【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 |5 a; J' n8 e1 p( }: GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ I* O  {( K) u0 }; H; H. bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* _0 n/ V; ~& J7 m& e2 e( jWith the moon kissing it every night
5 ~2 [$ k/ i' Z) f3 e7 sSeeing the sky content with its love
9 W' e* i- V) p5 t, x+ p' c; jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: L8 U+ J+ [6 Q, _# K" r% |Nothing can compare to my love
/ R* |, j; b! v$ y5 Z& wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, P# F4 K: H  Y- g  i: xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 h7 F" R4 b, y8 V1 d/ A1 F. XI want so much to see inside your heart
3 p" d, Y: v& A0 I1 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. C* z7 E! [9 t6 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 L* O. Y' ]' F( U  SI regret not dying
) j5 o' S! L5 E, tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) z. X5 H/ I) |# HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* O- \7 f# S; a2 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ u* z0 y/ J2 _. ?3 W* X; ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; s9 y6 D/ Q. c0 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' _& r: v; T" a! h7 v0 N/ H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 Y9 L8 o) K6 `/ Y; H3 W0 h7 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ V1 c- b: f1 C1 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) D. u5 J/ `6 |: j7 e1 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& X5 a' H5 D$ F4 r' A, B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: H$ Y: Q% y: L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ i: ?  R# w) b  L! e+ N' G9 @0 ^: z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 @; ?6 J' ?, V* X+ u" n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( X! F. ]2 p5 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ d* n, E5 Q1 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 ?' ^; N, Q3 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 h2 |& }5 Z- T3 C( p% X) R. m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 V3 ~# L# u) z+ O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' @8 k5 r8 s* C& s! h6 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 C. d3 s* w+ W6 u$ H3 E7 Y# J6 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% |8 e9 A: |! `+ Y$ G7 ]. r0 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 u9 e: \# e0 S  }, t! }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 o  n6 [* o! [9 }3 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* C+ g; r9 ^; A: i9 B3 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* E& x2 R% P$ {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>