【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 f4 A# Y% h+ ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; a) k: C6 }* A- j/ R) ]- a9 KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 W9 A5 e0 B) h5 R- G' eYou needn’t fear anything
: E- b$ U1 m4 x0 u. t1 N" R( @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. l. b9 Q) g, R- I5 d. NEvery other word you utter is love
4 `: ~+ b' s! i& j5 _2 m6 R. @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* c" U$ Q& C+ H- a/ `/ M) ^( t" o* GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; ^5 l# `7 F; }& O$ c8 zI want so much to see inside your heart
1 x, R& q- H5 ]! [5 A* Y8 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 \& m6 |( s1 t- V/ `I regret not dying
! U- X! G) [4 S9 [& r' H) LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ W, V' o4 W! @; iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  l' J5 t# W# H# HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 w) B1 |: ?+ W* m7 g" xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# [9 f7 d5 d, c2 R6 z& Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: Y; j5 D' r( J' d9 i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  [, ]* |: _. v! h# b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 D( |& Z# d' j# _# v) T/ ~1 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' v& P% u/ _/ U+ `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" O, ^$ O! g  V' x) `; c& e8 w' K( ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 t6 [1 a: k/ n$ Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& l, D' O" ]  ^* L% [, h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 _8 S6 |0 D1 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 v- d* _+ S1 w( n( A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' n/ l6 L8 _1 ?/ f9 h- E% h. z* Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; y$ g, \6 K2 A* k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, C2 o  [2 E4 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 w4 P- ^7 k% E  `" m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 a! B3 _4 }4 J; L% Y5 f' v; G* A2 I+ M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# V, J  Y+ p. B) U5 X1 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% X5 J9 ?  [4 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# F7 ]' K. k* @" z, C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 z" N5 d; B! L& v" t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 x3 T" _- u) n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# K7 S8 x& j  x' e5 }8 d, F& f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 ^' f; @7 x- \/ B# V3 Z' r0 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) S5 A: [0 t( i8 N: e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' ?7 d! z6 q; [# ?& m; L1 k1 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 g; N1 S3 N& c! ^" j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 b0 j0 s0 U- S" S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' m) O7 U3 {2 k7 s4 X: E: N! `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 F, ]; O' x5 ]( P$ X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>