ N+ z2 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% _7 r5 @7 e# ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. G5 n! k! N) L+ k- s* O* ]  x3 V我请你剖开它

8 y) l$ t8 p6 A9 ~0 s  I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- p, A5 y8 c% K8 ^+ q$ I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>