【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 p2 Q. ]  Z) z/ _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# o. d! E" i/ d5 C; L9 d5 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 i2 h# Y: p2 L( y4 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 h; p) |7 m/ [: RSeeing the sky content with its love
4 _& Y6 t. g% Y6 e5 Z* s; K. s) E- DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& }* W( i: ]# b5 l1 ZYou needn’t fear anything
* l# ]7 M: I1 k4 l5 X( d- TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 {  \" S8 s# NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. h) p7 t5 }- }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) _/ p# \# \: g- b" w. FI want so much to see inside your heart
: r4 d$ c! \$ q0 K$ w# F" HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' L5 T% ~* M5 a! yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% U0 S4 {% u! y1 ?8 c3 wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( X' i, H" l, T, [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; X  k- e$ Z  lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ X8 `( c; m8 w0 H, [: Z1 p3 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, o$ {9 v" M3 }" i) y, f9 Y# t1 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ l8 ^& ]; ^; L; ?9 S, ~; @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 S  E4 ?( {. Y) E4 ?, L) M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 m/ ]! D% b: G8 X5 C3 ~  V1 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ~" t1 [/ j$ n8 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; D* |! @+ c+ D& K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, K# s& {  e% G* r# v# i9 t) z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& i& Y) v: d* t$ h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 B9 ?" `2 w& e5 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( g% @7 g4 ^  h8 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 j2 Q9 z7 R# ^3 D* Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 P# ^+ Y# I& W. m3 Z* Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ^7 y) v$ p0 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& o9 c8 M% k- M4 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Q! z& h' D3 w& D8 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 h/ X" B0 q# z5 B* a# l+ B) [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 n; l$ J' N6 R: m& S% t2 D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  o% G! [2 T: }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% x. ^+ A. u1 t! |0 `# u' Y1 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 L" d7 u# f, d  N; ~, P' U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! S7 t* U' X% f7 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 F! k; p# H. b- _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, R7 H' P4 H3 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  `& ]: o9 a9 Z/ ~. Q: q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' q2 L7 b! m; c+ o. c) T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. u5 Q. Q$ ?- I; f4 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 H, H! g: h. e9 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# s% }/ B/ n& K& [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 G. {9 W; N! c6 ]# u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 I9 m% U! L+ @+ M# |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 ^% ~2 U3 x/ f) l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>