【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 R0 ]: K/ Y, p: B$ sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 p2 }. F: L5 f2 t3 ~, RThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ _6 P# G7 D/ N; y2 }' y9 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) }# e# m% Q* l  D- z. \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 v6 R) r- M9 Y" U& hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 Z0 N( ]1 H" K6 a$ k# s% zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 j: X# m3 q2 }; m: `8 ^$ x+ IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, w3 q* |$ {) R& v  u) D- {I want so much to see inside your heart
( C0 _' C, M/ }7 t( c( J  uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' r# T9 u; }$ _8 O9 UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 V, O9 _- K/ c0 b6 \) {5 J2 i. h6 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 H1 g2 O7 ~$ L/ RWith such a tongue as yours,
% {. ?) Z4 z& E5 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- T- q5 R* l3 D+ d4 J; kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: F5 P( v7 c) \6 O3 a) E# v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 @9 O3 t6 }/ ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. U$ ]3 I/ U( }3 N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 v( N7 R2 A8 k. P1 H8 r( ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ V6 h3 y4 o* f9 J8 J7 I# F, ?7 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 N; `: g# c9 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ^# ]. \7 q1 W" B# F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ ?7 g; y3 r9 k; A# C) J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ N+ k3 a! N7 T5 [+ \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 ^2 i% t: X# u" d/ y3 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- @* g* \4 A; o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; m4 p& I3 J! M7 D7 ]4 I8 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 Z8 n. C5 X8 t9 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! u% t) }" p" R+ N/ S" q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; r, c# ^0 x5 K5 H$ p! J. i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 x0 }/ H  t* ]) ^  a5 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. S/ q) S5 W! k/ }7 n: v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  p7 {& g8 n9 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) w' n. p3 m4 g/ N" ~. k; w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. w# D1 u3 k5 h+ I- r/ E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* y/ F. m- r; ^( g% ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 [) D0 z, j- F4 b; S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& T& l9 X( Q7 B4 v  ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 u( k  V4 }& N# H# Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# l1 G/ b) I+ ^8 G  c! ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 J6 r; t' h; s- \; [8 `2 @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: h2 i5 U8 A) q9 h: L" d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ m0 d  h! {9 K/ O2 m+ y5 [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, a1 r5 G; I% T  D1 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  W) S. I) O3 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>