【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; s( d2 {6 G0 r* z$ |2 B) SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ^) ~, ?2 a* u# z9 N1 }5 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 `2 \+ ~, [* R+ n- rSeeing the sky content with its love
0 t, y* F- Z: I5 B4 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ y3 X, \0 S. r4 I2 x2 }: a$ r8 G4 q& rYou needn’t fear anything
" p7 }8 Q' b4 i4 d: v, c3 IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ D/ s5 G: W7 JI really want to know just how much you love me
4 ^. K& {. f& NI love you I love you with all my heart
. M; m& n3 s3 {. d" E9 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. L9 i( f# g3 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, r2 z, ?4 A9 T! r/ L: zI want so much to see inside your heart
6 t; N3 q; @& V( p& gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! m) z  }" N* U. n- }2 OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( W' E" W, i- @1 O; {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 e. }4 I: J: Z7 j/ p- z$ e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* n. f9 r9 n) u% |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" b! F- |3 @+ ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 H( `# F$ z8 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 @7 Y4 o  z; ^9 ~5 ?6 K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" B' _" U! T5 ?" ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* R6 ?( w* l1 j0 T8 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  A- k! q5 i$ N+ v6 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 h$ \7 ~6 \5 t& d3 B% p5 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% Y7 ?$ U( S# u# ^$ I+ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' ^8 `% r. J( i/ r) N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) `$ y, [* }1 m8 }8 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ z% i5 `/ s* M: k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; z. x1 h+ o: I/ ]( y; T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# g& f* a) o4 f) \4 R" J4 Q* F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  `" p9 S: `! ?3 [+ _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" m# H. O' _4 X6 ~  z1 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" b' `, n3 x0 h6 v/ X. n% ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% T) M7 Q& a4 \: x- T7 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 X- J2 Q. v8 s& T9 g; c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' _, s* G  i% b' P' Y/ G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 [- X* M% f" ?# r9 v$ R2 y9 ?) |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 o' K8 ^) e5 C/ }+ Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) }' t" c; v2 o7 Q9 Q* E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. O5 J) O$ A" ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% k( I6 Y$ m0 {4 U$ U$ W% B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>