【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ L9 Q/ A% M! CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 }- ?) q- ~0 R1 }0 X  j7 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, F' R" `0 D, E: [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 R. k7 `; Q& c( J2 uSeeing the sky content with its love
8 P* f4 F2 l& o7 f3 I* z+ l! jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# j) x+ W3 C" F: @% wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& t; i8 L; r. a+ T  X! i% ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! a# E3 @$ V4 a' c  Z* HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) O7 Q+ z; I9 }0 l& E4 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( P) J5 @( D7 P6 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. R2 }& B. `; A' j$ e( c* x3 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 H8 @4 A. Z) I! k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* K/ a- Z7 y8 y+ S  l# Z5 B# p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: h8 W% q( Y8 O' B7 i3 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" f2 c* j& S1 a3 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 G6 v" s7 k* k2 v* k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ V2 p  s; t% z* I0 J3 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 s' `; T# V1 a2 D' D' k/ S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ u# y0 F, v% G, Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 R1 _! r, `; s9 j" p- [4 n" A& n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- M% l! Q" u7 y! G1 I8 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) m+ ~! J% p  ^* O, H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: M5 L1 l# U  R) r3 K- o) i5 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% Y  b! D( S8 T" T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* b5 ~* L& A; u0 Q5 P1 d/ E1 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ K2 x6 ^. w$ _8 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! |- q/ H2 h9 I) s7 C  K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 ]$ F0 U3 a& W" X/ f  v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 N' g6 H, W  w- b# a6 P3 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 d  i' Q8 ^- c/ h8 G' ?; {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# L5 H, E( i2 W: j<P>I regret not dying</P>
" D! R6 R$ a4 ]5 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 U- i2 r2 V0 b3 c. G! U- ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' t9 P/ {1 K, h" j% I! d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ C9 b5 D1 o5 y5 o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ ^/ L1 m$ r# t; ~. S, w! Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) h4 T  w2 I2 S  m! Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 }5 Y6 @( Y- ^# x+ |# F- @5 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 ^  B% `- p; V& B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' ?5 J( E; C$ l  J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>