【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 ?" v; s6 S! j9 z% FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, k# G# Y. i8 @$ ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 a" Q7 ^7 b% g5 _% m$ p3 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! L4 P. Z6 p/ Q, S$ g- Q6 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  v1 _/ P' p' Z. Y: _6 q! Q/ a0 ~You needn’t fear anything
! }+ \+ t% I( T# k8 E2 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) \7 r6 v6 G/ |9 y9 v# A5 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 V9 [3 \5 A( N8 U) @! j" EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# w, @! N" w- x% s: p' KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, C8 n( r4 v5 r9 X6 q* P4 wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! q: y3 g2 H1 R) j0 ~8 @2 q0 m/ B6 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 V# ^# u3 u6 D% ~8 {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 _3 n# p' V; S- aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ Z8 w7 B# U( a$ l$ p  q$ Y( X7 m6 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ v: u! Z" M1 _( w# z* c+ E. u6 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 j- g2 q. z) g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 M1 _2 x8 V: z- K5 v; k6 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 F) [; V8 l' T( d- d; i9 o( ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( W4 m  `6 }7 ]+ n3 y( \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" H* h! K. D, q0 o# d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 }% m; h- v7 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 U7 w7 w& O" Q9 \8 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% L$ x3 C. M5 q# J- g! ?# a9 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 o  M: c( R. Q0 Z' [2 C* [: W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 [. A  n/ S# T8 f5 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" p) t: B  Q2 H- U7 L" u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% I. \9 z4 s  ^4 A5 O0 |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 x* y1 k4 u& q) X) R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( w9 h3 |9 j1 u3 H5 o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, E" v/ y/ Y1 `+ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) k6 o# O; X  U! l3 x$ K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 Z' m, o. W4 u3 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, w8 s( m/ f2 \  B) g4 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. V4 e0 q* j( `  n6 a, ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: L; q9 F/ v  H2 X. b; t9 [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( _# e1 ?6 X  s& X- c( z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 `, R* @4 R% k# J( z1 M2 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( V1 z. n4 O: R" c$ d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ t4 u& u! b6 c' o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. e! c, M9 d, U3 Q/ e8 A( ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>