【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

* H2 ^: U0 r. T' H6 A( JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( u# v8 R" m) T8 i, o% R) ~/ k1 L; gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

# f, J2 u, e& m% y- `( y我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
4 T$ ~" Q9 R, ^5 p" X8 B我愛你  
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" o' H3 h- K4 m0 D9 bFrom the first moment we met,
) Z  \$ P5 `7 H& fI already loved you with all my heart
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, X! H# Z3 V. Z在遇見你的第一刻
! V6 I# o7 L- ^3 w: z! v+ v你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

6 J: V( t" s- |  }9 B$ oWe meet and talk everyday,
* u- b% w/ ]5 y$ t. l6 I! qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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1 u% g& k7 Q% I3 p縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 P9 y8 }" ^3 }凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
, L) e3 m: x1 i" x3 c7 i6 `( ~7 w& `( H我也許就能了解
& n6 N; v! e! S( l" V6 Q9 x# G你的心情
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8 W& a4 O/ K1 q7 Z& E. CLove… just the word love
# B/ h7 Y2 Q* U7 O$ z! R  l( tWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
0 {1 \' x5 Y, G6 G1 g為什麼
如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
7 l+ X/ e. h$ V! V你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
) g+ M$ ^" A8 j7 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
8 w+ C) G. \0 q# J. ^. i8 H  `# k4 {讓我向你表白
# H! H, [- G" ]. Q; i我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

) F  C+ @3 n- q. K; W, a! x1 N8 J不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
3 c* C, n. Z2 ?; b) PEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

$ K9 l; a# ?5 `, E" o% o$ |Love… just the word love
$ }6 ]1 f3 S( f# RWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

5 J! l$ k4 B1 p$ u1 u7 GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
' W9 ~( y6 u3 `! z8 _卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
. R+ P7 j6 u7 t7 Y8 f你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
) A5 M. L8 b  r7 ?8 c8 ~我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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3 r' B& M- ?- G( dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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6 n% a: n  }/ w5 Z- b9 O, z可否讓我托付給你?
5 d& X3 Y9 k1 V1 s* h( c托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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/ G' L4 F$ J$ Q" p; w9 mCan I entrust it to you?
- l' f  e4 w! K" `& [2 H$ ^7 ]Entrust my love within your heart
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2 a) P5 c9 j9 E* U3 O5 d# o' a可否讓我托付給你?
0 K9 _0 j& ]( l" T+ t. X; r托付我的愛 收在你心裡


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对唱曲参赛译稿
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! {% \0 \- \" D- t% `% R' r* xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 I$ Y3 u8 A) vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

3 {5 o; H2 q0 c1 l$ V, t皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
' F, C, x# g; m- h我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

7 q3 a% g; r4 r: F. d3 p月光映在我的眼底
+ s' @5 [6 F3 w7 Q  Q- q月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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$ d" U  Z1 `$ E8 i6 l3 ]It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

- Z( g; P/ i4 Y) X5 _. G2 S1 p我心卻充斥著憂鬱
3 B# U( f" c. H( l害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

0 S, O0 `4 S. `! j5 K9 hYou needn’t fear anything
( p# [! I& ^3 I* LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

" u6 b# q) Z1 `/ z- Q你勿須擔心憂鬱
) z9 G+ G/ q! p! b我心充滿著歡欣
3 ?, I$ P  _  C  D9 ?3 W愛你
堅定不渝

% q/ t( Y* C  p% m# uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
' o6 E) b# ^, K8 j  u, f- ~我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
* _2 U) f, U1 H) O2 t, qNothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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7 u3 K$ X/ I+ x2 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ ?" R4 F0 j3 d整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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* K/ j- u$ r; M" E3 mI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

; U, T  ^7 g" _9 v我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
$ p$ V: p- y3 Z  g, g, u/ s% Z! l0 I來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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" L1 i5 T, Z, H9 ~2 t+ H我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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, g2 p5 T) M) q0 x7 W5 jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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! b; n) t& m" n- a8 @  r可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
! t5 ?9 ~; `6 Z/ O. T& G( `/ q遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
3 g8 Y% u9 b: ], B% U/ H2 U你的言語都跟不上

4 B- n, m$ _! pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
- ]) v: q3 g/ |! X5 K; a% j9 S) G" _' t千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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# e0 r. ~  b4 J訴說千萬個
3 G, q# Q% B- a5 r5 ?8 F+ O; T愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
+ r# X# H9 E6 S9 C9 cxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒