【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) M0 w4 l$ Q3 [# u, a4 c. ]6 T' nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 l0 c) ?+ z, Y7 K5 W; @The sky is happy down to its soul
: L- w- _/ Y  Q( E4 x. ^/ F" ?% |With the moon kissing it every night
3 O6 D0 d" z" g7 c1 F8 U4 oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; [7 J( u  N% _: z4 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 |2 ~$ h' N7 @1 W: OI love you I love you with all my heart
7 |1 t* I6 @0 V: Q$ l5 {. V( sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 [/ e  b5 T/ G  d& u1 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ }7 n& h$ p" tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) m/ D9 Q* j  c& T1 l: \& _2 I2 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 n0 M6 j0 C( F* {8 V& u7 T" DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; ~  ?2 i' x0 [$ W/ kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, S+ t7 i* w4 O0 I& W1 N4 F# E/ i% @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' q; P! X& M; V* X+ c% n, A4 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 {  }( g+ O$ z, A: q& I8 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 `3 U7 o3 a5 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* C' q* S( s! H& p) w% {# ^( L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% Y: R. h' X+ F7 X% P4 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ P* a9 ~* y* ]0 i2 _2 E3 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 {" w! i4 z" l- k/ c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 a( ^% S) L& a9 F' B5 k3 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  v7 F' q7 _+ E$ f! b, x4 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( V; E8 G1 U2 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. z3 p0 |0 y! Z& d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 \& z; U' l% z3 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 F9 B9 A2 m8 Z1 Z- ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. j0 a0 q( g7 G* M+ ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 `/ L) e  Y2 V7 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, H( N2 b6 ]; U. }9 b7 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% e8 ], L4 H' L8 {$ K4 v1 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ S! y! K8 y1 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; y$ C+ O6 L$ z  z* a; n; u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( a! e  f7 s; d9 E* o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. Z3 ]1 c7 w, N% F4 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ W( q# t6 e! K2 ?5 z; B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 @; Z7 x" D! A+ d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) W: |" A2 |- S8 [( `( x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' l3 ~" ^, [. i# S& c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% o0 H& O. j$ F% J3 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 \* n* x' O/ }5 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ H% V! d7 M& F2 w: @; ^% p" x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 N: G# I6 X4 n! k$ g: X0 l, s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. e3 }% w" W; x: B" l) u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 H- F8 e* C2 L/ B8 H% D! n* Q/ l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>