【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 \0 `& |, V" W% o; KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% a5 ?: u  c+ k6 i, [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* |& |# ^. j; fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% ~* i3 ?. Q6 W6 ^* SI love you I love you with all my heart
% w, F2 {2 [5 ]Nothing can compare to my love
- _* C. m! x& q) s' eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 p3 z5 C: F. D  |8 y8 x# z7 t2 Q+ k& jI want so much to see inside your heart
# Y1 S+ ]. C- t% B9 x3 J- ^: XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. i& R* U  K6 p9 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! I' ]; |4 i6 z  R6 GWith such a tongue as yours,
0 W3 c' I* o. j- b) S9 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% Q  R6 @8 [# F! E: X  GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 j1 R7 x% T% G% H8 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" _) F3 Q) ~$ b) V# O, ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( D5 O; h1 \! G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ V/ M$ v* C# ?3 {+ }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, }$ ^9 L. ?5 `; g/ l- g) |  t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 o8 i& ]' h% v( T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' D) I4 H1 Y( F5 R$ ]<P>你无需担心</P>
& M6 \, g9 s  V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 j2 T# A5 |% g; e" s! M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 r. X3 C% O2 I, u% V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& @  P/ w) m2 C  Y7 G2 F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, i6 _$ r% t* e2 ~: v# H9 J( R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% A( u3 r. b1 R# [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 z2 e8 D' e$ y  }5 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ `4 H" P( z+ ^% h$ W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 y* y4 B5 j$ r. R" M2 ]2 M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& L+ k* {8 o$ ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 N" O6 U) ~1 B) y% V( E/ W<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ ^' f  i; H9 j: V( m. X) |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! `9 s$ q, V, W4 J+ A& |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* M' G% W9 t; q9 P$ K* o. k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" b0 X# M6 Q/ s5 R" d9 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 y& X' O( s7 D% @& H7 z+ F3 u& t% |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ]  p) B4 Q2 r" A6 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ x6 r/ a3 C+ @0 W3 P3 P$ `+ M; @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  D& |' F& r, ^( H3 U# _1 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>