【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 G& y4 [1 m  Q* l3 ~, t歌词我附在后面。
+ n4 n+ u5 b+ H2 ^8 F  M" YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 H9 ~4 t/ ]6 l: n3 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 a$ y; I+ d% P, pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- C! Y) k3 w" N8 h% SWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; x! D1 E& C: U8 d( T7 H8 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  G3 ?$ L" Z0 O# S- D- DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  E9 X# v$ r5 c2 b3 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 K" A  V1 `( iI want so much to see inside your heart
9 w* Q2 d3 o% w  N  II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& B. i0 F/ [) Y2 a4 I, vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ `( x6 Z4 n9 r0 [6 B$ L4 u3 A# kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, j& ^# }- O/ B3 L% x0 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: j, d& H4 D% ^0 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- ]' }. A3 h0 ~8 }1 e; F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( s8 U5 u5 x: v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) N% p6 Y' r) z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 C+ ^( `) K! T, b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% K' t: T2 F, y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 y+ G4 Z& r3 y4 `, e- c6 H0 C) e# [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) h' W9 }& E9 F, G8 [1 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! V- _" S+ m+ [, c) U% i. T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ E& J# Z. {' R9 h1 x) f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 ]' V) o) n0 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 G; a5 Y4 E( k# {, A) m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 h: U9 ~8 g6 X( q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 I8 T6 I! L$ s: p$ g0 [- m5 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 i  h" g) g, R$ X8 r0 {: d( t9 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, r/ m/ A! S7 `$ N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) g5 x# v( t' k7 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 ^) u0 l7 d  R/ P. L, Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ i% l% A/ n% S( I3 s- X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ N3 k3 @8 P7 Q4 ~' ?5 z. C# x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 L3 i$ a. j% X9 W) A7 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( s# @5 S6 I3 [; x+ f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 n3 z0 L7 f  U+ y6 Y4 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 g. [' m' p6 \3 T6 e( j2 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; R( `+ T3 j4 V9 a: f+ x. u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, {# ^6 l. v0 L# g) ^# Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>