【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 K9 O7 v8 v' dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. o  {  q, s3 e1 QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 j. o0 P, [5 h$ ?8 H" Y' O6 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( v" X/ o6 _" KThe sky is happy down to its soul
- }! F! X+ s. D8 b9 M  D3 yWith the moon kissing it every night
7 j9 ~& f' ~- B5 p; i% ESeeing the sky content with its love
8 d) V5 U3 J( i9 g3 @" J% AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& n$ I, u6 p8 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) e. s7 [+ t& FI want so much to see inside your heart
8 a+ `  M* B! I% x* Q2 w+ qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, A1 B2 i" E5 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  u7 C2 @$ f8 w  L, r: {I regret not dying
% `+ o$ t1 b+ z+ ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 u% |* |+ G3 m) X5 J6 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; ~9 ~1 y3 L4 ~2 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  g+ n% R9 B- v2 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 A- t5 l1 n/ P; x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) C% T% _) ^% i9 i- E7 ?$ F2 J. K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% l: x4 c4 n. ^8 d/ @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ i* m1 V: `8 x9 y9 n; F6 D( {/ M2 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 L, A, K. V" R1 U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 J- ?" e0 L- y8 i, R* B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' W, m, K8 U' @+ y8 ?1 T' P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 H0 b! F& x; I; v# {/ o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' S  y2 o% G- g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* ~! G7 n# B1 @0 D" W; o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 n4 k" Q( \2 j5 M% f% B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 K; R! `; k! ^# ]1 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ @4 V) w6 q# K9 @# v6 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: s) S6 Z, g0 G  Q9 g! Q0 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# c; Q- A  D: y3 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* X" s# e6 J$ _  m9 f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) O1 y2 {9 _+ L; d: j) K/ o( W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ c. Z2 }5 E' b- ~7 m( y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' g4 p3 M% M& P, s2 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- @) f& W7 S6 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% |( P. a" t% K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  b1 D$ p; ]( f. i; p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% z/ e% \! u( H" c5 H( W7 w5 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 i) A- O+ M- W; g4 u  B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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) N. q8 {# c2 p  H1 w" X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" M& C; `3 {& z' y1 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>