【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 J1 }6 U& ]5 {3 t歌词我附在后面。
- d6 N) |8 N( o. O% C7 G  ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
, f: ?7 l4 v* I; j- e% V3 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ d7 C3 z8 c% h9 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! X! R0 u' z0 `8 A, S/ ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 c0 m, t. A  R( lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; r; {1 K7 t1 fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  D1 i- j. J3 W) N$ N7 ~& \I really want to know just how much you love me
& ?8 P+ `% Q8 ]( m/ U9 i2 \I love you I love you with all my heart
7 `' d1 P8 G. q& ?) L3 `( D6 XNothing can compare to my love
" \% d) Q4 I$ Z  V" rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 v) ?. [- W8 E: o% s+ i# vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. z# M) N. A$ o1 y; w3 R; M9 FI’m still filled with fear
8 V9 Y5 U7 o' J! B- z6 wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! T% _# K1 R( y' n+ m5 n% B) `1 ]+ mI regret not dying
8 ?- p5 x3 F. L1 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  S3 X) O0 W% V( VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* ~" O5 ~. K/ u2 k( r+ _; o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 A2 Q1 _7 i3 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 ?6 }% t% W: k! c/ x) f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' W; G+ ?3 l3 `/ @' ^- i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* {- I; d/ X. l7 ~* k- H1 X3 m* F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; N5 N' h: K' T* W3 x+ M8 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 R# c2 T. {# g) t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& G3 V+ M) z) M/ @  O% k6 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 t" t* u1 F8 v4 v1 @3 U4 u6 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 ?1 r9 {( q) @$ ^& i7 B, ^0 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- u1 c. Y3 n8 M. W. t& S% n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ P7 ^' V$ t- y0 S* r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- @1 \, T/ N4 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( w2 Q, A) }* Q, V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 n& l$ |8 g" S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) W: \0 o* O' ~5 R3 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 `. V8 |% R5 g+ y7 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: m; w) w0 j9 O+ X0 S5 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 y* X, H5 U4 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* Q2 A/ i; `' C! m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 W3 }4 E$ N& o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 E! z! c7 ?. o. n3 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, ?" K/ \; G& \/ Y6 C2 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& i2 L  m9 [' s# b8 u* i& }. X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 I3 o6 h: a: f* L& [' D& O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" i+ ^! l' v& r  j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% w3 G! [; ?1 ?. T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- d' V- Z) S$ k2 a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>