【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& S7 y: l6 O+ L* B. c歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 I3 M- _5 U1 h) U# v' B* l7 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 Z* O5 M( @0 p% T  ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( b6 v: ]' @' R5 R3 x' O" uWith the moon kissing it every night
3 o  T5 _0 x, ASeeing the sky content with its love
7 ?6 J: ~/ N1 ^% a" C+ SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ K/ |; h4 G0 D1 e! W: fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- a( n' l6 v( A' \0 VI love you I love you with all my heart
' O# _. f5 f! u! s7 h& kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* s2 f! ]5 {9 z  \" f9 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# i3 s! y- t7 y% R4 o: B  i" N) G0 CI regret not dying
8 R; j1 M/ |" i% Y, q$ xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- L0 v0 V2 i1 d1 `! L9 BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" e' _0 v3 m: _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ k5 [4 E/ V/ k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. w. ~  h  o: r9 d' r% t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 W7 l* d3 f0 {% F3 k. d2 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 Q% Q( o& N' ]7 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ q3 K) f- Z1 n& z6 Q0 m2 J% ^" T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 `; t3 a/ x, ?2 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! h* H5 y- o2 [; o+ K4 Y  [; V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 ^# R9 e8 n* f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; L/ z& t9 I" N3 P; I5 N7 m: W- T8 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& m7 j% @6 n8 m0 R1 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ U& F6 G$ r( V$ Z" Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: o9 r* d+ R" ]- t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& |3 s6 r7 T* b' V/ S0 J& D6 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" d7 [# a( N) o- S' L% ]5 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ c; v$ r+ Q! j- h2 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. A% D; t0 S% y: e6 ^7 J% Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. N; J4 e/ k! m. b4 |% D& E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 p9 ?. Q% `) B4 [" C<P>I regret not dying</P>
# L" Y( q2 Z$ y4 q6 v" Z+ o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 O% }" h7 j* I$ I5 k& b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- `0 g& Y3 c) l5 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: y5 Z7 V$ x! L% e( \/ R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 e' z& w/ _7 N% A0 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& `6 B5 q6 i: G1 _& f8 @) {2 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 N- H3 `! p) s- j) }$ r1 v& E# p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 a3 d5 ^& D* `  l  ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 X" s  T" H6 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>