【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 N/ Q6 f: K5 H3 E3 Q5 `7 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 k  e. E. b& u/ V  PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 D( X0 z) y6 S* x  BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' l; V3 e0 P* e6 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( a  n0 c  \. eEvery other word you utter is love
2 `( [7 h" x9 T: ?$ r2 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; b. x5 Q3 t2 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ ~5 H/ Q6 X( c( G8 v. C* rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) ^  c' @# {- K2 X, [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 i7 D+ W/ }, Z2 L3 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 F2 k1 m( c. K; W- DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  z" T* `. f9 g0 O9 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# Z# Y; o% d( P, L- G7 h* G  w; pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 o, y2 k, z% ~3 }: nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 ~7 Z1 a- `' ]0 a1 U' l: @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# w6 [2 H$ ?/ c3 ]- y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 W6 A" u! S" M1 K% l# N" U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! W: I) s( c; Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* o; u( B4 N6 @9 N2 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 s5 L/ u( V7 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 l6 I" y. A! ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; m% x5 m. p* K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% n% Q% H$ p, h% a$ g! n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' v) g* A0 E$ s+ g$ x/ e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- [) q( G5 z3 a3 l6 l/ T& B7 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 A5 c  N- J8 @: ^' U4 ?# i: b<P>你无需担心</P>
5 ]) R6 `1 h: z; k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 `3 t- Q* H0 p% Y3 y1 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ~) `- _4 a+ f/ P9 Z2 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' K6 U) j* u! I+ R" P" c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- w1 f- N" m5 A8 g+ f' q6 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ L3 C8 {$ t8 s1 y- h: E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 o- f! E2 s+ U# H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 P4 l* x/ [+ `6 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; }' S  J. w/ p: i1 O2 `! O/ _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' F. G7 v5 D% e3 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( Y3 a7 ?% l( E2 O* m8 ^% C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ T1 d& B. j; G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 }* u; f! ^8 X; ]4 J. m5 T" U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 o( A2 s* C% V% u) X2 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 r! M3 ~/ c- b( C# l; w" n8 @8 _( T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! X. h8 p5 E! q. p* R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ B1 o  G! W: x. ~3 R, ~  x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  r  u6 _3 r: Z! B% Q3 x' `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% M  i  V4 p) b1 S7 o1 I/ V* R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ m0 }& K/ c7 w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>