【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  x! P- @0 g$ M5 V: r3 f$ ?  G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 d6 b* G& Y/ P, L3 N! tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. a0 c) @3 ~+ @$ DThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 a( P8 ?  b- _+ [+ d' pWith the moon kissing it every night
7 [; M) _" f& Y: \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, L6 Q, x; w. f! U5 p& |/ a3 QEvery other word you utter is love
4 S/ b( l7 T! f$ ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  }8 g/ T+ o' Y  K9 F6 oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- p1 f' z1 {0 \+ ~+ z" ~& n" eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% H  k) @0 A4 l  k- z' AWith such a tongue as yours,
, g. m7 J) B% ?" Z& mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- g/ K3 E! e3 Z6 R  ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% A6 b) _+ K: p* }4 c; r  h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# w) D, h+ x2 o/ c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) W) I* |3 w7 x- R# D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 o% U5 ]1 f7 x; J9 \# x. X. G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 a$ Q/ {' E% d+ y5 I& T9 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& ?! u; i# i3 q, X3 I& U5 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 ^: E$ t5 E3 U& C: q  a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ q$ n4 X- L7 T* ^( n, V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' p% g6 A! P3 {, ^# R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' B# l! a' S) w8 l* _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* c/ F7 A' E9 ?7 E3 j) J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ Y+ `! M5 w8 A! g: z- A$ S5 @4 Y6 a% U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 N6 h+ `  R+ |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 |; x# X' i2 z) F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: N# a% }8 u( C2 i, u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" n' Q& c9 [8 `2 z* r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  L& Q4 D- `  x: T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ m& r# {8 r' D# {( `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ S- A7 K5 Q* j# c/ |% A# u# }* s  D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 |& i; o  P# A- l<P>I regret not dying</P>
! E  |7 G7 L8 S/ r+ g9 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 g4 A) D% M: B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 U: c9 k2 q3 C6 E& r7 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  f' D) ~0 ^/ w) Z: k! E* s+ O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% u( z& B5 g+ g; G3 f% F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 J: ?5 \$ j/ J) U: @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* Z7 `/ y% W7 e: I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>