【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. X5 {( C) P  N2 i: x歌词我附在后面。
  C' ]# C* d; e( D4 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) H( M, O. D' S, h7 E2 s1 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 x. G  o/ H- J+ zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% q: Q# V  M4 p* GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 g1 e0 u2 V* _  JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& ?5 i( `$ p/ u5 W+ FSeeing the sky content with its love
) R8 s0 b8 Y2 r. E' {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ x! f! \5 }! U0 C9 E& r! wYou needn’t fear anything
2 ~1 G% C8 J6 ]' M, m" l5 Z8 N( nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% g: n) q, B, l* A2 c; l, xEvery other word you utter is love
, q  u* p" }5 |! x& |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 i. s8 n3 c" S1 v. C: H' FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! W& O" Z5 G8 Y/ a  }4 d. i. BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( t" A* [2 F( c  a  nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 ~0 u5 B' y0 x: gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, v2 ^' N8 n- K; f' S0 C" l1 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ h1 m0 r/ L4 K  W! A# X" Y- W7 J+ h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 s* I; D3 Z# f- g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 W3 }' q4 a( z+ }$ c4 U" d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 V3 a7 d! }6 i) ]  d$ _4 w% y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 Q; S, ]+ g- u4 b( I( k. E& o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) l6 G" C, ^' h# I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% c; A- D! r; C2 B; ~! M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 m" C0 [: J9 Y  z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' O' R* r4 Y4 f# l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! j! j) K+ h0 w" V' v  R: E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. r# S% i8 u" T, _0 w/ z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 D9 w! l) p' I$ L8 f0 S: i9 g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; a8 g* |$ ?  F& r8 C5 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 m' X" D- H% }0 E& G2 \! x; W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 H; Q8 N( v2 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 ^3 i) i2 w! X; Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 `' o# u7 i3 ]/ g  ~2 G9 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ k/ ~' d7 S) t& G. ]2 z$ @% j  C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; a+ k; Q! q' ?6 ^- r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 l' E& T8 ^& n: s7 R* b0 Z( J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; D3 k/ h- K& s' W; O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' {4 X' L- u! f% H- Y5 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 ?0 Y5 }1 U1 y4 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! Z6 w2 M5 v% t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ Y( N0 o: e' G2 K* E; a3 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' K1 p: o; g9 E6 r& h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
9 X" X1 B7 S0 U3 T" W4 @
* C' a4 i* |! I# q+ C" B, i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>