【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. I9 L% r, {1 O% j' S0 F( }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 L  m+ ~. ]1 X& J+ WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, i3 Z5 N: f# r8 \6 mSeeing the sky content with its love
# J0 P4 @/ z+ K# ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 w8 P8 h9 d* OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" S2 h0 W7 T7 A7 ]# wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 W$ K5 ]$ n# T0 X0 pI want so much to see inside your heart
  L9 d$ ^0 ^: @/ c* SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" N3 A! I" _; DI regret not dying
6 B. d9 B4 v3 J7 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: F2 v6 x. j  @1 a1 M& {' [5 WWith such a tongue as yours,
3 v" o- }0 i: j6 L6 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 l$ C  c! s. p" m( P9 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( \" l0 c* v1 j9 Z  I9 V2 r9 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 z4 l1 e  q5 o1 W; F& N) a0 j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ p  U5 \9 R5 e: z6 W  Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: t8 Y4 o+ M! M8 b# L! u3 c% `/ o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 `1 L- _6 X  q3 K( U" \2 H! A: U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 e0 l& b, h5 V) }8 {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 Z4 B+ \2 R$ p% d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, t/ [% |0 R1 n( Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  w/ \. Y+ {9 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ `% s$ I: J, ?) l: A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 p6 W: G' X, I7 d+ O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' V3 R1 w7 a: n. ^1 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* I, w# _% N; |' y. v% z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ a% z2 A, q( ~/ `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 N: ?- W% `! t9 S) E1 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: `7 S6 u% A3 x3 Z% W9 D0 z3 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 X$ a9 K2 _( C7 J: v1 c/ `9 W- h( A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  `, c2 L, a9 A* Q/ Y/ J<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ N5 e, x, O3 w6 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& J4 C& _3 {, b/ T% r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ F& i) q) p/ g. g6 u( f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 }; `# x4 M, a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 |9 |, \' E( A0 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>