【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( ]! I3 L  M: u: r! D/ dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 D/ h1 w6 ~' @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 I. y  T$ R) ]) E" \With the moon kissing it every night
! w  ~2 L# a$ E# @! O0 M; qSeeing the sky content with its love
- n9 N+ l  o: _, X1 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  t7 P: x8 x" j# [+ _/ M$ FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 G1 y( v# o4 ^: g0 m4 C! YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# M5 U. R, R$ Z5 _. x; ANothing can compare to my love
' c4 T" P3 p; e  n6 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 W8 L! j  l( e1 [) N! i+ s' FI want so much to see inside your heart
2 F6 [/ V5 h( n8 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ X0 c' @9 x6 I$ G9 [, {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: v! H* B- V% `: y! _0 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 @# L' j  P& r7 z+ H5 T% c/ ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' {% q" v7 G0 t" u% O7 yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# F2 M9 l4 D( r8 V! B- [* \+ l9 P2 |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 R3 _, P9 G  x3 v# K1 u0 v. Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 @, q- f) U  \- L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( y, C- C) k4 H! x+ I% x2 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- C/ E2 j- a/ ~( e$ M* N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& A1 k* ]0 q2 E8 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, R9 F2 L( E7 U% B& Z! T4 ^. g/ ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" ?; \% F. n+ z- c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 q; V7 A5 \8 U5 c! n" A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 z2 V% e. N9 O& y6 m* F. F/ ^) Q0 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 U3 z# o' j3 U/ z0 T6 J% Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* f$ P% Z1 F, Z* I: j2 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) e1 ]2 Y( f$ U# l1 n& _7 y5 h6 o# W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% n. s5 |. k& _' U1 N; Z( ?8 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 v  R8 b# O6 y/ U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ y. a& ~- x2 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ w7 `2 E' f: F$ o6 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. v" Q3 h+ V5 r/ I2 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! n. U& Y  x1 Q7 V% L- b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* N, w- t. u" C, D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# F3 i# D/ t. k, `! [% `  e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 \! w6 L7 @7 }/ |( N( z" \" D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ u) ?# o' H/ P6 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
* j$ e0 E4 I% p) {6 D$ ?; J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 Y- T$ e. F" [: K# F6 @+ L  _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ \# Y! R: r2 N! Q8 j" t# ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ Z9 M  k8 I9 Q- o: S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) \! }6 X1 h5 `9 m* R, ]( u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. |4 j# X) Y' l/ P7 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  {; d* N' y8 h7 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, F* ^9 h. \' a! H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: G% O' x. O1 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 Z0 a% P( }3 D" ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>