【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ u! _, r/ G  K- |$ ~- O; Q5 v( J歌词我附在后面。
- Q6 R8 R6 V2 W4 d) `2 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* g, P" @( h: o: d7 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% ~" {  s( _5 h# d# J* q9 Z  QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 B; z; U2 d/ `7 L" d* ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* ^! u- }/ s" {! t+ jSeeing the sky content with its love
! @& ?6 U+ J4 {1 W, d# z) ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 D* W! J) M* BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 m8 {$ Z1 X* Q+ p9 SEvery other word you utter is love
, c0 p' G( q6 y2 [2 N( L& n0 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" b9 B$ j0 c# wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, `  k* N! J! W; ?! W6 O4 rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! d+ y+ {% _- f: v, z) rI regret not dying
) u! g1 x* W! s( i% N8 V. `2 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 q6 |7 j6 d* W+ C/ ]3 p$ mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 c$ k! e4 v4 n. u. e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  y' Z' _3 \* L: e$ _! Q! b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 E3 x, w$ v( M% O/ B8 Z. O( I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# z( J/ J( Y. t6 H( J) x: D: i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( S0 @6 K8 s. |0 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 e$ p3 ]- H0 k; }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' b7 i- S2 u9 i3 t7 g- E! G6 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  \$ Y3 w" g! q/ Z- {  l* ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; I$ h7 f) v% U7 D" U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ^. G, K* u( x% b6 b# {2 }+ L. I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& X; d0 q$ |  ^/ U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, Q& P1 o: v, c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, A& U! {3 b) _) L- z$ Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( g9 r( s+ q+ b9 M3 y4 C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ X* v2 ^7 ]0 ?; d9 m5 n3 H- J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. A6 A$ Q8 P- f. T$ v$ X) Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ D! a& b+ m1 j: p' p& W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( u' E  C) J7 S. n+ p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 R* h8 [! p+ c! O$ v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ E5 U* F8 g# `6 c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  u. o' j; Q# ?2 h# R- \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; V1 q$ h. a# H- L1 q" B% v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 I/ l1 X( Y0 D: a  A我请你剖开它
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. X  Y- i' O+ M7 g$ V0 R' g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 V9 a- R- \" N. `8 u3 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>