【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" t; ~9 m! {1 F$ b: g4 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( H; ^9 E9 o+ F5 p  o9 OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) B9 Y1 T: R; j9 P* p! SI love you I love you with all my heart
! B4 V7 F5 q- W9 DNothing can compare to my love
6 q1 L8 H7 W9 ~4 E2 s2 z! ^/ OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) m) d( G3 F6 E# EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( A2 v2 p, O: C4 p2 z6 \% j$ T2 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 J9 B% ^/ e7 W) E) P" R9 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* V7 {5 y  N1 u9 z% EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& e2 F1 L* d# _8 }2 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  H' E5 @  M6 f, U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 ]. S8 k* g3 Z+ ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& t/ n, h) E: G' Q  u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 L; H/ r, V5 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 I: W  d3 [% H8 G( N0 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 H/ X) N4 F1 s+ S7 c& b: ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ `: z6 p/ P8 q. |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 q. n, @# S; a+ r! k+ N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# O) {; g7 G6 d9 g+ v9 g9 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, y/ \8 ?! c3 ~0 a* F6 E/ h: ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 ?1 E) ]; f" U7 {- o8 g# w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! [9 e/ _6 r% I1 K8 J2 @: y, ]4 h1 X7 E2 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 q; Z8 T0 B$ g0 {) G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' x$ e0 }/ @( y# z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- J% C# n2 y# s* z5 I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 Z& [+ g( O; t( F- s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# Q+ n7 |) A5 q' z  k. O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 K' h" H% e7 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 e, y/ n. _' S5 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ g. x; Y$ W+ z8 v! T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& B- i' w1 e, g  K3 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 t/ P4 l" L9 L: `2 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) j; S' b7 y  f* c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ o* i/ _, o! l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 w1 f# O( Z6 D5 a" l! _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: i  h' k" ^1 }% h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! g* _7 B7 c. @" A2 D; j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% y" y0 O1 {) Y1 A4 H& y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( I& B. |; b' M2 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 I8 ~! W" e0 \8 D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ l' E# b/ O1 m+ X& x4 R% E  Z! b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: `8 g3 }$ C; `  P. n0 i我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>