【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 y1 p' n- L$ a* j歌词我附在后面。
6 `# T2 h+ I' eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ F+ B: R% w9 E# l# ]" q2 {. pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 I  l& y9 N. j, \6 |0 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ q% Y; m$ G- a3 M7 ~& D( USeeing the sky content with its love
  }. z+ R7 r# u7 c2 j& p0 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- I* t, `# c+ UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 p7 i6 {, z& @" Y% h5 {: t0 P& wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 s( T4 ^$ M- sI’m still filled with fear
: b; p9 I  U  H7 ?# @. x  HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ C( k4 M; ]+ KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, _+ W, P9 z  x+ ]1 e, n: qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 h' a+ _- K+ g8 S- x' n+ n& X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  _) l8 Q% a( E$ h, K/ c  ?' B! M8 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 y  ]9 q3 R8 H/ ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' P5 b* }" V$ C2 e, K$ n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! W- O8 V6 w6 {/ P, r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) ?/ I; x" @' k# {* w. T5 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* \# `0 \( Q) H. Y. `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ C- b3 y. c1 @7 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# z- k# P) l, R& Z' |7 m, U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! U8 M5 p$ k2 _2 X5 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; ?# w1 _: a- Q/ G' r4 g7 ]2 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# c% k1 n/ k; Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. W- e' C' o2 w+ g; }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 E! ?8 t* g3 M5 o. e: N& f1 n* s4 X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 S; `  \- x: A$ c; s* g. U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 ~. j# \% U6 ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! c* D6 D/ q6 l7 V- i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 G- \- H7 T4 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ~+ |8 m' E( F  ^& P8 Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 q5 ?# ]; `9 g& J. v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* G- m/ D9 [+ U7 U  j" Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& b' ~! |& G1 {% y$ Z: y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ l) k4 @: K" P- [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. Z" U- l. o) K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ V& H. q0 Z% R, G* Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>