【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& b6 C& @1 H; T9 x. L2 q% W7 S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 P7 _4 c& _: _) BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- @- H4 p- W) m% C' Z" n! aSeeing the sky content with its love
3 k. k5 j* J$ ]. p+ JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- Q6 C% ~! A; g: P8 e  BEvery other word you utter is love
  t* c- V( j) g$ b5 X9 d3 CI really want to know just how much you love me
1 T: M. n6 Y( VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 ~  Z" M- Y  D2 a# ^+ P' NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ^2 `+ e& e9 \$ H  ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  A+ O  l  T& T, tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' H' W& M4 }4 |1 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 a, X5 o8 V: j7 s: o3 yWith such a tongue as yours,
) k' d# s1 x% R. T* TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ d% ^! x# `, r  KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 N- ~" ]. a; M& z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* V* q! m; e8 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ `# K# S' m. r1 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 E. N: L$ `0 f- h7 K5 X: R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) I5 U; b) r2 r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 M' b/ j1 Q& s; S! f) x* X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 ]7 m0 k3 M# c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% h4 p8 d8 f$ F3 }7 D$ I6 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, K: T  A* a# b; y  x, x& |) ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& Y# K9 O) p- V& [& y* s6 e: K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ [: P- z0 W/ X6 G. h; W) d  W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, m) ^& G$ o0 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ a# E8 S" I* k* l! |0 T' r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 J9 n" ~! m" q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 |; Y. c. O, t- X5 b' ^8 x% r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' p: h. o" L' o5 J& K3 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ i4 x, \7 F0 {( F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( e1 N- Z; k/ G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 L) K/ d4 m  k<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 F- P) f2 t1 @3 w: s. ]& f6 r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 Q7 _, ]9 L8 {! F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 e! C- m0 C9 K& s) J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ |& v9 Q8 p; o+ G- P& r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, f3 f" R0 w2 S8 s7 ?4 a1 V9 ]( w我请你剖开它

$ C& B8 A7 ?$ A6 s5 {- @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>