【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 S+ L9 z4 ^6 m歌词我附在后面。
) G; Y9 ~  y: |: \5 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# x. O- b" \6 {/ }  s. LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 c2 R8 Z' f: v7 AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ~' N; r( S; {( v. t& q) zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ v. F/ V) ]7 c6 \. F- \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' l0 S; q* {  a. ?" DSeeing the sky content with its love
- ~. C9 @( R3 ]/ ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* f, O" Y. X$ |/ b8 cYou needn’t fear anything
. }; E9 d, S; r) ~4 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 X8 L* f" Y, Z0 lI really want to know just how much you love me
1 O, A5 }6 |  F. w0 M7 bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, L% H4 m, _4 d4 m. L- x+ NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 t$ t4 I( }3 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; i2 @' J" v( Z' _; ~* lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: R  u. M* x3 QI regret not dying
. t/ B! J2 Q3 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, y9 K% S' Q; jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: f  b# X3 Y, F: x7 d8 N8 hRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ D; y2 o+ r, r$ B6 z3 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' _3 E* X* S0 }! ~! J2 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 H. V5 Z" l3 z8 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" i* @, D$ S4 l1 b' x* c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 G6 f3 N7 g( o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 I% k  Q; f$ x9 r; O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& l3 a* a$ s4 s' _' q+ l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 p  I5 N/ J  v5 V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* ?3 F3 q2 I+ _% @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 v! g4 {! V$ D3 j" J; D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% |/ }0 f+ m6 j# P0 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& f& {3 J; }! y1 d- O# N+ D( {  e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ q1 B0 P5 O$ |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, a( ]% U, M4 V; `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  K: a4 J  |5 y& O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 l7 I! P4 Y. a" W7 v5 y6 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: z4 y3 O9 Z& e; f2 Y7 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% m. `& J1 h9 d) H0 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  f" L! ]. o9 w/ ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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& M  `- M. ^# J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  S4 t( _4 A2 j7 ^" L' E7 J, |* I, T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, ]6 w0 _: v: O& {7 _2 X% O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>