【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 B2 i& i, d& X; w/ s$ cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 ~  n' _) ^: m- j7 X7 o$ }3 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* k; Q0 A4 }6 J* Z6 e5 m/ H% d* F* W( |3 jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 Y) A: M( D- A. P5 [9 o5 zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% o2 u+ ]1 `) ?1 e8 V# z  yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 v8 `: [. B& Y7 XI love you I love you with all my heart
/ B3 \# R: y' h9 Y4 d' WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 v# M+ K6 M2 e$ M/ WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- K1 T9 K1 Q+ @) C8 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ d" [& m; d* x2 m& Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 a; `4 Z3 R/ a; W4 O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" f# l! G" x- b4 G& q* w! i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; }7 N8 A9 {0 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ S0 ]6 t) r6 X7 Z3 \* Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! P2 e( U( w* o) |/ h2 q<P>你无需担心</P>
. x3 ]/ _- H# w, E& }0 R1 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" u! C1 W' r& y( j% Q9 G% S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 U. M6 g: H3 C- a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% K+ Q! K- D4 G! b! C, r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( b5 \6 S, F% |% m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& |1 d# X# e- f+ T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- z' F9 \! t$ L$ A7 V# t# Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# x3 K2 a0 V& n7 l0 _+ m( r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  T% E6 X' s7 e' i! \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) R8 O& u1 l' ]& N0 H+ [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ Q/ z9 t3 [; X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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6 g0 C8 c6 ^! ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 S. k# d- e7 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ k# u, z; S. G4 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" O/ {: e% y5 r0 `9 `: W- _& X6 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" M3 o3 w9 f, G7 `  h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>