【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 G- P9 x8 O, `9 V6 N9 r4 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, J+ ~9 v- y" r* w- j  cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 y* Y( z+ n/ M* a( p4 u/ q- m& @" [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ U& @; Q0 O2 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 `$ @2 n& s+ y  c# S( tSeeing the sky content with its love
+ p5 C, B7 K+ |! i) F6 YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, S% @* E1 B; u, U8 l" `2 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ I3 m# U/ t3 C2 M6 i, {I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* u4 G3 @1 d. E' V* s" TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" e2 W7 o( x- P# ]2 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 S' K' @0 k6 G9 v# n6 sI regret not dying
/ {5 C/ T/ N9 b# e7 ?1 }! xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ b1 b# Q0 W# u8 A( `: RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* W* D2 i! e+ Z9 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; z2 x" G" Y7 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 ^5 b  T: b$ _2 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 {; \$ g4 D9 O3 L4 y: r& @) ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! J! R9 M3 w( m, \9 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# N- J! {: H, s4 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 i" ]/ I9 c7 e, N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( Q6 m! r$ I( l! P( ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; q7 p2 v4 v/ b2 g$ I- N- ~+ _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' k+ u: D% K& V* n2 B, X( y% \1 ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 m4 `! S0 D: {8 E! `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 H; D% a& \, m* Q; q. ?- M8 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 p% s$ L& p6 k. @$ k, Y0 t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' z8 d6 U; L8 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: W" Y5 |5 `+ r, W* C0 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* x6 {/ A; Y8 T; H  w) u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' B" s' w# A' K5 W" y' c: v0 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* {. j( ?' G; ~' R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 Z' z1 j6 E. a% Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: n5 u% v! U  x  `& m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 e- H, C4 d7 m; X+ }* Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' G6 @* `2 e0 M8 `+ f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 w4 u! |+ _3 d* _! E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 N9 ]! J. |8 N& F5 K0 I9 }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 q* Z" `- d7 _0 U& \+ S  r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 q" J2 f8 A  Q0 y7 G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 q7 q. L" N0 u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>