【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
" I& q6 g2 G; G1 o$ k0 ]* PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! S, u/ L& i2 V1 u+ b& ^* jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& l% u2 F/ e$ G% J8 f! b4 rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: t* Z- P$ ?  ]4 b5 vI really want to know just how much you love me
; u" \0 D7 h9 E$ _# o  MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ s+ T6 ]% D8 I# v! Z+ S# fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% l' Q" D" Q7 A/ z5 n" S6 d7 @8 fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 r, z: M4 ~* W# f: K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 s1 c( {  V8 Y* v1 t5 b+ D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, P$ F9 S% j  a3 @( V" W4 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 k. |' t/ ?: P- c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' M. r) J5 W: t, N. n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- L: j2 i3 y0 Q- W  @% p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; J2 J# V; ?0 N6 \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ E- w  ]* {" S3 n! r<P>你无需担心</P>
4 b0 Z9 U1 W9 ^0 G; C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& K. S( Y: k  Y7 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) K! e  ~, M  Y) |) z$ l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ C/ {  ?: D. p) T6 v6 V8 J5 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ X5 b4 Q- E8 X+ z$ ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. E: y; M% b  ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 ~9 s: @" Q2 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 [; Y1 X- X4 [. C$ Z% ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" j7 `* b! c# I5 v0 {% J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' |) u" [+ ~* m! i% h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 i, l* l) S8 ^  G9 y/ G; ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! Y( M) J7 F: T2 ]$ j! N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# _/ n9 u: ]: m! c. ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 x' k  k8 D# }0 H+ r' Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" ]5 K* M4 ~6 U: E3 L, a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 l4 Q. k; X" k9 h1 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. T; ?+ W- r) d2 h6 {/ X7 u# d* s" V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ E$ L6 U3 m7 R0 {) N/ \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 V+ G* P; z1 K# p$ K3 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* c: z9 m- I+ D8 m! r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ K3 g, L8 ]4 g- g3 v$ U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>