【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& S  K9 B5 Q; Z  {  Q1 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; J- i+ w! c/ b' K" t. \5 \9 Y+ ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ y+ n& t. o( i6 w' T# NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 `+ i$ A' J4 l0 p: X# T4 v$ O9 ^  kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" F0 q3 j* L0 V4 k- sSeeing the sky content with its love
+ P$ O$ {7 D, L0 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! z6 p: @" L' A- ~3 X! x7 i! T6 k+ J- vYou needn’t fear anything
2 g  t+ Z1 f( i. p% iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! g' P/ `( [- T, B/ wEvery other word you utter is love
% Q* m( U9 v. g8 K, [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 [& O5 j7 V) W5 n8 W: B9 M& mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 o# M; |0 c& f  ^5 f: kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% q& O7 M  f. |5 zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. j5 n2 ], N7 ]- Q5 mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 Z  N& `* v$ p* S. jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: ?  c3 K* E5 O% L  Q0 l/ v! NWith such a tongue as yours,
$ A! J0 K( u8 pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 c) k& a$ k1 p' G' F+ k" U. p7 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 a6 E3 P- Q* \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; k7 y4 [  D7 b; z+ z1 K) w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% Y, K7 L0 A( r) j9 ?7 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 v! F( U% C* k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 O9 w% i# B# {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# r* p7 M2 c, B7 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 a! Y( N3 @, \$ p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 U) l% f9 @( a( f8 Q7 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! L. Z: Z" z! _% k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 g1 ~; ?; {+ U3 @  T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) W' ?; F9 `  f/ F/ K/ u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* [! [5 y# i0 D* [& B& ^3 v+ L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 Y" p. C/ }  ~, J2 f7 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' p- w, z9 @8 }0 d( h% `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, s$ Y$ b3 ~5 C9 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' h" b, s$ I8 v: _) M7 p( J8 O6 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ u6 [* ^+ A! J0 k9 Y- t5 ?% y$ f: o. y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" y1 H$ }8 E; T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 S$ ]3 k0 G( b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ f7 E. [" A$ ^6 c, t3 Z4 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ J* Z  \, ~7 e$ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  w  n( [& z1 i' F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' i# B9 v% X' T4 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: e  o: l% `0 n5 K8 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ ^2 @0 W. G. O3 K4 V4 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 R( F, Y' E& y1 K) O2 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, }3 B2 L+ _& ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
0 B, x1 B( y$ r. u2 ^; F
我请你剖开它
- i' k( y/ q6 }& {+ c4 U
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>