【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 v* F) k# F  s( |# X1 Z! tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ o$ l0 h! r3 b/ z" XThe sky is happy down to its soul
. ?1 |4 R9 }1 Z% ]- H$ tWith the moon kissing it every night
- ?0 k3 V) y, S8 q+ f( qSeeing the sky content with its love
8 D* O: \4 w  x1 s7 \% RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% y# i' x& X& m8 w! M/ e7 j5 {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 C$ |0 o6 p, t! x+ zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! z& V, V: q5 w9 x$ Z/ |. ^, EI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- D1 n$ W( j; KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) p. X1 {* H% P& Y+ mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 _1 }9 ^! X" n0 |1 W7 [$ DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ ^6 [8 q6 m/ z( U+ b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% j1 V9 \& t1 R' z: t- W$ W  ^  [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( ^: L! V/ L) n3 J) Y  x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ z7 K; p5 c+ c$ m: z% M( j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& x. W2 v  f0 p! `6 d/ A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# M: W6 B  A& M# _; f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 B- P$ r; ?" I( i1 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' V' y2 i, E4 t; ?5 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 J1 h, V; z6 C* l$ [& x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' r% b6 G' ]4 m+ e+ w* c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' o% M' \1 s: R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" N# e* ^1 u, }5 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 H7 z6 W1 K+ W' B" d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) e4 n/ p5 d4 X) y6 Z3 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# A! E% K/ ]1 q. y: `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 u% V2 K4 d; w% Z: v0 U& b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 c( q4 b8 _# w) t; {; R9 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; g% @' j: ^4 b7 C/ ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, K; B  U0 X! x! W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 _$ X( M4 c1 P" t$ u/ r8 i6 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ y* F/ x" k" G" J& I- q: u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" P  }9 u: w+ S" w1 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
- j8 t+ B) L" K# c8 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" K; M# R; i  k# O) w/ T- ^7 N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: @$ @9 |& M: L+ u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 I" D& O* T+ z! i: q2 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 o; B! _$ n" w! u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 ^2 ~9 S: _: l$ d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- r; V1 O) [4 \, t+ o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' a4 \$ i. v: n. `8 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: ~! b$ h* F, `& y. f5 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 C# E, M7 O( D8 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>