【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 |' X! z4 j* h8 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& q9 g& y1 R- Z) s, i& cThe sky is happy down to its soul
& l5 F, x: y) IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, Y% s1 j' B, H2 g. \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& M& V  K) M. P% F( {3 d% TYou needn’t fear anything
" P: ]0 z. t( [* V  sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: H: W7 o9 @, dI really want to know just how much you love me
" l3 J7 v9 K; y+ D  `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) H$ D8 j" ]) \2 h% L4 aI want so much to see inside your heart
8 v5 _  n/ E, c2 {8 A( `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 e$ U+ I* P8 L+ W, sI’m still filled with fear
9 A7 F) `2 b8 ?, [0 s7 q$ iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 C: |0 X. d; KI regret not dying
1 W. I+ c/ w$ m6 G9 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. s! y; c3 }& dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. s1 L. ~( `9 z7 m6 d, M$ _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 m0 j( S4 X2 o  @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ O& A- M* ^$ I3 x5 ^; R5 I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 [* {5 Y* {% z/ N# l4 j6 ]6 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& e3 Q% ?) T" Z$ @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 |9 p2 x3 O/ d9 t  K0 @( T; R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 t$ d. ~! Y9 u( _7 G: d2 ~0 s3 Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" a: M) r& A5 ~: ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  H9 C+ k% E8 w+ V! a/ P8 K3 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" V( K' ]8 l' b+ v! ?2 _2 P; ^2 g1 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# H8 D  q! j6 V- p% J3 G$ ^/ g* b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 v# C! _- B, j- a5 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! I9 x- t& @, O$ ^/ o0 O! v; ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 B0 b5 |5 |2 O7 l6 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) Z) [5 E: n6 U4 @6 d2 w) Y" \/ F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* [# Y! k0 n+ d* i8 Z2 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 i1 ?# u% u- s1 A* g( p1 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ O$ y6 V, j$ d* N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 X. ?; Y- q' ?& l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. [3 I$ E" Q6 W% M" H  c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 h, |% R' X1 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ z9 X+ E4 F2 e: O4 C& c1 Q6 b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" |1 N3 Z2 O4 x! o4 x9 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 v4 `4 A. }' J& Z* b' R) e6 q" |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>