【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
1 Y1 P2 ~/ f. ?( C# q2 j袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) s3 i; b1 g( L6 f# e( e  E1 wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

$ S9 K- n! R" V* j, @' m5 x0 r在遇見你的第一刻
/ {6 F) _7 Q0 P$ p$ D( `你已經深深的佔領了
* p0 ^% V6 X" s" k! \9 s; y$ T我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
" l3 H2 p* _. t0 [  ]還是不能肯定你的心意

2 d9 m4 y3 R! y* uIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, h. M5 `9 u* B7 m6 B/ t* ^凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
5 {5 s( J. s9 }' k  s5 v我也許就能了解
7 }0 A+ N" ?+ l6 z" r- F" n% I/ E你的心情

" ]3 X, h& z* U' d% QLove… just the word love
. S" _! p- P- q7 [& A5 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
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4 h" @% z0 l' B. D! c愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
$ p! \1 D$ q- B! f1 K# N2 O; v2 V, M卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
0 S3 J% h+ c) t# R; ^2 c# H# \8 O" DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
3 @& n% t; a% w9 i7 }3 \讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ B' k' ~+ L' y5 j5 }可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

" |" [4 [) j# j* zLove… just the word love
$ J& q+ [  R+ B, l4 FWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
/ {  f" B6 z/ d4 [. ^- g為什麼如此難以表白?
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3 D* w$ v. U" r6 L9 BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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. W2 d& T- ~; EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
3 X/ s$ [% {1 ~$ x' n. @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ {  H$ p' u, Q( u, v
) {0 |# H/ K4 Z5 G1 N2 m希望今天還不會太晚
4 ?4 _& U0 Q" Z讓我向你表白
1 S# E  H' n6 ~% _: [我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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: g5 j1 X, y! L# z: {不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
, F3 F7 ~7 z& B6 S托付我的愛
收在你心裡

" v% B# |4 j$ m! e. p+ d6 JCan I entrust it to you?
8 n: f& X4 O; y6 O5 Y' k# VEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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5 H! f6 _- |* a; c) J对唱曲参赛译稿

% B2 U) Q3 Y1 W8 O3 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 w) X# h5 D8 d! g( A* F' ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
# J: @; L" m; b" M/ N, B' B' y0 R4 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

3 }5 V. h) A) r3 W$ K皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
$ i, X& _6 ]; F1 A% p* g凝視著星空
: |! `* `- j% }% l" J1 B1 J我心充滿快樂

" {! q4 @1 i9 @, KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ J& J; y5 C6 @% U/ CWith the moon kissing it every night
! M! n+ W# i7 A+ nSeeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
  a0 L, `  `0 f; T月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
* v4 X$ S4 H- L星空充滿著歡樂

1 L* ^( q" g' I" TIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

7 m) A4 a' |/ v( ], I- M# w我心卻充斥著憂鬱
; L8 l0 c, w4 S% F( k9 |5 ~' N害怕我們的愛
" R4 o3 q/ v% o& L終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
" a, R+ G: c) h- L: W" c  CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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' V2 V5 Q1 A# N你勿須擔心憂鬱
% {3 I) P  Y) t0 Q我心充滿著歡欣
0 m* @4 p9 I: d愛你
# Z2 H4 C+ c1 ~( B堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

' ]! W* W1 H: {* s6 Y4 L& }& o你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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7 t. e; V  N7 c, |2 o# [& j3 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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. @/ l7 m: s# t2 c* [4 ~# jI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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6 z2 E$ \- |: g: r" n) X: b, h2 k我歡迎你將它打開
) }' G3 C4 F9 A) F  G, ~我願意用生命
) S, f' Q5 {( w6 I來證明我的愛

$ b1 t" X7 E( w3 Q, @2 m% }! l2 {; sI’m still filled with fear
: `  |0 c9 w* f& ?- Q& G* DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
$ f# @9 G$ y  ?It’s nothing close to 100,000
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- |2 b0 z( ~( K; [1 q/ w+ Q可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

4 M6 K$ P1 o7 G, Z* C9 x1 I這樣一張巧舌
) d/ |5 ^. I0 D9 e你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
* Y3 G4 i  q+ \0 n/ d我將對你訴說
1 G* X5 q" O& p& ]" s3 F3 A千萬個心思
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2 G9 V4 A9 i* p1 d! B6 L. j2 YRambling on about a thousand words of love
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9 b" I. H$ T0 f訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
/ x& a" W2 f+ p4 P1 lxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

5 V& s" B4 d- U1 W" z5 k是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒